Aik mudaat sey.....................

by *kashish* on January 04, 2005, 07:31:55 AM
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:| Ankh se ankh mila bat banata keun hai
Tu ager mujh se khafa hai to chupata keun hai

Ghair lagta hai na apnoon ki tarhan milta hai
Tu zamane ki tarhan mujh ko satata keun hai

Waqt ke sath khayalat badal jatey hain
Ye haqeeqat hai mager mujh ko sunata keun hai

Aik mudaat se jahan qafley guzrey hi nahi
aise rahoon pey charaghoon ko jalata keun hai :|
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2005, 04:02:44 PM »
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Nice!! Kashish!

Wo paraya hai phir bhi apna sa lagta kyun hai
Wo haqeeqat hai magar phir bhi ek sapna kyun hai!!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2005, 04:04:17 PM »
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Nice Kashish and Talat...

Wafa ki Manzil ki Jab Hame Talaash thi..
Laga Muje aisa tu mere Aas Paas Thi....
Par tume na dekha aur kar bethe yu Sitam....
Shayad is mod Par tum Bhule wo Kasam................ :oops:
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2005, 04:37:20 PM »
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very nice kashish and mis kismat.
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2005, 07:40:23 PM »
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wah!!!!!!!!!!   excellent work.....kashish ...talat,,,...miss kismat......

Tum Apnay Khayaloan Ko Mujhay Soanp K Dekho
Her Shakhs Amanat Main Khayanat Nahee Kerta....
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2005, 10:50:50 PM »
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Usual Smile Thanks to all of you my friends for share my feelings.....thankxx Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2005, 10:53:14 PM »
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waah all very nice
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2005, 11:42:12 AM »
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urc welcome....kashish..........nishi.....  :lol:
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2005, 10:33:22 PM »
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"Ghair lagta hai na apnoon ki tarhan milta hai
Tu zamane ki tarhan mujh ko satata keun hai "

beautiful lines!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2005, 10:36:29 PM »
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nice meena.........

"Hoon to main bhi akhir isi zamane ka,
 kahin galat na aank dein teri nazrein mujhe."
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«Reply #10 on: January 07, 2005, 11:06:42 PM »
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arre maine kuch nahin likha yaar, mujhe kyu nice nice bol rahi ho  :?
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«Reply #11 on: January 07, 2005, 11:13:50 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
nice meena.........

"Hoon to main bhi akhir isi zamane ka,
 kahin galat na aank dein teri nazrein mujhe."


wah!!!!!!!!  nidhi..................meena...........jabadast jawab nidhi ka  :lol:

talab ki manzelen nayab to nahi lekin
too apne ap ko meri tarah ganwa to sahi


talab= chahat, jaroorat
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«Reply #12 on: January 07, 2005, 11:16:28 PM »
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nidhi aur waheed ji aap dono ke sher samajh me hi nahin aye  sad5
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«Reply #13 on: January 07, 2005, 11:24:11 PM »
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oh meena ...

main batata hoon......tum udash mat ho

talab ki manzilne =  dil ki aarzoo, yaani jo dil chahta ho

dooshari line hai

too apne aap ko meri tarah  gawan to sahi

yaani main aap se kah raha hoon main jaise barbaad hua hoon ... waise tum bhi barbad hokar hokar dekho.......  :lol:

samjh mein aaya.............  agar samjh mein na aaye to baar baar padho.......lekin kaayde se....

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«Reply #14 on: January 07, 2005, 11:30:53 PM »
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nayab means?  :?
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