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« Reply #15 on: August 09, 2006, 10:10:51 AM »

Bahoot Khoob Udita And Welcome To Yoindia,..


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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« Reply #16 on: September 07, 2006, 01:26:38 AM »

Quote from: "BHONDU"

Quote from: "shayara__udita"

mujhe garv hai ki main hu ek aurat,
usse bhi badkar garv hai ki mera desh hai bharat.
bharat ek aisa desh hai jahan auraton ko devi ka darza diya jata,
aur bharat hi wahi desh hai jahan adhiktar auraton ka balatkar kiya jata.
ek taraf school-collego me ladkiyo ke liye special reservation rakha jata hai,
dusre taraf ladki ki nabalik awastha me shaadi kar diya jata hai.
ajeeb se kuch rasme hai,
bharat me hi jo dikhte hai.
aurat ko agar beta huya to usse zyada khushnaseeb aur koi nahin,
lekin galti se gar ladki hui to-"kalmuhi,tu mar kyu nahi gayi".
arrey!chodo yeh dikhavat,
har bat me milavat.
do auraton ko unka asli darza,
hai humme itna dum ki utar denge apka sara karza.

bahut aachi kosis hai udita ji... per shabd hum bhi kehna chahenge...sehmat ho to reply dena asahmat ho to virod kerna..

humko garv hai ki hum bharat vashi hai.
kuch cheeje hai inki jo ek dum avinashi hai.
mana ki aurat devi hai ghar ke kaston ki taran hai.
per jitne jhagre hote jag mein aurat hi unki karan hai.
kuch ko abla kaha gaya aur.. kuch ko shakti kaha gaya.
saath badi jub mardo ke usay atirokti kaha gaya.
shadi ker ke bete aapne hi dukh ko bte hai.
sab se zada jhare kyn ki saas bahu mein hote hai
ladki ke sarir ka soshan ho to her ghar mein jaana aata.
aur.. ladki ladke ka soshan kare to balatkaar nhi maana jaata
kya kare hum desh ki is vyavastha per hum hersh.
per phir bhi dil se kehna perta aapna pyaara bharatvarsh

kuch is tarah bhee hai

maa kee roop me dekhaa thaa unhe
ek devi kee chavi thee dil me oonkee
par raaj jo khulaa unka
ek lash ban kar rah gayaa mai.


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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.

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« Reply #17 on: September 07, 2006, 11:34:36 AM »

Nice One Again Bhai,..


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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« Reply #18 on: September 08, 2006, 12:47:11 AM »

good one netra pal ji..


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« Reply #19 on: September 08, 2006, 03:09:09 AM »

Nice Vichar!! Nice Post !!!

Before blaming the situation today,we need to see the source of problem,
We always have respect for woman in india....wherever indian will go thier
heart always bits for mother.Only problem is some people with wrong tendencies are

doing evil things with woman.
Once Vivekanda said,Ideal of womanhood in india is Mother..and Ideal of woman in

other courties is wife...so treat woman as mother....empower them...educate

them...many many poor,ignorant woman are living at every corner of india...atleast
educate one woman or support her..help her to bring light in her life...
Are we really contributing to the society doing good for woman,poor people? Huh?

many of such woman are looking at you...testing our humanity...its god in poor women face..watching you....asking you for help...

Its really great..woman are educated and doing great to the society...
but other picture we cant deny is..
many are fighting for rights only..instead of doing good for poor woman..
some are there but with little extend....
Bharatmata is calling those educated woman...who has great spirit for this country...
who want leave some mark behind......

Posting here two stories about how we treated woman in history.....

Indian have never indulged in such a shameful act.
When the country was under the domination and rule of Marathas,
this kind of event never occurred. When the fort of Kalyan was won,
there were 52 Muslim women in it.
Shivaji treated them with great respect and had them escorted back to their menfolk.

Cheemaajee Aaghaa, at the conquest of the Warsai fort,
had the lone Muslim woman taken prisoner there,
given a suit of new clothes and sent back to her people.
We have always protected the life and the honour of all women irrespective of whether they were our own or those of the enemy

Muze lagata hai maine jyada hi bol diya hai....
if any harm thing in it...i am really sorry...
i written this with open heart..thats all.


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« Reply #20 on: September 09, 2006, 06:52:02 AM »

Good Ram Sagar,..

Accha Bayaan Diya Hai,..
Iam With U Yaar,..

Ye Shayari-e-watan Hain Ismein Watan Ke Baare Mein Jo Bhi Related Hain Khul Kar Bolo,..


