Bechaain Si.........

by palkhi on July 02, 2008, 07:19:34 AM
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  .... Bechaain Si Hai Yeh Dharkaan,
   Kamzoor Si Honai Lagi Hai Ye Sansai,

   Ek Ek Pal Ginn Rahein Hoon Main,
   Ek Ek Yaad Pir Se Tazaa Kar Rahein Hoon Main,

   Bechaain Si Hai Yeh Dharkaan,
   Rook Rook Kai Ahh Rahin Hai Mujko Abb Sasai,

   Ghum Sum Si Hai Yeh Dhoonya,
   Bekarari Ka Hai Yeh Sama,

   Har Lamha,
   Har Paal,
   Bithaa Rahin Hoon Main Teri Yaadon Mein,

   Na Jaane Kaise Khaat Rahain Hai Paal,
   Na Jaane Kaise Ghoosrai Gai Annai Walai Paal,

   Teri Do Din Ki Judai Nai Mujko Hai Ithna Sathaya,
   Main Tho Khud Hiraan Ho Iss Baat Se,
   Kai Teri Judai Mein Main Kaise Na Maar Gayi.......
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2008, 11:24:44 AM »
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Teri Do Din Ki Judai Nai Mujko Hai Ithna Sathaya,
   Main Tho Khud Hiraan Ho Iss Baat Se,
   Kai Teri Judai Mein Main Kaise Na Maar Gayi.......

Bahot Khoob  Palkhi Ji
Is Aakhri Teen Misre K Liye..

Shayad Yaade Hi Aaise Chiz Hai,
Jo Judaai Me Saath Rehti Hai,
Jo Jaati Bhi Nahi,
Aur Marne Deti Bhi nahi..
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2008, 01:50:10 AM »
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wah kay abaat hai Palkhi.. bahoot acha likha hai..
Muhammed APNE BHI ACHI LINES LIKHI HAI!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2008, 02:53:26 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on July 02, 2008, 11:24:44 AM
Teri Do Din Ki Judai Nai Mujko Hai Ithna Sathaya,
   Main Tho Khud Hiraan Ho Iss Baat Se,
   Kai Teri Judai Mein Main Kaise Na Maar Gayi.......

Bahot Khoob  Palkhi Ji
Is Aakhri Teen Misre K Liye..

Shayad Yaade Hi Aaise Chiz Hai,
Jo Judaai Me Saath Rehti Hai,
Jo Jaati Bhi Nahi,
Aur Marne Deti Bhi nahi..


   Teinku Ji.........fabulous reply!!!!!!

   Jaane Kayun Mujko Laagh Raha Hai Kai Inn Yadoon Kai Saharai Hi Mujko Abb Jeena Hai,

     Jaane Kayun Mujko Laagh Raha Hai Kai Bas Abb Unhi Goosrai Huai Palhoo Mein Mujko Abb Jeena Hai....
     
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2008, 02:53:47 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 03, 2008, 01:50:10 AM
wah kay abaat hai Palkhi.. bahoot acha likha hai..
Muhammed APNE BHI ACHI LINES LIKHI HAI!!

  Teinku di!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2008, 10:53:47 AM »
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Shukriya Palkhi Saahiba & Pooja Ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2008, 04:53:05 PM »
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Very Nicely Expressed Palkhi.. Its really Touching..  Applause

Nice lines.. Muhammed  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2008, 05:12:55 PM »
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Bohot pyaara likha hai Palkhi.......Nice reply Muhammed !!
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2008, 09:38:05 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on July 03, 2008, 04:53:05 PM
Very Nicely Expressed Palkhi.. Its really Touching..  Applause

Nice lines.. Muhammed  Applause

  Teinku DI!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2008, 09:38:37 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 03, 2008, 05:12:55 PM
Bohot pyaara likha hai Palkhi.......Nice reply Muhammed !!

   Thanks Appi!!!!!
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