"yaadein"

by nidhi_yadein on January 20, 2006, 08:46:59 PM
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krpathan
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«Reply #15 on: January 21, 2006, 05:10:11 PM »
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aap ke javab se hum khus hue
kya baat hai aaj se hamari jindagi kisi or ke liye hogi
aap socho vo kon hai

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kadar pathan

BADI MUDDAT SE MERE DIL ME 1 TASVER BETHI HAI
TERI JULFO KI CHAV ME MERI TAKDER BETHI HAI
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Rajbir
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«Reply #16 on: January 21, 2006, 06:45:54 PM »
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Badnaam bhai aap ne bhi is mehfil mein aa kar bahut achcha likha,
aur is mehfil ki raunak badhayi hai...

I just want to say here that i am not a shayar,
but i do appreciate the good work of others... :D

Main aap sab ki posts padhta hoon aur enjoy karta hoon.

Rajbir
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nikki
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«Reply #17 on: January 21, 2006, 07:19:54 PM »
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thanx sis n Sonu... Sabne bahut hi acha likha hai .....

teri yaad ka agar sahara na hota
to hum kaise jee paate
iss dil ko behlane ka to koi chara na hota

main jaanti hun tum kahin aas paas ho
tumhein kaise bataon abb tum hi jeene ki aas ho
pyar ka ehsaas ho, jo mit kar bhi mit na paye woh pyaas ho
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Sonu
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«Reply #18 on: January 21, 2006, 09:38:55 PM »
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nidhi u r most welcome... and thanks

nidhi keya bat hai  kader ji key leya reply o bhut aha likha hia  :lol:

kabhi huthu pey koi baat dil sey pahley ah jati
kahi khaber bhi na thi roshni ki jhalak ah jati
bahut samey sey hum jindgi sejha rahey they
peta nahi kha sey asha ki kiran ah jati

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Thanx a lot once again sonu ji aur phirse bohat hi acha likha hai aapne,excelent Usual Smile .

thanx a lot kadar pathan ji,welcome to yoindia Usual Smile ,aapne bhi bohat hi acha likha hai.

"Jab tum mere saamne hote ho bas tumhe hi nihaarti rehti hun,
      tum pooch bhi baithte ho,aisa tumme aakhir main kya dekhti hun,
      ek ek pal aaj taras rahi hun main tumhare deedaar ke liye,
      har wo lamha deedar ka samet ke rakhti hun isi akelepan k liye."
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Sonu
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«Reply #19 on: January 21, 2006, 09:45:35 PM »
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ahye ahey gaurav ji apka he intjar hu rha tha es mehfil mey...ah beythey hoo mehphil mey to kuh taja geet suna do...key mehphil apkey aney sey or chamkney lagi hai kuch badiya sa shiar to sunado... :lol:

Gham ki yaadon ne aisa gheir rakha hai,
Ki, khushi kaa mauka yaad hi nahi,
Yaad hai to tumhara chehra,
Magar vo bhi ghamon mein shaamil hone lagaa!!


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wah kya baat hai mehfil jam gayi yahan toh....................

Yeh yaadein bhi badi bewafa hoti hain,
Bina bataye chali aati hain,
Kyun nahi rok paate hum inhe,
Uski yaad aate hee Tanhaian bhi besabr ho jaati hain,
Kabhi kabhi rok paana khudko mushkil ho jaata hai,
Kabhi kabhi ye yaadein bhi jaanleva ho jaati hain...............
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Sonu
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«Reply #20 on: January 21, 2006, 09:49:24 PM »
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kader ji bahu khoob...

julfo ko hav na banow key andeyra hu jayga...
jiski umney dil mey tasveer bethayee hai ager sukey ahsiq ko peta lega to beychara bahut paschayaga...  :lol:
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aap ke javab se hum khus hue
kya baat hai aaj se hamari jindagi kisi or ke liye hogi
aap socho vo kon hai

from
kadar pathan

BADI MUDDAT SE MERE DIL ME 1 TASVER BETHI HAI
TERI JULFO KI CHAV ME MERI TAKDER BETHI HAI
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Sonu
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«Reply #21 on: January 21, 2006, 09:57:38 PM »
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u r most welcome nikki... ab legta hai mehphil jamney vali ahi eya to bahut he achye achaey shair tashreef la rahey hai...

bahut khoob nikki woderful...

Zindagi ki rah mein,dost
Milkar bichar jate hain,
Bas yadoon ke sahare,hamein chour jatein hain,
Karte hain ruksat hum unhein,
Mitha sa dard lekar,
Bas isi kwayeesh mein.....
Na bhulaye hamein woh kabhi bhulkar


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thanx sis n Sonu... Sabne bahut hi acha likha hai .....

teri yaad ka agar sahar na hota
to hum kaise jee paate
iss dil ko behlane ka to koi chara na hota

main jaanti hun tum kahin aas paas ho
tumhein kaise bataon abb tum hi jeene ki aas ho
pyar ka ehsaas ho, jo mit kar bhi mit na paye woh pyaas ho
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #22 on: January 21, 2006, 10:19:25 PM »
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Raat hui jab shaam ke baad,
Teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad.
Humne khamosh rehkar bhi dekha,
par teri aawaz aayi har saans ke baad...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #23 on: January 21, 2006, 11:01:54 PM »
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Aree wah kya kehna hai !

Aap sab logon ne yahan aakar to sach much mein mehfil aur rangeen kar di.

Ab ayega maaza bazm-e-mehfil mein... :D

Sonu, burniing and nikki aap sab ne superb likha hai...

Rajbir
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #24 on: January 21, 2006, 11:27:54 PM »
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thnks 4 appreciating everbody rajbir!!!!
 
Har sham aati hai aapki yaad lekar,
 Har sham jati hai aapki yaad dekar,
 hume to us shaam ka intzar hai
 jo aayegi tumhe saath le kar.
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Meena is back
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«Reply #25 on: January 21, 2006, 11:52:08 PM »
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wowwwwwwwwwwww nidhi...apni feelings ko bohot achi tara se bayan kiya hai tumne its avery emotional and nice poem! hearty bhai...u r very lucky to have nidhi!  :D

baki logo ne bhi bohot acha likha hai!! gud work!

 :D
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nikki
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«Reply #26 on: January 22, 2006, 02:13:06 AM »
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thanx Sonu, Rajbir n Meena sis....aap kaise bina kuch likhe hi chali gayi..??
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Rajbir
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«Reply #27 on: January 22, 2006, 03:34:35 AM »
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Thanks everyone... :D

Nikki aap ne sahi kaha...

Meena aap bina kuch likhe kaise chali gayi  Puzzled !

Rajbir
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Sonu
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«Reply #28 on: January 22, 2006, 08:46:19 AM »
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wonderful burning ji...

Yeh dil ki baat ,
Is dil mein hi rahe to acha hai.
Yeh ankhein jab bol rahi hai ,
Yeh Labh khamosh rahe to acha hai"

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Raat hui jab shaam ke baad,
Teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad.
Humne khamosh rehkar bhi dekha,
par teri aawaz aayi har saans ke baad...
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Sonu
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«Reply #29 on: January 22, 2006, 08:50:10 AM »
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thanks rajbir ji...

thanks nikki...

wonderful bruninng ji...

menu ke huya teno aj ahye hai tey kuch likhaya vi nahi hai pheyenti khan vali hu gayee hai... L)):lol: chal vapas ah key likh key jaa kuch... mehfil mey ahyee or kha pe ker chal padi...
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