जब उस लडकी का नाम लेता हूं,

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My one of best poem....Again I am shring with u........


जब उस लडकी का नाम लेता हूं,
एक  अजीब उलफन सी होती हे,
ये कसीस हे  इस दिल की,
उसकी यादो से एक उलझन सी होती हे,
रात  की  ये दिल   की आहटे ,
मानो एक समुदर की लहर मे हलचल सी होती हे,
ये केसी मंजिल हे,ये केसा ठिकाना हे,
वंहा तक पंहुचने की  हर एक शर्त मंजूर होती हे
उसकी हर एक छोटी से दस्तक,
एक  चेहरे पर एक नूर सी होती हे,
उसकी कही गयी हर  एक बात,
हमारी सांसो से  बंधी एक डोर सी होती हे
खो जाते हम हम मे,
ये  लिखे लफ्सो की हमे बांधे हुयी एक  जंजीर सी होती हे,
पवन गुप्ता

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«Reply #1 on: November 02, 2012, 01:11:31 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2012, 01:15:11 PM »
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My one of best poem....Again I am shring with u........


जब उस लडकी का नाम लेता हूं,
एक  अजीब उलफन सी होती हे,
ये कसीस हे  इस दिल की,
उसकी यादो से एक उलझन सी होती हे,
रात  की  ये दिल   की आहटे ,
मानो एक समुदर की लहर मे हलचल सी होती हे,
ये केसी मंजिल हे,ये केसा ठिकाना हे,
वंहा तक पंहुचने की  हर एक शर्त मंजूर होती हे
उसकी हर एक छोटी से दस्तक,
एक  चेहरे पर एक नूर सी होती हे,
उसकी कही गयी हर  एक बात,
हमारी सांसो से  बंधी एक डोर सी होती हे
खो जाते हम हम मे,
ये  लिखे लफ्सो की हमे बांधे हुयी एक  जंजीर सी होती हे,
पवन गुप्ता




Very Nice...bahut Khoooooob!!!


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«Reply #3 on: November 02, 2012, 02:23:14 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 02, 2012, 04:07:43 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 02, 2012, 05:03:06 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: November 02, 2012, 09:24:22 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2012, 05:41:51 PM »
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 Applause  Applause Applause v nice.....
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Nice!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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