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mahanga khilouna

« on: July 06, 2008, 09:04:55 AM »

Ek mahnga khilouna, kharida tha maine,

Socha tha machlega ise dekhkar wo,
Socha tha rakhega ise sahejkar wo,
Socha tha bahlega, khelega isase,
Socha tha hans dega ise chinkar wo,

Mujhe usne dekha zara muskaraya,
Fir mere pass jaise wo douda sa aaya,
Nanhe se hathon ko mujhko thamaya,
Godi me meri aake khud ko chupaya,

Wo mahnga khilouna, sisak sa raha tha,
Usne “usase” pahle mujhko chuna tha,
Bana mera seena fir uska bichouna,
Wo bhi bhula khiloune, mai bhi bhula khilouna,

Unkahe usane mujhko sabak ye sikhaya,

Gar de sako to use waqt dena, use pyaar dena,
Wo bhar dega khushiyon se badle me tumko,
kabhi uski anboli bhasha samjhna,
Wo shabdon se bheetar taq bhar dega tumko

wo ruthega tumse, mana lega khud ko,
tasalli se azab si wo bhar dega tumko,
khuda khud hi aaya hai aangan tumhaare
apne haathon se anmol kar dega tumko

khiloune ki dookan par fir se khada hun,
kya doon ab use, kash-makash me pada hun


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #1 on: July 07, 2008, 11:20:06 AM »

wah kaya baat hai sanjeev!! bahoot hi acha likha hai apne... kamal ki baat hai ki kisi ne koi comments hi nahi likhe abhi tak!!

bahoot achi tarah se apne itni gahri baat apne kavita main itne sadhran shabdo main samjhai hai...

Kash yah baat her father ki samjh main aa jaaye ki bacho ko unka waqat dena kitna jaroori hai!!

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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #2 on: July 07, 2008, 11:27:17 AM »

shukriya pooja ji.......


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2008, 11:47:20 PM »

bekarar ji,

sabse pehle main kshma maangta hu -un logon ki taraf se--jo is panne tuk mujh se pehle yahan pahuch kar bhraman kar gaye hein aur chook gaye is kavita ki saraahna karne se.67 views and 1 reply on this thread is regreting.
kher,aapka manobal majboot hein aur itni saarthak kavita aapne likhi uski badhai.dil ko chu lene waali panktiyaan he.

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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #4 on: July 09, 2008, 11:58:33 PM »

wah kaya kahu,,.. last line . wah....

do waqat apna, apne bacho ko
tumse bad kar koi khilona nahi
banao wo yaadein unke sung
jin se bad kar kuch hona nahi

uni nanhi hansi main bhool jao dukh
unke sung kheilte bhool jao her dukh
wo hai, bas wo hai aor unki bholi baatein
unke sung, jee jaao, zindagi ke suche pal

thamo unhe kabhi dugmugane do
kabhi totlepan mai unse baatein khud ko karane do
thamo hath, aor batao ki tum ho yaha
jab bhi dugmagaoge, paoge tumko her kadam per wahan....

her khilona hai bekar, tumhare payar ke samne
her khilona hai bekar, tumhare waqat ke samne
her bhawna hai bekar, tumhare pyar ke samne


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #5 on: July 10, 2008, 12:07:46 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 09, 2008, 11:47:20 PM

aapki housala afzai ko mai slam karta hun icon_salut

nazre-inayat banaye rakhiyega...sukun milta hai....


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #6 on: July 10, 2008, 12:10:32 AM »

Quote from: sarthika on July 09, 2008, 11:58:33 PM

thamo unhe kabhi dugmugane do
kabhi totlepan mai unse baatein khud ko karane do
thamo hath, aor batao ki tum ho yaha
jab bhi dugmagaoge, paoge tumko her kadam per wahan....

bahoot sunder jawab hai...sarthika ji.......


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #7 on: July 10, 2008, 12:14:13 AM »

vishwas unke ko kabhi dagmagane na dena
kabhi apne gumo ka unko hisaab na dena
phool hai wo, bas khilkhilate rahe
humari bagia main, sada muskurate rahe


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #8 on: July 10, 2008, 12:35:02 AM »

Quote from: sarthika on July 10, 2008, 12:14:13 AM

vishwas unke ko kabhi dagmagane na dena
kabhi apne gumo ka unko hisaab na dena
phool hai wo, bas khilkhilate rahe
humari bagia main, sada muskurate rahe

ati sundar saarthika ji.


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #9 on: July 10, 2008, 12:36:59 AM »

thanks Prateek ji


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #10 on: July 10, 2008, 12:50:19 AM »

wowww bhaiya bahot hi sundar rachna..Mahanga khilouna....
bahot acha laga ...


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #11 on: July 11, 2008, 02:27:36 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 06, 2008, 09:04:55 AM

Bahut achhe aur different subject par likha hai aapne Sanjeev... Applause

Waqt se keemti bhala aur kaun si shai hogi duniya mein, aur hum uski hi ahmiyat ko nakaar dete hai..
Jo kavita jeevan ke najdeek lage, woh dil mein bas jaati hai, kuch khaas yatan nahin karna padta usko samajhne ke liye, bus isi tarah bahut hi aasaan shabdon mein ek gehri baat keh di aapne..

Likhte rahiyega.. Its always a pleasure to read your thinking.


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #12 on: July 11, 2008, 02:35:29 AM »

is thread par aapke deedar to hue......tahedil se aapka shukriya shikha....
sach kaha aapne waqt se behtar kuch nahi jo aap apne pariwar ya mitron ko de sakte hain..
chahe kitana bhi keemti tohfa ho kisi ki jagah nahi le sakta.....lekin wo bhi jaroori hai....lekin waqt dena pahle aur khiloune dusare kram me...


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #13 on: July 11, 2008, 02:40:56 AM »

bekarar ji bohut hi sundar rachna hai aapki

gar waqt har maa baap bachon ko dei paayeinge
to wahi kal ek ujla suraj ban chamak paayeinge


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Re: mahanga khilouna

« Reply #14 on: July 31, 2008, 01:59:35 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on July 06, 2008, 09:04:55 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!
aapne har ek baat itni khoobsurti se kahi ki baar-baar padhne ko jee karta hai..bahut khoob likha hai aapne...
maafi chahunga ke bahut der baad aapki is khoobsurat kavita par nazar padhi..


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