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Author Topic: Dono ko hai Ishq, magar....!!!  (Read 340 times)
Celmira
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« on: May 15, 2008, 07:24:49 AM »
Ye maine kisi ki special farmaaish pe likha hai...!! Ye ek ladke ke jazbaat hain, jo kisi se mohabbat karta hai aur jaanta hai ki use bhi mohabbat hai, par dono ne iqrar nahin kiya hai...!!

I dont know whether I have done justice to this or not !!
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« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2008, 07:37:55 AM »
NICE ONE....
CELMIRA JI,
VERY WELL EXPRESSED HIS FEELINGS....
BY. K.SHAEL
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« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2008, 07:45:38 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 15, 2008, 07:24:49 AM
Ye maine kisi ki special farmaaish pe likha hai...!! Ye ek ladke ke jazbaat hain, jo kisi se mohabbat karta hai aur jaanta hai ki use bhi mohabbat hai, par dono ne iqrar nahin kiya hai...!!

I dont know whether I have done justice to this or not !!








bahoot khoob pahalee baar padha aapko, achaa bayaan kiya hai aapne....

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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2008, 07:56:35 AM »
Oye hoye..ladkon ke jazbaat aap ki zubaani Winking

Mashallah bahut achche !

Ab tum meri taraf se bhi likh diya karo shayari...mujhe to likhna aata nahi sad5

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Kyun bhai Talat ji ko nahi pehchana naye roop mein Winking
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« Reply #4 on: May 15, 2008, 08:03:07 AM »
Very Good combination of Beautiful Words with Emotions..
Really very very nice.. Celmira.. Applause
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« Reply #5 on: May 15, 2008, 09:10:05 AM »
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YAR TU JAB AAPKO PATA HYE TU AAP KUCH KYOUN NAHEEN KARTYE
AAP DONO K DARMYAN ESYE HALAT PYDA KARO K WO KUD KIH DYEEN
KISE KO MILNA KOYE GUNHA TU NAHEEN.
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fareshta ho na fareshtoun k jisye ho
wo jis ki muje talash hye mare jisa ho.
mare jazbat ko samjta ho bus kafi hye,
wo koye ho kahyeen ho jisa b ho?
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« Reply #6 on: May 15, 2008, 09:22:45 AM »
You have done Full justice in creating this beautiful poem.  Applause
B ahut accha laga padkar Talat sis
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« Reply #7 on: May 15, 2008, 11:34:37 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahoot khoob bahoot hi aacha likha hai aap ne
us ladke ke dil ke saare baate keh daali aap ne


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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« Reply #8 on: May 15, 2008, 02:02:07 PM »
Written with a polytonal movement of time and feelings.
Bravo!!
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« Reply #9 on: May 15, 2008, 02:52:53 PM »
Thanks all the friends for reading this and appreciating the thoughts and feelings.


k.shael Bohot shukriya aapne pasand kiya ! Usual Smile


Netra Ji Hum mashkoor hain aapke ki aap yahan aaye aur humara hausla badhaya Usual Smile


Rajbir Ji bas farmaish ki kisi ne, to poori karni padi...bohot shukriya..aap batayen, hum likhne ki koshish karenge Usual Smile


Mahiya Your views are always much appreciated and mean so much to me, thanks so much Mahiya Usual Smile

Noor Aapka shukriya, Ji ye haqiqat nahin hai, sirf kisi ne is tarah ki feelings pe likhne ki farmaaish ki thi Usual Smile

Roja Thanks a lot Roja sis, I am happy you liked it. Usual Smile

Baadal Thanks Baadal ek ladke ki nazar se is poem ko padhne aur pasand karne ke liye Usual Smile

S.Naami I am thankful to you for reading the poem with such depth...Usual Smile
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« Reply #10 on: May 15, 2008, 03:18:25 PM »
wah wah wah bahoot khoob Celmira, bahoot hi achi kavita ki rachan ki hai apne!! Good job!!
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« Reply #11 on: May 16, 2008, 03:51:01 AM »
Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Celmira Ji.. Behad Khubsoorat Alfaaz Bikhere hain aapne.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Daad Kubool kare..

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« Reply #12 on: May 16, 2008, 04:17:07 AM »
Lovely


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« Reply #13 on: May 16, 2008, 08:40:59 AM »
bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne celmira sis..Usual Smile
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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they...
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« Reply #14 on: May 16, 2008, 08:44:32 PM »
Celmira ji Aadaab...  Behad umda or nafasat se kisi ke jazbaat pesh kiye aapne, is hunar mandi or saliqe ki dad deta hun, or ek baat ar'z he ham ye kaarigari to nahi jaante albatta sur mila ne ki or saath dene ki koshish ki he ummid he sab ko pasand aayegi.

Aap ne ladke ke jazbaat pesh kiye to sochha me kisi ladki ke jazbaat pesh karun, go ke maharat nahi isme bas us khat ka jawaab likhne ki ek kamzor si koshish he.

Kya kahun ab haal-e-dil ham dam mere
Tum se Poshidah nahi he gam mere
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Me tere dil ki hi ek aawaaz hun
Khul na paya jo kabhi wo raaz hun
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Khwaab se bichhdi huai taabeer hun
Bante bante rehgai taqdeer hun
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Ranj-o-gam ki chil-chilati dhoop hun
Zindagi tera hi bigda roop hun
 tearyeyed
Is qadar mayusyon ke darmiya'n
Hogai taqdeer mujh pe meherba'n
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Or tum aaye baharon ki tara
Jhilmilate chaand taaron ki tara
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Us suhane pal pe khushiya'n waardi
Ham ne to duniya hi apni haar di
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Sun ke teri baat me sharma gai
Apne hi jazzbaat se ghabra gai
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Jese palbhar gardishen hi ruk gai
Khud-b-khud nazren hayaa se jhuk gai
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Dil ko raahat he, koi apna to he
Khoob soorat sa mera sapna to he
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Ha'n magar sapna adhura he abhi
Dil ki baate'n likh nahi paai sabhi
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Rafta rafta faasle mit jaaenge
Jald hi baadal ghne chhat jaaenge
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Dil se dil ki he nahi ye dooriya'n
Fasla he Bas nazar ke Darmiya'n
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