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by sawank14 on February 22, 2008, 02:02:04 PM

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sawank14

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iene toot gaye to kya hua ye mere mola,
chehare to nahi badal jayenge.
hamm bichhar gaye to kya hua ye mere rasid,
yad dil se to nahi chale jayenge. Crying


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zakhmola

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Re: iena

«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2008, 02:49:24 PM »

jiss Aayiye mein tere Aks ko dekha
ussey harpl paas rakhta hun
churra na ley kahin meri he nazar mujhsey,Tujhko
khud bhi usse dekhney sey darta hun...


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Shikha12

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Re: iena

«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2008, 04:19:54 PM »

Nice lines Sawank
and
Good Reply Zakhmola...


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sharmaarunkumar

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Re: iena

«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2008, 04:45:00 PM »

Quote from: sawank14 on February 22, 2008, 02:02:04 PM

iene toot gaye to kya hua ye mere mola,
chehare to nahi badal jayenge.
hamm bichhar gaye to kya hua ye mere rasid,
yad dil se to nahi chale jayenge. Crying

waah very nicely written!!!!

Kuchh is adaa se umra ka Sawan guzar gaya!
Daldal bacha hai baandh ka paani utar gaya!

Sadiyan ujaadne mein to do pal nahin lage!
Lamhe sanwarne mein Zamana Guzar gaya!

Bulbul to ban ko chorh ke bagon mein ja basi,
ek junglee Gulaab tha Murjhaa ke jhar gaya!

Kamre mein aasmaan ke taare samaa gaye,
achchha hua jo toot ke sheesha bikhar gaya!

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Pooja

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Re: iena

«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2008, 01:54:43 AM »

wah aks ji kaya baat hai... bahoot hi achi kavita share ki hai apne humare sath!!! bahoot khoob!!

bahoot khoob sawank14 and Zakhmola ji!!!

sawank14 ji apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai!!!