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« on: May 05, 2008, 11:51:09 PM »

Raj thakare ko jawab dene kee koshish

लुटा लुटा सा दिखता है मुल्क मेरा
बेगाना सा बन गया है मुल्क मेरा

जो मुल्क सारे जहाँ मे लहराता था
वो भारत, भारत  माँ कहलाता  था

लूट गया है जो आज वो अपने लाड्लों से
हो गया है छलनी अपनों के दिए घावों से

आज माँ के ही लाल लड़ रहे है
कही कही  लड़ते है राम के नाम पर
कही अलाह और रहमान लड़ रहे है

छेत्र और जाती वाद मजहब पे भारी है
महाराष्ट्र यूपी बिहार की लड़ाई जारी है

कौन कहता है भारत हमारा है
आज कोई करता है नाज यूपी पे
किसी को महाराष्ट्र ही प्यारा है
कहता नही कोई आज यहाँ
ये भारत देश  हमारा है ||


luta luta se lagata hai mulk mera
begana sa ban gaya hai mulk mera

jo mulk sare jahan me laharaata tha
wo bharat, bharat maa hee kahalaata tha

lut gaya hai aaj wo apne hee ladlon se
ho gya hai chalanee apno ke diye ghavon se

aaj maa kee laal lad rahe hai
kahi kahi ladte hai ram ke naam par
kahi ram or raheem lad rahe hai

chetra aur jateewad majhab pe bhaaree hai
UP, Bihar se Maharashtriyo kee ladayee jaree hai

nahee kisee ka aaj ye naraa hai
koi karta hai naaj UP pe
kisee ko maharashtra hee pyaara hai
nahi kahata koi ye bharat desh hamaara hai

netra..
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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2008, 05:56:46 AM »

Bahut sahi likha hai aapne..... Netra..... mere dil ki baat aapne likh dala. Applause :clap:athi sunder..... keep up dear.
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« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2008, 06:03:13 AM »

wah netra ji ..humesha ki tarahbahot hi acha...bas yun aap likhte rahie...
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« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2008, 11:35:53 PM »

very thanks to poonam ji & roja ji
roja ji aap sway ek bahoot achaa likhtee hai

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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2008, 01:24:20 AM »

Netra

Behtareen ! Superb ! Fantastic ! Excellent Applause Applause Applause

Tum har baar bahut he revolutionary likhte ho !

Keep it up ! Applause
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« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2008, 01:48:51 AM »

bahut khoob netra ji...
bahut achi soch hai aapki.. Applause Applause Applause
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Ke Nishaan Jaan Lete Hai..

Tujhe Eh Zindagi,
Hum Door Se Pehchchaan Lete Hai....
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« Reply #6 on: May 08, 2008, 01:56:02 AM »

Bohat acha likha hai netra ji..
desh bohat sahi likha hai..Usual Smile
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jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
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hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they
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« Reply #7 on: May 09, 2008, 12:15:56 AM »

Excellent work... Netra  Applause

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« Reply #8 on: May 09, 2008, 01:36:06 AM »

thanks for reply to all

netra....
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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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