My First One

by raiees on August 05, 2007, 01:59:16 AM

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raiees

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Hi All,
This is the first post of my life. if you appricate it then I will write more otherwise..... Puzzled !

Din achche hon ya bure badal jate hain
Zindagi ke har daur guzar jate hain..
Jo nahi bhoolte rab ko, apne aiqlaaq ko
Voh hi to is zamane me kuch kar jate hain...

Please comment, advise, suggest or ask me not to write... :?


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Ricky

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My First One

«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2007, 02:04:28 AM »

Hello Raiees..
I was regularly seeing you online on Yoindia since last few days and finally you made your first move. ie. your first post.

This one is nice start, rather if it is first one of your all time then it is very good considering being first one. You will sure do nice in future.

PS: Do not forgot to give your intro in Introduction section.

Also, It will later get moved to "Parastish section" as it is referring to Almighty directly.


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2007, 02:15:19 AM »

Fantastic Starting Raiees...Keep it up.....!!!!


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raiees

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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2007, 02:17:20 AM »

Hi Ricky,
Thank you very much for appriciation and encouragement.
Yeah I have just written a few only but I get assistance I will surly write more.
I will give my intro in introduction section

Thanks once again

Thanks Badnaam ji Usual Smile


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Talat

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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2007, 02:24:27 AM »

Welcome to Yoindia Raiees, a good one...Keep it up !!


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raiees

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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2007, 02:33:37 AM »

Thanks Talat ji Usual Smile


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Rajbir

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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2007, 04:52:37 AM »

Raiees

Kya baat hai bro. Nice start !

Chaa jao ab aap yahan apni shayari ke saath. :D

Ricky, Gaurav, Talat

Good company to Raiees. Will definitely make him feel at home. :D