"MAJAK NA UDANA"

by k.shael on May 19, 2008, 10:48:43 AM
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DOSTO AAJ AAP SABSE KUCH BAATTEIN KEHNA
CHAHTI HOON,
CHAHTI HOON KI AAP LIFE MEIN KABHI BHI
AISA NA KARE....PLZ REMEMBER ALWAYS....
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KABHI KISI SACHE AASHIQ KA DIL NA DUKHANA....
KABHI KISI KI MOHABBAT KA MAZAK NA UDANA,

KABHI KISI KO THOKAR MAT LAGANA....
KABHI BHI KISI KO AKELA CHOD KAR MAT JANA,

KABHI KISI KO BARBAAD NA KARNA....
DUSRO KE GAMO PE KABHI KHUD KO AABAD NA KARNA,

KABHI KISI KA PYAR NA CHINNA....
KABHI KISI KO GHUMAN NA DIKHANA,

KABHI KISI KO CHOT NA LAGANA....
KABHI KISI KE JALE PE NAMAK NA LAGANA,

CHOD DENA KISI KI HASSI KE LIYE APNE
AANSOO KO....
PAR KISI KE AANSOO PAR GAIRO KO MAT HASANA,

KABHI KISI KO PAIROON KI JUTI NA BANANA....
KABHI KISI KO APNE DUSHMANO MEIN NA BEITHANA,

ZINDAGI MEIN KUCH KARNA NA KARNA DOSTO....
PAR PLZZZZZZZZZ KISI KO
MOHABBAT KI AAS DEKAR THUKRA MAT JANA....

KISI KE DIL MEIN REHKAR USE BHULA MAT JANA,
USS DIL KO JO TUMSE PYAR KARTA HAI DUKHA MAT
JANA....






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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2008, 10:57:51 AM »
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Bohat khoob k.shael ji .... Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2008, 11:04:33 AM »
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THANX SOOOO MUCH,
HONEYROSE....
U APPRICIATE MY WORK IT'S MY PLEASURE,
I HOPE U FOLLOW MY LINES WHICH I WRITE,
IN "MAJAK NA UDANA".
I EXPECT U FOLLOW....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2008, 11:08:29 AM »
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THANX SOOOO MUCH,
HONEYROSE....
U APPRICIATE MY WORK IT'S MY PLEASURE,
I HOPE U FOLLOW MY LINES WHICH I WRITE,
IN "MAJAK NA UDANA".
I EXPECT U FOLLOW....
BY. K.SHAEL

Sure its a great work by you k.shael ji
Really nice thank you..Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2008, 02:24:26 PM »
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Good Thoughts K.Shael.. Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2008, 04:00:29 PM »
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bahut hi umda likha hai aapne shael ji.. her 1 line dil ko chu gayi.

koi aapne pyaar ko yu chodta nhi hai,
khud aapne pyaar ka dum todta nhi hai.
per majbooriyaan aisa kerwa ke dum leti hai.
aadmi ko zinda marwa ke dum leti hai.
aapne pyaar ka gala ghot ker sehte hai
khud aapne janaje per chup chup ker rote rehte hai
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2008, 05:26:22 PM »
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bahoot khoob k.shael and dost kavi ji!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2008, 08:18:01 PM »
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Bohot khoob K.Shael and Bhondu
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2008, 02:37:59 AM »
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k.shael ji bohot achha likha aap ne....
Ham yaad rakhenge is nasihat ko.
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2008, 02:43:09 AM »
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bahut hi umda likha hai aapne shael ji.. her 1 line dil ko chu gayi.

koi aapne pyaar ko yu chodta nhi hai,
khud aapne pyaar ka dum todta nhi hai.
per majbooriyaan aisa kerwa ke dum leti hai.
aadmi ko zinda marwa ke dum leti hai.
aapne pyaar ka gala ghot ker sehte hai
khud aapne janaje per chup chup ker rote rehte hai


Bohot achhi or dard bhari peshkash he aap ki.
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2008, 03:37:49 AM »
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bahut ache..k.shaelji..bahut khubsurat rachna rachi hai.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2008, 05:59:07 AM »
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HI,FRIENDS....
THANX SOOOO MUCH,
HONEYROSE....
MAHIYA....
BHONDU JI....
POOJA....
CELMIRA....
SAYYID JI....
& KHAWISH
THANX 2 ALL OF U FOR APPRICIATE MY WORK,
I HOPE U ALL FOLLOW THAT LINES WHICH I WRITE
IN "MAJAK NA UDANA".
PLZZZZZZZZZ IT'S A REQUEST....
THANX AGAIN....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2008, 03:37:24 PM »
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bahoot khoob k.shael and dost kavi ji!!

pooja ji thanz bt. aapse sirf appriciation nhi reply maangta hu.. taki aapko thoda aur.. pad saku (kya karu tamanna khat hi nhi hoti)
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2008, 04:39:09 PM »
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Dost Kavi ji, app kahege to likhne ki koshish jaroor karugi.. magar ajkal kalam, shabd, bhawnaye chah kar bhi samete nahi ja rahe hai ...

Dil hai kuch udaas udaas’
Man hazaro sawal liye
Shabd sochu to nikal jaaye ansoo
Her ek boond, hazaro dard liye!

Likhne ki chah main
Her bar Dubdubaai yah ankhia
Man mai jhunjhlati kash-m-kash
Murda zisam se Zinda sawal liye!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2008, 04:47:49 PM »
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kya baat hai? mann bahut udaas hai.srry!

kai sawaloo ka jawab nhi hai.
uske ehsanoo ka hisaab nhi hai.
bahut chaha tha humne"shayd"aapne ansoowo ko,
isliye pyaar ki buniyaad nhi hai.
jaan gaya hu zindgi koi khwaab nhi hai.
jaan gaya hu zindgi koi khwaab nhi hai .
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