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BABREE KA DARD

« on: June 30, 2008, 10:07:14 AM »

maine kahee padha kee babree masjid ke tootnee kee barsee aaj bhee manayee jatee hai or ek vishehs samooday ko log waha ansoo bahate hai or na jane kya kya parvachan dete hai unhee ke kuch kaviyo ne kuch kavitae likhee usee ka jawaab dene kee koshi kar raha hoo....

Wo rote hai ankho me bhar ke ansuo ko
kuredte hai apne sukhe hoo jakhm ko,
dikhaate hai gahare jakhm wo hame
Ham n jane kab se sahalaate aa rahe
unhee ke diye hooe gahare jakhmo ko

Wo yad karte hai babree ko aaj
Ham nahi bhulaa paye hai aaj tak baabr ko
Wo manate hai barsee tootne kee baabree
Ham yaad karte hai toote hooe mandiro ko

Sabhee nee dekha tha us khoonee sailab ko
kahi lahor me lasho se bharee rail ko
kahi lasho me lipte panjab mel ko
Aree kyo rote ho badnaseebee pe apneee
Yaad karo us atyaacharo se bhare aurangjeb ko…

Hamne to khwaab aajaad bharta ka sajaya tha
Unkee chaahat ko khudaa bhee n jaan pyaa tha
jo chale gaye the juda hokar hamse…………
rote hai yad karke aaj bhee hindustaan ko……

Masjid, Mandir to or bhee ban jayegne
Par dilo me lage ghav yaad rah jayenge
Kabhee kasak utheegee dil me aapke
Dil hamare bhee toote hooe najar ayenge
Kyo lipte ho un paathro se aye insaaan
mat kuredo un poorane ho gaye jakhmo ko
roWOge tum fir ankho me bhar ke ansooko..

netra....


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 09:50:40 AM »

mera maksad keesee kee bhawna ko thesh pahoochaanaa nahi hai par jo beet gaya use yaad kar ke aaj ko kyo kharaab karte hai hao har dharm me daanv hai to parvardigaar bhee hai..aap danav ko kyo dekhte hai insaan ko dekho..............

fir bhee agar kisi ko dkuh hooa to mafee chataa hoo....

netra.....


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2008, 10:32:10 AM »

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Hamne to khwaab aajaad bharta ka sajaya tha
Unkee chaahat ko khudaa bhee n jaan pyaa tha
jo chale gaye the juda hokar hamse…………
rote hai yad karke aaj bhee hindustaan ko……

Masjid, Mandir to or bhee ban jayegne
Par dilo me lage ghav yaad rah jayenge
Kabhee kasak utheegee dil me aapke
Dil hamare bhee toote hooe najar ayenge
Kyo lipte ho un paathro se aye insaaan
mat kuredo un poorane ho gaye jakhmo ko
roWOge tum fir ankho me bhar ke ansooko..

Bahut accha likha hai aapne netra jee
Her ek line pe dard ka ehsaas dila rahi hai. Bahut khoob
Accha laga aapka is tarah likhna. Yu hi likhna...


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Har Dil Main Arman Hotey to hain
Bus koi Samjhe Zara...

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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #3 on: July 07, 2008, 02:25:12 AM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on July 05, 2008, 10:32:10 AM

Bahut accha likha hai aapne netra jee
Her ek line pe dard ka ehsaas dila rahi hai. Bahut khoob
Accha laga aapka is tarah likhna. Yu hi likhna...

thanks soniya ji kisee ne to is dard ko janaa or reply kiyaa
thanks again.

netra....


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #4 on: July 07, 2008, 02:29:20 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on June 30, 2008, 10:07:14 AM

Bahut Khoob likha hai, Netra Applause

Quote from: NETRAPAL on July 01, 2008, 09:50:40 AM

mera maksad keesee kee bhawna ko thesh pahoochaanaa nahi hai par jo beet gaya use yaad kar ke aaj ko kyo kharaab karte hai hao har dharm me daanv hai to parvardigaar bhee hai..aap danav ko kyo dekhte hai insaan ko dekho..............

fir bhee agar kisi ko dkuh hooa to mafee chataa hoo....

netra.....

Bilcul sahi kaha aapne... Bahut achhe khayaal hai.. notworthy


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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #5 on: July 07, 2008, 02:37:31 AM »

Bahot khoob likha hai Netra ji...


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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2008, 06:28:58 AM »

thanks Mahiya ji and poonam ji for reply

netra....


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #7 on: July 11, 2008, 01:32:29 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!
Maafi chaahungha ki itni achi kavita par bahut der baad nazar padi..par aapne bahut hi sachai aur jhinjod dene wali kavita likhi hai...bahut ache netraji..aapki soch ko salaam karta hoon,bahut khoob


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Bahut Pehle Se Unn Kadmon
Ki Aahat Jaan Lete Hai..

Tujhe Eh Zindagi,
Hum Door Se Pehchchaan Lete Hai....

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Re: BABREE KA DARD

« Reply #8 on: July 12, 2008, 10:43:18 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on July 11, 2008, 01:32:29 AM

bahoot bahoot dhanywaad sir mere khaylo me jo ayaa maine likh diya par dar raha tha kahi ise samprdaayik rang n dede log

thanks again

netra....


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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