Tera Gam Dil Me Liye...

by angel4u on May 15, 2006, 10:56:52 AM
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«Reply #135 on: June 07, 2006, 11:42:30 AM »
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Azeem bahut bahut shukriay apko humarey beysurey shari bhi passend ah rahey hai.... apney bhi bahut acha likha hia.. yeo hi likhtey rahwo....

thuda samey lageyga
phir thaam jayngey ahsoo
pedh jaygi adat, dard saheyney ki
abhi to naya naya ghav hia
esleya dard kuch jayda hia


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Wah Soni Ji Bahoot Khoob Likha hai Apne,..

Bebas Hogaya Main Tujhse Mohabbat Ki Aas Rakh Ke,..
Bujhaai Teri Har Pyaas Maine Apne Dil Mein Pyaas Rakh Ke,..

Saajaaya Teri Mehfilon Ko Maine Apne Ashiaane Ko Veeraana Karke,..
Aye Be-Rehem Bata Kya Mila Tujhe Mujhe Is Tarah Udaas Rakh Ke,..

Arzoo Hi Rehgaayi Tujhse Wafa Paane Ki Is Zindagi Mein,..
Jee Raha Hoon Main Is Zindagi Ko Tere Ghamon Ko Paas Rakh Ke,..

_______________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #136 on: June 07, 2006, 11:44:51 AM »
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Angle ji its ok jeysa apko thik lagey app veysa likhey meyney to kah tha keo ager app sperate likheyngi to apko or bhi jayda appriciation mileygior pedney mey or bhi jayda mejha ahyga.... anyway koi bat nahi jeysa apko thik lagey app veysa karey.... bahut acha likhti hia app... yeo hi likhtey raaow.. with wonderful smile Usual Smile

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Janasheen ji main bhai nai bahen hoon sad5 anyways aap ki lines bahut achhi hia. Really fantastic.

Aryaan you are too good as usual dear. The Real Pen Magician. Usual Smile good one.

sonuji i didnt knew ke main apne hi post ko reply kar rahi hoon. yahan confusing hota hai sab, actually ye speedy tarika hai to i thougth aise karke fatafat posts kar deti hoon. tongue3 anyways alag alag post banane me to bahut dikkat hoti hia, ek hi post me daalte rehne se koi problem hota hai kya? reply to ata hai yahan bhi. Thik hia koshish karungi ke ab se new posts me post karun. Thanks dear friend Usual Smile take care...

Thanks somdev...aapne bhi kafi acha likha hai...
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«Reply #137 on: June 07, 2006, 12:06:10 PM »
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Sorry Angel Maloom Nahi Hua ke App Lardki Hai,..
Aur App Bhi Bahoot Khoob Likhte Hain,..
Aise Hi Likhte Rehna,..

Sonu sis Ka To Jawab Nahi,..
App Aisa Likhte Hain Ke Jawaab Dene ke Liye Sochna Pardta hai,..
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«Reply #138 on: June 07, 2006, 12:08:23 PM »
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Khudaki Tasveer Kahe,
Ya In Aankhonki Takdeer Kahein,
Husnki Jagir Kahe Ya
Dilme Gadta Teer Kahe,
Dekh Kar Hum Jise Dekhte Hi Rahe,
Aapke Us Chehre Ko Aye Sanam Hum Kya Kahe...
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Waah Bahoot Khoob Angel Sis,..
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«Reply #139 on: June 07, 2006, 12:09:28 PM »
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Azeem brotther bahut bahut shukriya....  :lol:  :lol:  majak acha kertey ho arey mey etna acha to nahi likhti hoon.... phir bhi thanks for appriciation... koi bat nahi jawab jub merji deydeyna

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Sorry Angel Maloom Nahi Hua ke App Lardki Hai,..
Aur App Bhi Bahoot Khoob Likhte Hain,..
Aise Hi Likhte Rehna,..

Sonu sis Ka To Jawab Nahi,..
App Aisa Likhte Hain Ke Jawaab Dene ke Liye Sochna Pardta hai,..
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«Reply #140 on: June 07, 2006, 12:38:31 PM »
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Banta Aaya Dard Sabhi Ka Main Mujhe Hi Ruswaai Mili,...
Pyaar Ki Mehfilein Saajai Maine Har Waqt Yahan Ab Mujhe Hi Tanhaai Mili,..
Sab Ko Hausla Deta Tha Main Dilon Mein Intezaar Rakhne Ka Aaj Mujhe Hi Judaai Mili,..
Sab Ko Seekh Laaya Maine Mohabbat Ka Sabak Yahan Afsos Ke Mujhe Hi Bewafaai Mili,..

______________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #141 on: June 08, 2006, 09:24:49 AM »
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Bohat khoob Angel, Sonu & Jaanasheen....

Meri jaan nahi jaayegi ek aur maatam ke liye
Mere dil mein abhi jagah hai ek aur gham ke liye

Main tere paas hi laut-ta hoon nayi chot ke liye
Jab jism par jagah nahi ek aur zakham ke liye

Kitne hi waade kiye hain tum ne sirf todne ke liye
Meri wafaa tarasti rahi teri ik aur Qasam ke liye
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«Reply #142 on: June 08, 2006, 09:34:36 AM »
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Bahut k hoob Azeem ji...

Aryan ji bahut bahut shukriya... apney bhai bahut acha likha hai...

Meyney to kaye bar  marnay ki dua mangee thee

Magar shayed koi, jeenay ki dua magta hai
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«Reply #143 on: June 08, 2006, 10:22:53 AM »
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Thanks aryaan. this oen is fantabulous, fantastic, touching... sad5

Jab koi jine ki dua mangta hai to dard ke maaroke liye usse badi baddua koi nai hai...
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«Reply #144 on: June 08, 2006, 10:34:19 AM »
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Raatonke Andherome Shayad
Wo Chand Nikal Ayega Kahin,
Ye Sochke Nikle The Hum To,
Wo Yaar Nazar Ayega Kahin...
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«Reply #145 on: June 08, 2006, 10:36:16 AM »
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Zindagi Ek Bojhsi Lagti Kyon Hai,
Jinewale To Jiye Jate Hai,
Aye Hasi Zindgi Tu Hi To Bata,
Intezar Maut Ka Tu Karti Kyon Hai...
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«Reply #146 on: June 08, 2006, 10:37:57 AM »
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Thanks a lot Sonu & Angel... Good One Angel...
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angel4u
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«Reply #147 on: June 08, 2006, 10:38:01 AM »
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Dillagi Kar Baithe Tum Yunhi Baaton Baaton Me,
Hum Samajh Baithe The Ye Ishqki Zuban Hai...
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«Reply #148 on: June 08, 2006, 10:40:32 AM »
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Kitne Gamzada Hai Hum Ke Kya Tumhe Bataye,
Aankhein To Kuch Kehti Nahi,
Ye Dil Bhi Yun Khamosh Hai,
Hothonpe Jo Aayi Thi Baat,
Hothope Hi Ruk Kar Rahi...
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«Reply #149 on: June 08, 2006, 10:43:06 AM »
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Gamki Gaheraiyonme Hum Gire
Kahe Bhi Tumhse Kya Kahe,
Nazronpe Hai Parda Gira
Dilne Bhi Kuch Na Kaha,
Hothonpe Aayi Baat Jo,
Hotho Pe Hi Rukhsat Hui...
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