JUDAI:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

NETRAPAL

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Judai jaise topic par maine ek koshish kee hai pahale kabhi bhee likha nahi tha agar kuch galat ho to jaroor batye...........

wo chala gya tha n jane kaha tnha chod kar
ana hee hoga use chahe kuch pal ka intjaar kra kar

kyo hogya kafa hamse ne malum n usne bataya tha
ek pal me jhatak har daamn mera wo to chala ayaa tha

kya maloom nahi use kya hota hai gam judayee ka
kaise rote parinde bhee apnee yaar kee judaiyee par

kon ponche ga ansoo mere, apahij hoo mai bina unke
nahi rah gaya hai wo kandha bhee, sir rkh kar rota tha jispar

itne jalim hai itne bedard wo niklenge n socha tha maine kabi
wo to chale gaye jahmat bhee n kee dekhe ek bar peeche mud kar

nahi de sakta bad-dua unhe kabi, dua hee nikaltee hai mukh se mere
karta hoo ardaas sunle e khuda too, lot aye mera yar fir muskarakar

rota hoo bebasee pe panee, ne dekh sktaa hoo mai apahij kise ko
koi nahi sunta vintee meri nikal jate hai sab mujhe thokare mar kar

maloom hai judaiyee ka dard wo bhee to sahta hoga kahi
rota hoga wo bhee judayee me kisee sunsaan kone me muh chupakar

nahi jaoonga kahi, karoonga intjaar, lot kar ayega mera dildaar kabi to
ilm sa hooa uske aane ka, simat jayenge gam uske vajood me dubkar..

netra..


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sakhi1909

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Re: JUDAI

«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2007, 10:15:36 PM »

netra ji pls bura na manna par mere khyaal se ye post aur bhi achi ho skati thi kuch is tarah har sher hota to...mein bhiu abhiu seekh hi rahi hun isliye bas ise meri ek koshish samjhna aur bura na manna aap

wo chala gya tha n jane kaha tnha chod kar
ana hee hoga use chahe kuch pal ka intjaar kra kar

wo chala gya tha jane kahan mujhe tanha chhod kar
ana hi hoga use apne rastey ka rookh mod kar

kyo hogya kafa hamse ne malum n usne bataya tha
ek pal me jhatak har daamn mera wo to chala ayaa tha

kyun hua woh khafa na pata na usne bataya tha
pal mein jhatak kar daman woh chala gya mujhe tod kar

kya maloom nahi use kya hota hai gam judayee ka
kaise rote parinde bhee apnee yaar kee judaiyee par

ye sahi hai

kon ponche ga ansoo mere, apahij hoo mai bina unke
nahi rah gaya hai wo kandha bhee, sir rkh kar rota tha jispar

kaun pochega anshu mere apahiz hun mein bina unke
nahi pass woh kandha mere, sir rakh kar rota tha jis par

itne jalim hai itne bedard wo niklenge n socha tha maine kabi
wo to chale gaye jahmat bhee n kee dekhe ek bar peeche mud kar

ye bhi sahi laga

nahi de sakta bad-dua unhe kabi, dua hee nikaltee hai mukh se mere
karta hoo ardaas sunle e khuda too, lot aye mera yar fir muskarakar

ye bhi sahi laga

rota hoo bebasee pe panee, ne dekh sktaa hoo mai apahij kise ko
koi nahi sunta vintee meri nikal jate hai sab mujhe thokare mar kar

ye bhi thik hai

maloom hai judaiyee ka dard wo bhee to sahta hoga kahi
rota hoga wo bhee judayee me kisee sunsaan kone me muh chupakar

haan ji sahi kahn apne use bhi to kahin na kahin apni galati ka ehsas hoga ki usne kisi ko gamneen kiya hai

nahi jaoonga kahi, karoonga intjaar, lot kar ayega mera dildaar kabi to
ilm sa hooa uske aane ka, simat jayenge gam uske vajood me dubkar..

yahi karunga intzaar mein woh laut kar aayega kabhi
aayega jab woh simat janynge gam, uske wajood me dubkar

netra ji
apki tahreer ko meine apni tarah se edit kiya hai agar acha na lage to maaf karna..

yuhi likhte rahna ehsasoin ko

sakhi


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NETRAPAL

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JUDAI

«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2007, 09:07:45 AM »

well done =D> sakhi ji bhoot acha laga or bhoot kuch seekhne ko milega, meri ye pahli koshish thee agae or acha likhne ki koshish karunga.

thanks again......

netra.........


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sakhi1909

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JUDAI

«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2007, 02:56:13 PM »

apko pasand aaya shukriiya

regards
sakhi


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NETRAPAL

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JUDAI

«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2007, 03:44:51 PM »

usne bheja tha lafje-thareer me dil rak kar
sirf lafjte-thareer ko hee apne dil se lagaya unhone hai

chand lafjo kee tahareer kho hee to dekha tha usne
unme chupde judayee-dard ko masoos hee nahi kar paya hai

usne to rakh diya tha apna dil khulii kitaab ki tarh samne unke
kitab ke panne hee dekhe usne, darde-dil use panno me diktha kaha hai

wo dekh kar chal dete hai rukh ko uske sirf gaharee najro se hee
muskarate labo ke peeche chalaktee ansoo usne dekhe hee kha hai

netra......


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