Ghazal क्या कहूँ ? (Adab)

by drpandey on June 24, 2013, 02:35:01 AM
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खुशफ़हम दिल का बहाना क्या कहूँ?
रोज मैं अपना फ़साना क्या कहूँ?

रफ़्ता-रफ़्ता गफलतों में ग़ुम हुआ,
इश्क़ में जैसे दिवाना  क्या कहूँ?

हुस्न की तौफ़ीक़ ठहरी बेनियाज़ी,
बदगुमाँ सारा ज़माना क्या कहूँ?

चन्द जुमले  कुछ इबारत और क्या,
कर गये मुझको बेगाना क्या कहूँ?

उल्झी ज़ुल्फें वक़्त की सुलझें ना जब,
रंज़े -दिल मुझको सुनाना क्या कहूँ?

वस्ल का मक़सूद जब दिन ही ना हो,
जी में जब आये बुलाना क्या कहूँ?

हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

दिल के कारोबार में घाटा ही है,
ये तिज़ारत ज़ालिमाना क्या कहूँ?

इक मुसलसल सी रवानी में 'अदब',
बहते-बहते डूब जाना क्या कहूँ?

-डा० एच० पी० पाण्डेय 'अदब'
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 03:38:15 AM »
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bohat khub janab
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2013, 03:39:07 AM »
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हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

Bahut Khoob Dr saheb
behatreen ghazal
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2013, 03:51:40 AM »
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bahut khoob sir.....
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2013, 06:51:46 AM »
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हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

दिल के कारोबार में घाटा ही है,
ये तिज़ारत ज़ालिमाना क्या कहूँ?

इक मुसलसल सी रवानी में 'अदब',
बहते-बहते डूब जाना क्या कहूँ?

Wah,Wah,Wah Pandeyji,
Bahut umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really Nice.
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2013, 07:32:17 AM »
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हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

दिल के कारोबार में घाटा ही है,
ये तिज़ारत ज़ालिमाना क्या कहूँ?

इक मुसलसल सी रवानी में 'अदब',
बहते-बहते डूब जाना क्या कहूँ?

Wah,Wah,Wah Pandeyji,
Bahut umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really Nice.
Bahot bahot shukriya Sudhir Ashq Sahab..!!

 
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2013, 07:33:45 AM »
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bahut khoob sir.....

Shukriya Ambalika sharma Ji...!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2013, 07:34:23 AM »
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Adab ji .... Har sher behtrareen laga ... Intehaayee khoobsurat ghazal kahi apne ... Apko dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2013, 07:37:01 AM »
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हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

Bahut Khoob Dr saheb
behatreen ghazal
Ghazal pasand farmaney ka shukriya mkv ji...!!
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Adab ji .... Har sher behtrareen laga ... Intehaayee khoobsurat ghazal kahi apne ... Apko dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad

Aapka azehad shukriya Zarraa Ji ki aapko meri Ghazal pasand aai aur aapne hausla afzai ka beskeemti waqt kikala..!! Shukriya..!!
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bohat khub janab

Shukriya M.S Azam ji...!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 24, 2013, 08:51:43 AM »
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bahut umda!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bahut umda!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya @Kaash Ji...!! Nawazush...!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 24, 2013, 03:21:24 PM »
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waah waah....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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waah waah....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Miru Ji...!!
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