Reeti -Panna 2:Shairi - E

thycreator

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«Reply #15 on: June 09, 2007, 12:05:03 AM »

Thanks Shikha ji....kam aap bhi nahi hai...abhi abhi padha apko.... Usual Smile


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Shikha12

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Reeti

«Reply #16 on: June 09, 2007, 12:17:41 AM »

POETRY DELETED BY SHIKHA....


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thycreator

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Reeti

«Reply #17 on: June 09, 2007, 12:24:34 AM »

Wah wah Shikha ji.....

Dekhta hu, sochta hu aur phir dekhta hu main,
Har pal yahan insaan girta ja raha hai yu,
Kehne ko har chiz mehngi ho rahi hai din-o-din,
Insaan ka hi mol phir girta ja raha hai kyu...


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Pooja

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Reeti

«Reply #18 on: June 09, 2007, 12:42:54 AM »

wah kay abaat hai... Shikha ji and Creator ji.. dono ne hi bahoot acha aor gahra likha hai... Good job!!


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Reeti

«Reply #19 on: June 10, 2007, 11:53:15 PM »

Thanks a lot Pooja, khushi hogi agar aap bhi kuch likhen yahan....... Usual Smile


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Reeti

«Reply #20 on: June 11, 2007, 09:31:13 AM »

lijiye creator ji.. ek koshish meri bhi yaha per...

Rond kar aoro ko khud ko vijeta mante hai
Ajj ke yug ke insaan, isse hi jeena mante hai
Asali khushi ko bhool kar, aoro ke dukh per hanste hai
De kar peera aoro ko, khud ko khushnseeb samjhate hai!!


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Reeti

«Reply #21 on: June 11, 2007, 02:38:05 PM »

wah wah pooja ji......

Aaj insaan ki hasti ko khud insaa mitane chala,
Kudrat ke niyam tod kar dunia chalane chala,
Koi samjahye inhe mitne ki rah hai chuni isne,
Insaan kyu khud ko bhala bhagwan banane chala.


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khwahish

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Reeti

«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2007, 01:39:50 AM »

GREAT ONE THYCREATOR..

YEH NAYA CHALAN HAI DUNIYA KA
YEH NAYI REET BANAI HAI MERE DUKH KA MUJHE DUKH NAHI
TERE SUKH PE CHINTA AAYI HAI.....
GREAT LINES
BAHUT KHOOB


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Reeti

«Reply #23 on: June 12, 2007, 01:46:55 AM »

BIKHARNA,TOOTNA,BAHAAR
AANSE SE SAATH BI REHNA
SITAM BI KARNA AUR WAFA
KE SAATH BI REHNA
TERA ANDAAZ AISA HAI....
ANDHERO KI KAHAANI MEIN
JALAANA KUCH DIYE BI
AUR HAWA KE SAATH BI REHNA


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Reeti

«Reply #24 on: June 12, 2007, 10:08:55 PM »

Quote from: "khwaish"

BIKHARNA,TOOTNA,BAHAAR
AANSE SE SAATH BI REHNA
SITAM BI KARNA AUR WAFA
KE SAATH BI REHNA
TERA ANDAAZ AISA HAI....
ANDHERO KI KAHAANI MEIN
JALAANA KUCH DIYE BI
AUR HAWA KE SAATH BI REHNA

Thanks a lot Khwaish ji.....ur lines are amazing.......

Dil mera tod kar dunia se sada muskurati hai,
Har ek gum par mere sabki khushi jhilmilati hai,
Na jane kaun si ranjish ki chalan ho gaya aisa,
Sabhi ke jaan mein aaye jo meri jaan jati hai.....


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«Reply #25 on: June 13, 2007, 04:40:48 PM »

Quote from: "thycreator"

Manav ne riti-riwazon ko anchaha bandhan mana hai,
Gairon mein khushiyan dhoondh raha, apno ko na pehchaana hai.

Wo maa ki lori kahan gayi, jo sapno ko mehkati thi,
Wo pyar bhari meethi thapki, dil ko thanda kar jati thi.

Wo behen ki rakhi ke dhage, wo nok-jhok wali batein,
Ab raat o din ka sath nahi, na rahi wo meethi saugatein.

Wo priya se chup chup ke milna, sasar ni nazron se bachna,
Chupke se unko chu lena, chori se unko hi takna.

Ab naya zamana aaya hai, sab riti-riwaz bemaani hai,
Kehne ko sari khushiyan hai, pr har dil mein pareshani hai.

Bhai-bhai mein pyar nahi, rishton ke naye maayane bane,
Do kadam bhi sath na chal paye, jeewan-sathi aise chune.

Kashmakash mein har insaan yahan, kuch bhi samajh na aaya hai,
Thukrakar unn riti-riwazon ko, humne kya khoya-paaya hai.

Nice to see you here.....and a good creation !


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Reeti

«Reply #26 on: June 13, 2007, 11:52:59 PM »

Thanks a lot talat ji.......aap yahan ho, hamare liye garv ki bat hai.........i want u to look at my other new posts critically..........bahut dino ke bad likha hai, jan na chahta hu ki kissi kabil hu ki nahi............... Usual Smile

.....sach batana...yahan toh sab jhoothi tareef karte hain.


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Reeti

«Reply #27 on: June 13, 2007, 11:59:53 PM »

Amit

Hum aapki jhooti tareef karte hain :cry:

Talat is too busy with her research now a days, so don't expect her to be here regularly. Kabhi kabhi mooh dikhane aa jaatii hai to let us know that she is alive and kicking. :D


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thycreator

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Reeti

«Reply #28 on: June 14, 2007, 12:22:36 AM »

Rajbir ji..............

Zindagi ke ye dhaage hain, ulajh jaate hain kabhi kabhi,
Sab hi rah jaane hai apni, par bhatak jaaye kabhi kabhi,
Shikayat hai nahi humko, sabki apni mushkilen hain,
Samajhne ki koshish kar le hum ye kabhi kabhi.... Usual Smile


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Pooja

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Reeti

«Reply #29 on: June 14, 2007, 01:53:13 AM »

Nahi hai jahan per ajj uska namo-nishan
Uss jagah per laut kar phir bhi jaatein hai kabhi kabhi

Hanste hue chahre ko rula jaatein hai khayal
Khud ke dhoko se khud ko rulate hai kabhi kabhi

Na the wo humare na hi hoge kabhi
Is khayal ko bhi bhoola jaate hai kabhi kabhi

Bahoot jee liye, ek umeend per hum
Phir tooti umind ko jagate hai kabhi kabhi


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