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Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

« Reply #15 on: June 06, 2007, 04:38:49 AM »

Bahoot Accha Likha Hai Sab Doston Ne,..
Hum Bhi Kuch Likhne Ki Koshish Karenge..
Hope U all Will Like It,..


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem

« Reply #16 on: June 06, 2007, 04:46:11 AM »

Quote from: "diya_barsat"

This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai

Khata Na Meri Poocho Ke Main Gunahgaar Hoon,..
Jis Se Na Koi Le Saka Sahaara Kabhi Wo Lachaar Hoon,..

Aaj Jab De Raha Hai Zehar Koi To Kyun Na Kabool Karoon,..
Jise Na Mili Kabhi Mohabbat Ki Dawaa Aisa Main Ek Beemaar Hoon,..

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-

Shayad ye Aapke Jawaab Mein De Sake Aisi Shayari To Nahi,..
Magar Jo Alfaaz Aapki Shayari Mein the Unhi Ko Jordkar Kuch Likh Diya,..


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

« Reply #17 on: August 27, 2008, 06:18:24 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 08, 2007, 02:12:33 AM

ye katha hamse huyi tumhara koi dosh nahi
kya kare dil ki baat juba pe jo aati nahi..
khud jal sakte ham tumhare khushi ke liye
tumhe yun tarapte hum dekh sakte nahi...

sorry agar kisi ko pasand nahi aayi to pls be jijhak bata dena...

Kya baat Hai Punam..?
" Purana Kalaam " Bilkool Tar-o-Taaza Lagaa Muze
Aur Sub ko Ye Pasand aaya Hoga
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DusmanoSe Keh Do Khair Manaye,Na Sharr Kare.

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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

« Reply #18 on: August 27, 2008, 06:29:14 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on June 06, 2007, 04:46:11 AM

Khata Na Meri Poocho Ke Main Gunahgaar Hoon,..
Jis Se Na Koi Le Saka Sahaara Kabhi Wo Lachaar Hoon,..

Aaj Jab De Raha Hai Zehar Koi To Kyun Na Kabool Karoon,..
Jise Na Mili Kabhi Mohabbat Ki Dawaa Aisa Main Ek Beemaar Hoon,..

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
Shayad ye Aapke Jawaab Mein De Sake Aisi Shayari To Nahi,..
Magar Jo Alfaaz Aapki Shayari Mein the Unhi Ko Jordkar Kuch Likh Diya,..

Kya bhai aap To Pahele Se Hi Shayri Maidaan Mar Liye Ho
Aur aaj To Behtar Se Behtarin Kalaam Likh Rahe Ho

Jee bhai Azeem
" Punam " K kuch kalaam ko Padh raha tha ki aap ke kalaam se Roo-b-Roo Hua
badhiya Hai ash'aar


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

« Reply #19 on: August 27, 2008, 06:34:14 AM »

Nice start Diya_barsat and good reply Punam, Netra, Jaanasheen ji.
Sabne bahut hi accha saat diya hai. Keep up


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