Reeti:Shairi - E

thycreator

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Manav ne riti-riwazon ko anchaha bandhan mana hai,
Gairon mein khushiyan dhoondh raha, apno ko na pehchaana hai.

Wo maa ki lori kahan gayi, jo sapno ko mehkati thi,
Wo pyar bhari meethi thapki, dil ko thanda kar jati thi.

Wo behen ki rakhi ke dhage, wo nok-jhok wali batein,
Ab raat o din ka sath nahi, na rahi wo meethi saugatein.

Wo priya se chup chup ke milna, sasar ni nazron se bachna,
Chupke se unko chu lena, chori se unko hi takna.

Ab naya zamana aaya hai, sab riti-riwaz bemaani hai,
Kehne ko sari khushiyan hai, pr har dil mein pareshani hai.

Bhai-bhai mein pyar nahi, rishton ke naye maayane bane,
Do kadam bhi sath na chal paye, jeewan-sathi aise chune.

Kashmakash mein har insaan yahan, kuch bhi samajh na aaya hai,
Thukrakar unn riti-riwazon ko, humne kya khoya-paaya hai.


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Pooja

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Reeti

«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2007, 01:34:12 AM »

Very true creator ji.... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!! Good job!!


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thycreator

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Reeti

«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2007, 01:41:27 AM »

Thanks a alot pooja ji,

Sacchai hai ye jeewan ki, Insaan ka koi mol nahi,
Paise par dunia chalti hai, Imaan ka koi mol nahi,
Har chiz bikau dunia mein, kya husn, ishq ya hui wafa,
Paise ki takat ke age, ab bhagwan ka koi mol nahi.


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Rajbir

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Reeti

«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2007, 01:59:44 AM »

Bahut ache thycreator =D>

Very true !


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thycreator

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Reeti

«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2007, 02:27:01 AM »

Thanks again Raj....

Wo wafa se bhara jahan yaad karta hu,
Laila-majnu ki wo daastan yaad karta hu,
Ek zabaan pe kat gaye jane sir kitne,
Wo ishq ke farmaan yaad karta hu,

Ab wafa-e-ishq ka ye aalam hai iss dunai mein,
Sab kuch bhool kar bhagwan yaad karta hu... Winking


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Reeti

«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2007, 03:58:26 PM »

Accha likha..

All are nice !


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Pooja

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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2007, 09:20:32 PM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

very true Amit!!!

Good work!!

waiting for more.......


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Reeti

«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2007, 11:29:20 PM »

Thanks a lot Ricky n Pooja.....

Ye naya chalan hai dunia kya, Ye nayi reeti ban aayi hai,
Mere dukh ka mujhe malal nahi, tere sukh pe chinta chaayi hai,
Aage badhne ke hod mein sab, ek duje ko peeche kheenche,
Seedhe raste par chalne ko bhi, thedhi niyaat apanayi hai...


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Reeti

«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2007, 11:49:10 PM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Infact today I was discussing same with some people..

Again nice work !


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Reeti

«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2007, 12:03:38 AM »

Thanks a lot Ricky,

Kya karu bayan ab aalam hai ab mausam hai ruswai ka,
Apno ne jab loota humko toh gum kaisa tanhai ka,
Jin par ye jeewan hom kiya, jinke liye ab tak jeete hain,
Wo hi aaj hain sabab bane, mere har jag-hansai ka....


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Pooja

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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2007, 12:10:31 AM »

wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot hi acha likh rahe hai app creator ji!!! Good job!!


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thycreator

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Reeti

«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2007, 12:19:24 AM »

Thanks again.....kitni bar kahu apko....itni bhi tareef acchi nahi hoti...........

Wo nazar se bat keh gaye, jab juba ne sath chod diya,
Mere hi aansoon ka rasta, mere hi dil ko mod diya,
Thi bat chalenge jeewan bhar hum hath mein lekar hath,
Bade naazon se unhi hathon se, unhone ye dil tod diya....


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Pooja

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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2007, 12:30:03 AM »

Chord kar bhi koi chord kar na gaya
Uska sadma ajj tak is dil se na gaya
Darta hai yah dil, saanse ajj bhi kaanp jaati hai
Chala gaya wo, magar uski dehshat ka asar na gaya!!!!


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thycreator

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Reeti

«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2007, 12:36:59 AM »

Wah wah....kya bat hai....sahi hai...gud going

Wo raat kaise beeti hai, tham tham ke,
Aaankhen rahi yuhi jara, nam nam si,
Aaya nahi wo saudayi jispe ye jaa nikalti hai,
Ragon mein lahoo bhi dauda, jam jam ke.


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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2007, 12:03:19 AM »

Amit... I am really out-of-words... Usual Smile

Sach kadwa hota hai, yeh suna tha... lekin isko meethaas de di aap ne apni shayari sey.... :D
Bahut khoob....


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