KOI

by ALONE BAD on September 19, 2007, 05:46:11 PM

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ALONE BAD

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kun yahan har aankh hai roi
mujhae bhi do jawab koi
jismae na ho dukh ka ek bhi panna
dikha do jeevan ki wo kitab koi...

hoon main bhi insaan
aakhir kab tak sahoon main
mere gunahoon ka
kar do ab hisaab koi....

andhera hai charoon taraf
gamo ka bas ghera hai
karo aaj
meri zindagi main bhi prakash koi...

jeeyun jee bhar kar main bhi
udun khulae gagan main
de do aaj mujhae bhi
mere hisaae ka aakash koi.....

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Talat

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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2007, 07:58:57 PM »

Very nice Alone Bad...kaafi dino ke baad dekha aap ko Usual Smile


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Sahiba Zehra

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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2007, 11:23:00 PM »

sach mein
bohot acha

gud gud Alone G

keep writing

:D :D :D


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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2007, 11:53:01 PM »

This is one is nice, full of feelings.


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Roja

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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2007, 07:59:00 PM »

Wah wah... Bahut umda likha hai sonu aapne...


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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2007, 10:39:25 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Very nice Alone Bad...kaafi dino ke baad dekha aap ko Usual Smile

shukriya Talat ji......

sorry thoda job main busy ho gai thi..isliyae kaafi dino baad kuch likh paai... thanx once again.... Usual Smile


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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2007, 10:43:04 AM »

Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"

sach mein
bohot acha

gud gud Alone G

keep writing

:D :D :D

aapki hosla afzaai ke liyae bahoot bahoot shukriya Sahiba ji.... :D


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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2007, 10:43:50 AM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

This is one is nice, full of feelings.

thanx a lot Ricky ji....


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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2007, 10:44:37 AM »

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Wah wah... Bahut umda likha hai sonu aapne...

bahoot bahoot shukriya Roja ji.... Usual Smile


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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2007, 05:50:52 PM »

Bahoot Accha Likha Hai Aapne Alone Bad Ji,.


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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2007, 03:04:23 PM »

bahoot bahoot shukriya Janasheen ji...aapne hame padha ye aapki zaranawazi hai.... :lol:


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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2007, 07:27:27 PM »

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bahoot bahoot shukriya Janasheen ji...aapne hame padha ye aapki zaranawazi hai.... :lol:

U Are Always Welcome JI,.
Malik Apka Bhala Kare,.


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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2007, 07:28:37 PM »

Jo Gham Tumhaare Hain,.
Hum Bhi Unhi Ghamon Ke Maare Hain,.

Kaise Kare Khawish Poori Aapki,.
Jab Khud Hum Ek Toot-te Taare Hain,.

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