Aaj Ka Mera Desh -Panna 5:Shairy-E-Watan

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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #60 on: May 08, 2008, 01:31:27 AM »

Roja aur Syed

Aap dono ne bilkul sach likha hai !

Jab takk is desh ki janta sahi logon ko vote dekar aage nahi layegi, is desh ka yahi haal rahega !

Magar kab takk ?


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #61 on: May 08, 2008, 01:42:06 AM »

Dear Mr. Rajbir,
First of all thanks for having a reading break on my poem on today's disturbed situations.
Well, it's not just vote, there has something else been said provided the need of sleepy people's awareness from inside them and on their own.

Thanks a lot

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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #62 on: May 08, 2008, 04:56:34 AM »

First I Honor U For Writting A Topic For Our Nation And Then,.
I Appreciate Ur Feeling,.
But What Rajbir Bhai Is Saying Even thst Is True,.


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #63 on: May 08, 2008, 05:07:16 AM »

Very nice Roja aur syed.. Usual Smile

bohat hi acha likha hai .. Applause


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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they

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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #64 on: May 08, 2008, 09:14:43 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on May 08, 2008, 04:56:34 AM

First I Honor U For Writting A Topic For Our Nation And Then,.
I Appreciate Ur Feeling,.
But What Rajbir Bhai Is Saying Even thst Is True,.

Well, even with that case of voting, my point of view or opinion also imply.
Thanks for nice thoughts Mr. Janasheen.

Quote from: honeyrose on May 08, 2008, 05:07:16 AM

Very nice Roja aur syed.. Usual Smile

bohat hi acha likha hai .. Applause

So nice of you Rosehoney, thanks.


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #65 on: May 08, 2008, 10:56:50 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 07, 2008, 08:59:06 PM

Maoqaa har kissi ko kahan mil paata hai, -
Kasht men to aaj yun bhi saari duniya hai. -

Dekha hai iss duniya ko, par humen bhi kuchh kehna hai, -
Har ungli ke uthhne men bhi ek mahatva rahasya samaaya hai. -

Danga fasaad men bhi dushton ne yuvaon ko bahkaaya hai, -
Mahlon ko pat karne ki konsi kraanti prathibha humne jagaayi hai. -

Kaalak men man jinka Ganga nahaye shudh dikhen hain woh, -
Janta ne kab parivartan ka kaandhh virudh unke bulaaya hai. -

Satyavaadi ko khud bandhuon ne dhakke dekar bhagaaya hai, -
Sansad ko doshit kya karna jab soyi praja ne mat andhere men dala hai, -

Jan jaat padi hai bhooki nangi soti hai footpathon pe, -
Mudhon ki moh maaya ne sankat men bholi janta ko phansaaya hai. -

Jaatpaat aur dharam ke naam par bhai ka hi lahu bahaaya hai, -
Samajhte nahin is shadyantra ko batwara kar desh ganvaya hai. -

(Syed Naami)

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Sach to kaha hai aapne Roja jee.
Par uss par humne bhi kuchh koshish ki apne man ki baat kehneki.
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Cool 1 syed ji.......bahut sahi likha hai aapne.wonderful ji.


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #66 on: May 08, 2008, 11:07:31 PM »

Jeet her jung mein tumhari hoti
Tarkash mein theer-kamal toh ho

Bhulandi aasmaan ki kuch nahi hai
Bershate hauslon mein jaan toh ho

Her zulm ka muhtod jawab hai
Shart hai ki muh mein jubaan toh ho

Nahi behkenge Jawanon ke kadam
Ghar main Bible, Geeta, Kuran toh ho

Kuch nahi milega fir bhi jee lenge
Ser pe khulla aasmaan toh ho

Bathein badi-badi fir ker lena
Dil main pehle desh bakti toh ho

Hum toh usko hi Bhagwan maan le
Bershatein koyi saccha insaan toh ho

Isse jyada nahi hasrat "Roja" ki
Aadmi ki meeti jubaan toh ho


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #67 on: May 11, 2008, 07:21:58 AM »

NIce One Roja Ji,.


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Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #68 on: May 11, 2008, 10:11:02 PM »

Shukhriya Jaanasheen ji. Jawab mein kuch aap b likh dete..


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #69 on: May 12, 2008, 02:27:43 AM »

Quote from: Roja on May 08, 2008, 11:07:31 PM

Roja superb!! Clapping Smiley

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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they

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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #70 on: May 13, 2008, 12:06:29 PM »

Thanks Honey dear


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #71 on: May 13, 2008, 12:15:09 PM »

Jhandon ki numayish se kuch nahi hoga
Naron ki oonchayiyon se kuch nahi hoga
Jhankar dekho gareebon ki zindagi ko
Aashwasano ki mitayi se kuch nahi hoga

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Dharam ki andhbakti se kuch nahi hoga
Karodon ke Mutt Mandiron se kuch nahi hoga
Insaniyat ke liye kuch zara kaam karo
Vastron ki numayish se kuch nahi hoga

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Paschim ke logo yog ke diwane huye hai aaj
Purab ke log clubon main madhosh pade hai
Ulti bahi hai ganga kalyug main aaj doston
Dekhkar bhi ye nazara sab khamosh pade hai

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Paschim ki nakal karne se kuch nahi hoga
Ashleelta ke pradarshan se kuch nahi hoga
Bharatiya nariyon aadarshon ka zara khayal karo
Jism bechne se kuch nahi hoga

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Jana-hith ki yojanawon se kuch nahi hoga
Jab tak ki prashashan main darr nahi hoga
Dhan hi sab kuch nahi hai dunia mein
Insaniyat ke bhashanon se kuch nahi hoga


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #72 on: May 13, 2008, 12:18:27 PM »

wah di wounderful....bahot hi acha likha...


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #73 on: May 13, 2008, 12:56:48 PM »

Quote from: Roja on May 13, 2008, 12:15:09 PM

Jhandon ki numayish se kuch nahi hoga
Naron ki oonchayiyon se kuch nahi hoga
Jhankar dekho gareebon ki zindagi ko
Aashwasano ki mitayi se kuch nahi hoga
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Jana-hith ki yojanawon se kuch nahi hoga
Jab tak ki prashashan main darr nahi hoga
Dhan hi sab kuch nahi hai dunia mein
Insaniyat ke bhashanon se kuch nahi hoga

Exceptional


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Re: Aaj Ka Mera Desh

« Reply #74 on: May 13, 2008, 01:10:25 PM »

Roja

Aaj phir tumhare andar ka krantikari jaag utha Applause

Bilkul sahi kaha tumne !

Keep it up !


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