dil se dur

by kaushikbhawna008 on March 25, 2008, 02:53:45 PM
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dil se dur jinhe ham kar na sake
paas b ham unhe paa na sake
mita diya jisne pyaar hamara dil se
ham unka naam b likhkar mita na sake
fulo ki khushbu chandni raat ki rangat
wo saath gujare pal ham bhula na sake
wo masum sa chehra chehre pe hansi dekhkar
ham unhe kabhi hal-e-dil suna na sake
dosti pe jinki hamne kiya tha bharosa
wo saath do pal ka b nibha na sake
ab kaise kar le yakin kisi ki mohobbat par
kyu ki ham aaj tak uka pyaar dil se mita na sake
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2008, 08:57:01 PM »
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wah bhawna kaya lines likhi hai.. simple magar dard se bhari hui.. bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2008, 09:37:47 PM »
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dil se dur jinhe ham kar na sake
paas b ham unhe paa na sake
mita diya jisne pyaar hamara dil se
ham unka naam b likhkar mita na sake
fulo ki khushbu chandni raat ki rangat
wo saath gujare pal ham bhula na sake
wo masum sa chehra chehre pe hansi dekhkar
ham unhe kabhi hal-e-dil suna na sake
dosti pe jinki hamne kiya tha bharosa
wo saath do pal ka b nibha na sake
ab kaise kar le yakin kisi ki mohobbat par
kyu ki ham aaj tak uka pyaar dil se mita na sake



Wow bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2008, 10:05:37 PM »
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nice one .. showing the immense feeling of trust and betrayal
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2009, 03:16:03 PM »
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dil se dur jinhe ham kar na sake
paas b ham unhe paa na sake
mita diya jisne pyaar hamara dil se
ham unka naam b likhkar mita na sake

Bhawna aap Ka Aisa Koi bhi Kalaam Nahi Jo Dil o Damaag ko Chhuta Na Ho....Dil se Kaafi Nazdiq ho k Gujata hai..
Badhiya Ash'aar.
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