सांसों की देहलीज----------------------sheel didi

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सांसों की देहलीज पर कदम रख,
कुछ अधूरे लफ्जों की किरचें,
सूखे अधरों पे मचल कर,
लहू को भी जैसे सर्द किए चली जाती है…
सीने मे घुटन किए चली जाती है…
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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2013, 04:33:55 AM »
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Sundar panktiyaan.Sheel didi bahut  badhai.
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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2013, 05:00:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob didi bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #4 on: December 31, 2013, 03:00:24 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 31, 2013, 03:27:18 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2013, 06:45:44 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2014, 08:48:52 PM »
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सांसों की देहलीज पर कदम रख,
कुछ अधूरे लफ्जों की किरचें,
सूखे अधरों पे मचल कर,
लहू को भी जैसे सर्द किए चली जाती है…
सीने मे घुटन किए चली जाती है…


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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2014, 01:29:02 AM »
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सांसों की देहलीज पर कदम रख,
कुछ अधूरे लफ्जों की किरचें,
सूखे अधरों पे मचल कर,
लहू को भी जैसे सर्द किए चली जाती है…
सीने मे घुटन किए चली जाती है…

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