Zindagi........?

by paani on July 03, 2007, 01:07:53 PM
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Naseeb walon per hi meharbaan hai tera aab-o-rang e Zindagi
Mahroom ko tu jab bhi mili, barsaat mein dhuli be-rang si mili

Aadmi aadmi mein aadmiyyat sa fark kar diya tune bhi aakhir
uuchi mahfiloon mein aabad rahi, Muflis ko fursat mein bhi na mili

Tere pahlu mein, jeene ki hasrat lekar mar gaya hai fir se koi
Inayaten bhi lutai to aamiron per, Aashiq ko ik rawayat bhi na mili

Fakat jeene ka haq lekar mai jeeta bhi to kase tuze
Mar hi jaynge ik afshos se, hume zindgi mili per zindgai na mili
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2007, 07:23:45 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai paani ji!!! bahoot hi acha likha hai apne.. last line mai sab kah gaye app!!

bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2007, 11:13:22 AM »
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Pooja Ze aapko Zindagi ki fitrat pasand aaye... Hope u would add smting to meri zindagi ..


Bhaut Shukriya.........
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2007, 11:45:48 AM »
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nice effort !
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2007, 12:05:11 PM »
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thanx 4 ur effort ricky...
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2007, 09:25:36 PM »
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bahut khoob paaniji....bahut kam shayri aisi hoti hai jo dil ko chuti hai...bahut ache

JO KAL THA,USSE BHOOL KAR TO DEKHO
JO AAJ HAI,USSE APNAKAR TO DEKHO
AANE WALA PAL KHUD HI SAWAR JAAYEGA "EH DOST"
ZARA ZINDAGI KO KABHI JEEKAR TO DEKHO....
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2007, 10:49:55 PM »
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great one paani..khwaish aapne bi bahut acha likha...ek hamre taraf se bi

ban sako to bano sahara be-saharo ke liye
bano sako to bano kinara be-kinaaro ke liye
jo jiye zindagi khud ke liye,to kya jeeye
ji sako to jiyo hazaro ke liye
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2007, 10:00:05 AM »
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Khawish & Preet bahut hi nazuk likha hai aap do no ne.. khubsurut
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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2007, 02:05:37 PM »
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Har baar tuze khone ki kosis mein kuch bus jee sa jata hun
Tuze pane ki hasrat lete hi mar kyon jaata hu mai Zindagi
Peer  or Dargaah se tuze maang kar jeeti hai dunia saari
un karta katra lekar din b din kyon jeeya jaaye tuze Zindagi
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2007, 04:36:52 AM »
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great one paani..khwaish aapne bi bahut acha likha...ek hamre taraf se bi

ban sako to bano sahara be-saharo ke liye
bano sako to bano kinara be-kinaaro ke liye
jo jiye zindagi khud ke liye,to kya jeeye
ji sako to jiyo hazaro ke liye


aha.. Ishpreet ji .. bahut sahi kaha...
Magar likhte hai sab, nibata kaun?
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2007, 04:39:23 AM »
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Naseeb walon per hi meharbaan hai tera aab-o-rang e Zindagi
Mahroom ko tu jab bhi mili, barsaat mein dhuli be-rang si mili

Aadmi aadmi mein aadmiyyat sa fark kar diya tune bhi aakhir
uuchi mahfiloon mein aabad rahi, Muflis ko fursat mein bhi na mili

Tere pahlu mein, jeene ki hasrat lekar mar gaya hai fir se koi
Inayaten bhi lutai to aamiron per, Aashiq ko ik rawayat bhi na mili

Fakat jeene ka haq lekar mai jeeta bhi to kase tuze
Mar hi jaynge ik afshos se, hume zindgi mili per zindgai na mili


wah Paani... lovely yaar... keep up
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2007, 11:26:10 AM »
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Shukriyaa Roja ji.. aaap aaye aur Zindagi ko read kiya
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2007, 06:34:08 PM »
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Naseeb walon per hi meharbaan hai tera aab-o-rang e Zindagi
Mahroom ko tu jab bhi mili, barsaat mein dhuli be-rang si mili

Aadmi aadmi mein aadmiyyat sa fark kar diya tune bhi aakhir
uuchi mahfiloon mein aabad rahi, Muflis ko fursat mein bhi na mili

Tere pahlu mein, jeene ki hasrat lekar mar gaya hai fir se koi
Inayaten bhi lutai to aamiron per, Aashiq ko ik rawayat bhi na mili

Fakat jeene ka haq lekar mai jeeta bhi to kase tuze
Mar hi jaynge ik afshos se, hume zindgi mili per zindgai na mili


Thats a nice one Paani.
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