Few lines on Judai

by Ricky on June 19, 2007, 12:10:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 31, 2007, 11:50:21 PM »
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Ricky G, Sameer G, Jaanasheen G, Roja G bahut khoob, it's really appreciable.

Jane wale teri judai ka jaher muskura ke pee lenge
Hum tere pyar ki hansi yade dilse lagake jee lenge
Dil diya dard liya aankh mein aanso paye
Ik khushi mangi thi ulfat mein hazar gum paye
Dard-e-ulfat ki kasam tujhko na jane dete
Hum muhabbat mein kabhi farq na aane dete
Hi taqdeer ki humko na raas aaye khushi
Kaash! beeti huyi ghadi lautkar aaye
Apne hathon se dil ka diya bujhaun kaise
Sath gujare huye lamhat bhulaun kaise!!! [/color]
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«Reply #16 on: August 02, 2007, 12:27:11 PM »
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Thankyou Monali
You also wrote nice !
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«Reply #17 on: August 03, 2007, 04:34:52 PM »
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Shukriya Roja Ji,,.
And Monali Ji,. Aap Dono Ne accha Likha Hai,.
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«Reply #18 on: August 03, 2007, 04:38:29 PM »
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wah Ricky ji.., Sameer ji , Jaanasheen ji.. all are superb.. =D>  =D>

Taqdeer meri main likha tha rona
Ye Judayee ka gam ek bahana ban gaya
Diwane dil ko tootna tha "Roja" ke yaron
Jo unki nazron ka ye nishana ban gaya..
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Taqdeer Gham Zada Thi Apni Bhi "Roja",.
Jisne Kabhi Bhi Saath Na Diya Muskuraakar,..
Aaj Jo Aas Thi Khushi Ki Wo Bhi Tooti,..
Toot Gaye Sapne Bhi Saare Jinhe Rakha Tha Sajaakar,..

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«Reply #19 on: August 03, 2007, 04:44:38 PM »
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Ricky G, Sameer G, Jaanasheen G, Roja G bahut khoob, it's really appreciable.

Jane wale teri judai ka jaher muskura ke pee lenge
Hum tere pyar ki hansi yade dilse lagake jee lenge
Dil diya dard liya aankh mein aanso paye
Ik khushi mangi thi ulfat mein hazar gum paye
Dard-e-ulfat ki kasam tujhko na jane dete
Hum muhabbat mein kabhi farq na aane dete
Hi taqdeer ki humko na raas aaye khushi
Kaash! beeti huyi ghadi lautkar aaye
Apne hathon se dil ka diya bujhaun kaise
Sath gujare huye lamhat bhulaun kaise!!! [/color]


Nice One Monali Ji,.
Hamari Koshish Kabool Kijiye,..

Iska Gilaa Nahi Ke Bahoot Gham Uthaaye Hain,.
Barbaadiyaan Naseeb Mein Likhwaa Ke Aaye Hain,.

Khush Hoke Dekhte Ho Kya Meri Tabaahi Ko,..
Ye Bhi Tohfe Humne Mohabbat Se Paaye Hain,,..

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«Reply #20 on: August 03, 2007, 04:49:03 PM »
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Judaai Bhi Ek Hissa Hai Hai Mohabbat Ka Doston,..
Judaai Na Hoti To Kisi Ki Zaroorat Ka Ehsaas Na Hota,..

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«Reply #21 on: August 03, 2007, 08:08:48 PM »
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Shukriya Jaanasheen ji aapne bahut khoob farmaya hai, pesh karti hoon......

    Kisi ki yaad mere aas-pas hi rehati hai,
    Bahoot dino se tabiyat udas si rehati hai,
    Bichud gaya hai magar yeh dil manta hi nahi,
    Na jane kyun teri milne ki aas lagi rehati hai!

    Ye theek hai ki koi marta nahi judai mein,
    Magar khuda kisi ko kisi se juda na kare,
    Suna hai unko muhabbat duwayen deti hai,
    Jo dil par chot to khaye magar gila na kare!!
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«Reply #22 on: August 06, 2007, 06:51:19 AM »
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Wohi raat meri, wahi raat unki
Kahin bad gayee hai ... kahi gat gayee hai..

Judayee ka aalam koyee usse pooche
Sehar ho gayee ho jisse rote rote
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«Reply #23 on: August 07, 2007, 03:55:42 PM »
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Shukriya Jaanasheen ji aapne bahut khoob farmaya hai, pesh karti hoon......

    Kisi ki yaad mere aas-pas hi rehati hai,
    Bahoot dino se tabiyat udas si rehati hai,
    Bichud gaya hai magar yeh dil manta hi nahi,
    Na jane kyun teri milne ki aas lagi rehati hai!

    Ye theek hai ki koi marta nahi judai mein,
    Magar khuda kisi ko kisi se juda na kare,
    Suna hai unko muhabbat duwayen deti hai,
    Jo dil par chot to khaye magar gila na kare!!
Shukran Aur Bahoot Hi Khoob Likha hai aaapne,,,
Yunhi Likhte rahiye,..
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«Reply #24 on: August 07, 2007, 03:58:59 PM »
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Wohi raat meri, wahi raat unki
Kahin bad gayee hai ... kahi gat gayee hai..

Judayee ka aalam koyee usse pooche
Sehar ho gayee ho jisse rote rote
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bahoot Khoob Roja,..
Yunhi Likhte rahiye,..
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«Reply #25 on: August 07, 2007, 04:05:37 PM »
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Mere Liye Jeena Ye Sazaa Hogaya,.
Yaar Mera Mujhse Judaa Hogaya,..

Pehle To Mujhe Wo Manaata Thav "Azeem,..
Jaane Aaj Kyun Wo Mujhse Khafa Hogaya,..

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«Reply #26 on: August 13, 2011, 02:28:04 PM »
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Hamne unke liye raqeebon ko chhor diya,
Usne raqeebon ke liye mujhe hi chhor diya,
Hamari iqtija ko wo samajh na paye,
Isliye hamne ye jahan hi chhor diya.

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