Yun...

by Qutubuddin on April 06, 2005, 05:11:32 PM
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Yun...

Jo chhor gaya hai isay bhari dunya main yun tanha,
Us bewafa ki yad main roya na karay yun...

Yaro is DIL ko samjhao k dharka na karay yun,
Us ajnabi ki yad main tarpa na karay yun...

Kehta hun isay,jis ne tujhay bhula diya usko bhool ja,
Kehta hai k pathar dil hai wo pathar main banoon kyun...

Jalta hai us ki yad main jalata hai mujhay bhi,
Bhool pata nahin hai DIL usay kawish main kya karoon...

Ques...
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2005, 09:46:44 PM »
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wah ji wah!!!!!!!

"Kehta hun isay,jis ne tujhay bhula diya usko bhool ja,
Kehta hai k pathar dil hai wo pathar main banoon kyun... "


yeh lines to bohot hi ache hai!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2005, 11:11:54 AM »
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Bhoot Bhoot Sukreyaa Meena..

Thank you very much..

I also like your post much.

Can you tell me  more about yourself, if you don't mind.

Ques...
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2005, 09:08:18 PM »
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thanx a lot qutu ji (sorry maine apka nick thoda cut kar diya  :oops: )

apke sawal pe ke apne bare kuch kahon , maine yaha pe ek abr ek khud ki likhi poem past ki thi woh kuch yuh thi:

Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to „Meena“ har roz ban gayi mai.


 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2005, 01:43:31 AM »
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Wah! Bohat khoob Qutubuddin & Meena......
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2005, 02:13:05 PM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
thanx a lot qutu ji (sorry maine apka nick thoda cut kar diya  :oops: )

apke sawal pe ke apne bare kuch kahon , maine yaha pe ek abr ek khud ki likhi poem past ki thi woh kuch yuh thi:

Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to „Meena“ har roz ban gayi mai.


 :D



hhumm Amazing ......... great piece of work........

Teri pehchaan tujh se hi ik din karvaunga mein
Tere wajood se tujh ko bhi ik din milwaunga mein

kehti hai ke wajood ki talash mein ban gyi hu "Meena"
teri talash ko ser-e-anjam tak ik din pahnchanga mein

Samjthti hai apney aap ko tu zimedariyooN ka boj
iss boj se Nijaat tujhko ik din dilwaunga mien

Tu rog bani kissi ka muhhobat ki talash mein
iss rog ko apney jigar mein ik din basaunga mein

ker rha hai "HumTum" yeh wadda tujh se "Meena"
Sach ker ke in sab batooN ko ik din dikhaunga mein



HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2005, 04:29:52 PM »
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wah.... HumTum ji .... bahut hi achi poem hai aap ki...... kya baat hai..... poems to mujhey likhni nhi aati lekin mein hamesha aap ki har ik poem pedti hoon...... bahut hi achi hoti hai....... aur aap se ik baat puchni thi agar aap bura na maney to yeh aapki poem mein kissi ko aagey bej sakti hooN Huh?

Aap ki fan....

Jyoti
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2005, 07:52:53 PM »
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Quote from: "Meena"
thanx a lot qutu ji (sorry maine apka nick thoda cut kar diya  :oops: )

apke sawal pe ke apne bare kuch kahon , maine yaha pe ek abr ek khud ki likhi poem past ki thi woh kuch yuh thi:

Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to „Meena“ har roz ban gayi mai.


 :D



hhumm Amazing ......... great piece of work........

Teri pehchaan tujh se hi ik din karvaunga mein
Tere wajood se tujh ko bhi ik din milwaunga mein

kehti hai ke wajood ki talash mein ban gyi hu "Meena"
teri talash ko ser-e-anjam tak ik din pahnchanga mein

Samjthti hai apney aap ko tu zimedariyooN ka boj
iss boj se Nijaat tujhko ik din dilwaunga mien

Tu rog bani kissi ka muhhobat ki talash mein
iss rog ko apney jigar mein ik din basaunga mein

ker rha hai "HumTum" yeh wadda tujh se "Meena"
Sach ker ke in sab batooN ko ik din dikhaunga mein



HumTum



wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww  :D aab ispe koi jawab nahin mere pas!!! bohot khub ji!!!

 :D
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2005, 11:59:17 AM »
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Very  good Introduction by Meena and the reply of Amit was very very nice..

That really great and good..

Keep up the good work HumTum..

Aab aapkoo janaa hai..
Jan kar pahcahnaa hai...
Pahcankar kar manaa hai..
Ke, Aaphee ,,Meena'' Ho...


Ques....
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2005, 01:12:26 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya!!!!!

mitti ke putle hai mitti me mil jayenge,
Mar kar bhi asman me hum timtimayenge!!

 :D
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2005, 08:09:52 PM »
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"
mitti ke putle hai mitti me mil jayenge,
Mar kar bhi asman me hum timtimayenge!!
"

Bahoot khoob Meena....

Ques...
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2005, 09:29:18 PM »
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wah.... HumTum ji .... bahut hi achi poem hai aap ki...... kya baat hai..... poems to mujhey likhni nhi aati lekin mein hamesha aap ki har ik poem pedti hoon...... bahut hi achi hoti hai....... aur aap se ik baat puchni thi agar aap bura na maney to yeh aapki poem mein kissi ko aagey bej sakti hooN Huh?

Aap ki fan....

Jyoti


Shocked Shocked Shocked  

Shukriya ji Shukriya.......

lelo lelo
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2005, 09:31:30 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya!!!!!

mitti ke putle hai mitti me mil jayenge,
Mar kar bhi asman me hum timtimayenge!!

 :D


Jaan dali hai usney Mitti ke putlo mein
Khuda ki Nidaamat ko yun Be-asar na ker !!!!
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