Few lines on Judai

by Ricky on June 19, 2007, 12:10:45 PM
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I think we should write some intro or something about the poem before actually posting the work.

So here, these lines are about the life where you can't control things always, below are the line which I think or not really standard sort but may be. Comments are welcome !

    Kitna shaur tha, kitni garmahat thi mahaul mein !
    Hass rahe thae woh aur khushi thi hamare bol mein !
    Ki ek angraai lee zindagi ne, apni taaqat dikhayi !!
    Dhamm sae dhamak dee,achanak Khamoshi Chaayi !!

    Chhayi aisi khamoshi ki phir naa koi dastak kaam aayi !
    Thamm sae gaye kadam, koi raah bhi samajh naa aayi !!
    Nazar lagi kisi-ki yaa ye pehlu ek aur inn rahoN kaa…
    Jisne bujha di lau woh jis pe thi kabhi zindagi jhilmilayi !!


Copyright Notice: Above posted work solely belongs to me, if found at other places on internet which is posted after this post here on Yoindia then its infringing copyright laws & shall be considered stealing of  the work if its without proper credits.
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2007, 12:11:17 PM »
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Btw, how is Copyright Notice ?
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2007, 01:10:39 PM »
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Beautiful Lines... Usual Smile Really Nice...

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Btw, how is Copyright Notice ?


Hey, Last Night I was thinking exactly about writing this type of thing in my signature.. .. That was My Idea... tongue3

But, Seems u somehow got this from Telepathy.... :D
Now, I think I have to Steal this line from You.... Ofcourse with your Permission... Usual Smile
May I also add this... Please???
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2007, 01:49:49 PM »
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Ya ofcourse you can use it !
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2007, 10:52:13 AM »
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very nice ricky
Sabash !!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2007, 10:54:25 PM »
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Sorta nice appreciation Sameer Usual Smile

Ya.. Shikha .. you are always welcome to use it where ever u want.. its copyright free (ie. copyright notice)
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2007, 02:50:56 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Ricky Ji..
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2007, 02:57:09 PM »
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Dard Judaai Ka Hum Bhi Seh Rahe Hain,..
Hadd Se Jab Dard Bardhgaya To Keh Rahe Hain,..

Nishaan Yun Hi Hain Dil Par Unke Kadmo Ke,..
Tasweer Yunhi Hai Aankhon Mein Aur Ashq Beh Rahe Hain,..

_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2007, 12:51:28 AM »
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Thank you Sameer and Nice work lines too !

Jahan ae ishq me shaamil naa hoi-ye..
Qatre jo na kabhi bahe aansuo ke..
Unko yun naa aap aise zehmatein dijiye..
Kush rahega tuh ..abaad bhi rahegaa..
Ishq karne ki yun kabhi jurrat naa kijiye !!![/i]
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2007, 01:27:58 PM »
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Dard-e-Judaai Kya Hoti Hai Koi Humse Pooche To Zara,..
Log Na Jaane Isko Kya Kya Keh Jaate Hain,..

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2007, 07:06:21 PM »
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Wah wah kaya badde bhaiyo
Ricky bhaiya yaar hum besabri se intzaar karte hai aapki poem ka aur aap ho ki chup chap likhar chale jaate ho

Judai main kyoun inshan rota hai
Tanha tanha sa kyoun doshton ke beech hota hai
Jo door chala jaata hai dard-o-gum dekar
Wahi fir kyoun dil ke paas hota hai
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2007, 09:50:28 PM »
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Wah wah kaya badde bhaiyo
Ricky bhaiya yaar hum besabri se intzaar karte hai aapki poem ka aur aap ho ki chup chap likhar chale jaate ho

Judai main kyoun inshan rota hai
Tanha tanha sa kyoun doshton ke beech hota hai


Ye doh line bohot acchi lagi !
Janasheen, aapka bhi kaha gehri baat kehta hai !

Thankyou Sameer for your words of appreciation
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2007, 08:19:31 PM »
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Shukriya sameer and Ricky Bhai,..
Nice One Sameer,..
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2007, 08:24:44 PM »
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Dard-e-Judaai Bhi Ek Mazaa De Jaati Hai,..
Intezaar Dekar Zinda Rehne Ki Sazaa De Jaati Hai,.,.

Phir Bhi Milne Ki Aas Ko Seene Mein Basaaye Rakhna,.
Kahin Bujh Na Jaaye Charag Umeedon Ka Inhe Hawaon Se Bachaaye Rakhna,..

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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2007, 09:21:18 PM »
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wah Ricky ji.., Sameer ji , Jaanasheen ji.. all are superb.. =D>  =D>

Taqdeer meri main likha tha rona
Ye Judayee ka gam ek bahana ban gaya
Diwane dil ko tootna tha "Roja" ke yaron
Jo unki nazron ka ye nishana ban gaya..
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