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« Reply #15 on: May 16, 2008, 09:06:09 PM »

Wow Talat Appi nd Sayyid Ji........i got mesmorized by ur words..............just too beautifully written............
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« Reply #16 on: May 16, 2008, 09:37:49 PM »

Wow Talat Appi nd Sayyid Ji........i got mesmorized by ur words..............just too beautifully written............

Shukriya mohtarama jo aap ne saraha.
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« Reply #17 on: May 17, 2008, 07:02:59 AM »

Pooja, Mann, Fakeid, Honey and Palkhi, aapka bohot bohot shukriya jo aapne is poem ko pasand kiya Usual Smile
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« Reply #18 on: May 17, 2008, 07:04:06 AM »

Celmira ji Aadaab...  Behad umda or nafasat se kisi ke jazbaat pesh kiye aapne, is hunar mandi or saliqe ki dad deta hun, or ek baat ar'z he ham ye kaarigari to nahi jaante albatta sur mila ne ki or saath dene ki koshish ki he ummid he sab ko pasand aayegi.

Aap ne ladke ke jazbaat pesh kiye to sochha me kisi ladki ke jazbaat pesh karun, go ke maharat nahi isme bas us khat ka jawaab likhne ki ek kamzor si koshish he.


Kya kahun ab haal-e-dil ham dam mere
Tum se Poshidah nahi he gam mere
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Me tere dil ki hi ek aawaaz hun
Khul na paya jo kabhi wo raaz hun
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Khwaab se bichhdi huai taabeer hun
Bante bante rehgai taqdeer hun
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Ranj-o-gam ki chil-chilati dhoop hun
Zindagi tera hi bigda roop hun
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Is qadar mayusyon ke darmiya'n
Hogai taqdeer mujh pe meherba'n
 love9
Or tum aaye baharon ki tara
Jhilmilate chaand taaron ki tara
 love9
Us suhane pal pe khushiya'n waardi
Ham ne to duniya hi apni haar di
 love9
Sun ke teri baat me sharma gai
Apne hi jazzbaat se ghabra gai
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Jese palbhar gardishen hi ruk gai
Khud-b-khud nazren hayaa se jhuk gai
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Dil ko raahat he, koi apna to he
Khoob soorat sa mera sapna to he
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Ha'n magar sapna adhura he abhi
Dil ki baate'n likh nahi paai sabhi
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Rafta rafta faasle mit jaaenge
Jald hi baadal ghne chhat jaaenge
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Dil se dil ki he nahi ye dooriya'n
Fasla he Bas nazar ke Darmiya'n


Shukriya Sayyid......!!

Bohot hi khoobsurat jawab diya hai aapne...bohot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #19 on: May 17, 2008, 07:10:46 AM »

Sayyid

Excellent reply ! Daad kabool kijiye Applause Applause Applause
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« Reply #20 on: May 17, 2008, 09:04:49 AM »


Dil ko raahat he, koi apna to he
Khoob soorat sa mera sapna to he
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Ha'n magar sapna adhura he abhi
Dil ki baate'n likh nahi paai sabhi
 love9
Rafta rafta faasle mit jaaenge
Jald hi baadal ghne chhat jaaenge
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Dil se dil ki he nahi ye dooriya'n
Fasla he Bas nazar ke Darmiya'n


Randeri Miyan, kahne kahun ya na kahun, par mere liye in upari ashaar se nikalna buhat mushkil hai.
Yun samjho mera haal aapne bayaan kya. Buhat hi saleeqa shuaari ka muzaahira karke yeh nazm paish ki gayi, mubarakbaad dete hain.
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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men     zubaan main ne.

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« Reply #21 on: May 17, 2008, 09:06:30 AM »

Pooja, Mann, Fakeid, Honey and Palkhi, aapka bohot bohot shukriya jo aapne is poem ko pasand kiya Usual Smile
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Sayyid bohat ache likhe hai aapne

Thanks Celmira sis ..Usual Smile
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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they
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« Reply #22 on: May 17, 2008, 02:12:29 PM »

Shukriya Sayyid......!!

Bohot hi khoobsurat jawab diya hai aapne...bohot khoob Applause Applause Applause

Celmira ji me aap ka mshkoor hun.
Tasalli huai jo aap ne padha or saraha.
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« Reply #23 on: May 17, 2008, 02:17:45 PM »

Sayyid

Excellent reply ! Daad kabool kijiye Applause Applause Applause

Rajbir ji Aadaab....
Ham daad-e-yaar dil-o-jaan se qubool karte hen, or ye shikayat bhi nahi karte ke ars-e-daraz ke baad aap ne dost ko yaad farmaya.
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« Reply #24 on: May 17, 2008, 02:23:13 PM »

Randeri Miyan, kahne kahun ya na kahun, par mere liye in upari ashaar se nikalna buhat mushkil hai.
Yun samjho mera haal aapne bayaan kya. Buhat hi saleeqa shuaari ka muzaahira karke yeh nazm paish ki gayi, mubarakbaad dete hain.


Zahe naseeb!!!

Aap jese danishmand ki sarahna hamare liye taskeen-e-qalb or hosla afzai ka ba'as he. jazakallah...
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« Reply #25 on: May 17, 2008, 02:26:00 PM »

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Sayyid bohat ache likhe hai aapne

Thanks Celmira sis ..Usual Smile

Mohtarma... aap ki navazish ka dil se shukarguzaar hun.
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« Reply #26 on: May 17, 2008, 03:07:47 PM »

Zahe naseeb!!!

Aap jese danishmand ki sarahna hamare liye taskeen-e-qalb or hosla afzai ka ba'as he. jazakallah...

Karam nawaazi karne ke liye buhat buhat shukriya....
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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men     zubaan main ne.

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« Reply #27 on: September 22, 2008, 02:42:22 PM »

Thankyou ! Yoindia
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