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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« Reply #21 on: September 11, 2006, 01:08:09 AM »

Thanks for your support Dost.........


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« Reply #22 on: September 11, 2006, 03:45:08 AM »

Its Ok Yaar,..
Dost Bhi Kehte Ho Aur Thanks Bhi,.


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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« Reply #23 on: September 11, 2006, 05:52:18 AM »

Good comment dost....

Wo wakt gaya.....
wo daur gaya.....
jab do kaum ka naara tha.......
Jo log gaye ees dhartise.....
jiska matlab batwara tha...............
aaaaab ek hai sab hindustani.......
aaaab ek hai saab hindustani......
yeee jaaan le saaara pakistan.....
haaa....haaa...ye jaaan le sara jahaaaaaa..................


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« Reply #24 on: September 11, 2006, 09:05:51 AM »

Yaar Is Mein Watan Ke Naam Lekar Kuch Kehna Manaa Hai,..
Aainda Se Dhyan Rakho,..


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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« Reply #25 on: September 12, 2006, 12:43:32 AM »

Sorry Yaaar ....Good suggestion.......

this is poem of Sahir Ludhiyani....U meight be known...
I forget to mentain the name to write below the post......
I liked the words and i thought to post it here...
If its against yoindia rule ...i am agree and accept it..

It is not the anger feeling of any other country but
feeling of poet thats all.

sare jahan se achha hindosta hamara......

Hind deshke niwasi sabi jan ek hai..............
rang roop wesh bhasha chaye anek hai..........

Again thanks for kind ur suggestion dost...


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« Reply #26 on: September 12, 2006, 04:48:01 AM »

Yaar You Can Right The Name Of the Country And Say the Greatness Of It,..
But No The Weakness,..

Nice One Yaar,..
Keep Going


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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« Reply #27 on: September 14, 2006, 02:38:10 AM »

NAHIN HAI BANNA MUJHKO DEVI
NA CHAHOON RANDI KAA KHITAAB
MUJHKO BHI BAN KAR RAHNA HAI
SIRF EK INSAAN

INSAAN JAISE KI TUM HO
JISE RAAT BHAR BAHAR RAHNE PAR
NAHIN DENA PARTA KOI JAWAAB
JISKE BAHAR NIKALTE HI
KOI USKA PEECHA NAHIN KARTA
AUR BHAI KAHNE SE PAHLE
CHARACHTER CIRTIFICATE NAHIN MAANGTA

KISI KO BHAI KAHNE SE PAHLE
TUM KYA ITNA SOCHTE HO
JITNA SOCHNA PARTA HAI
KISI KO BAHAN BANANE KE LIYE?

MAANA KI TUMHARA BHI HOTA HAI SHOSHAN
PAR TUNAHIN NAHIN BHUGATNI PARTI
KISI KE SOSHAN KI SAJAA
JAISE MUJHE BHUGATNI PARTI HAI

MAANA KI LARTI HAI SAAS
APNI HAR BAHU KE SAATH
PAR KYA ISKA BHI KAARAN TUM NAHIN HO?
TUMHI NE TO BANAYA HAI YE RIWAZ
KI BETI KO MAAN KE PAAS NAHIN
SAAS KE SAATH RAHNA HOGA
AGAR HO JAAYE ISKA ULTAA
TO KYA LARANGE NAHIN
SASUR AUR DAAMAAD?

TUM CHAHE KUCH BHI KARO
TUM EK INSAAN HO
PAR AGAR MAIN BITAAON JINDGI
SAMAJ KI TANG GALIYON MAIN
FIR TO KAHLAATI DEVI HOON
PAR AGAR HO MERA SHOSHAN BHI
CHAHE BINA MERI MARJI KE
TO KAHLAATI RANDI HOON
AAJ TAK IS SAMAAJ MAIN
HOON EK JAROORAT KAA SAAMAAN
DUNIA WAALON YE TO BATAO
KAHAN SE HOON MAIN INSAAN?
KAHAN SE HOON MAIN INSAAN?
KAHAN SE HOON MAIN INSAAN?


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« Reply #28 on: September 14, 2006, 06:45:55 AM »

Bahoot Khoob Ranjeet Bhai,...


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Jo Larda Tha Sipaahiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aisa Bharat Mein Koi Badshaa Na Hua,.

Rooh To Hogayi Thi, Tann Se Judaa,.
Haath Talwaar Se Judaa Na Hua,.

_____________-A Salute To Shaheed Tipu Sultan-

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« Reply #29 on: September 14, 2006, 07:32:35 AM »

thank u


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