ghazal zaroorato ki

by deetri1 on May 18, 2008, 02:41:45 AM
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tera gham zaroori hai, teri chaah zaroori hai
charagh koi bar sare-raah zaroori hai

na waqt ka asar hai kuchh na mausamo ka
hame badalne ke liye wo nigah zaroori hai

har ghar me ho dhoop har ghar me ho hawa
har baam pe saba o meher o maah zaroori hai

jalte hue bhi hai kitni bujhi hui shama
ki roshni ke liye patangon ki aah zaroori hai

dunia maar rahi hai aur mar raha hoon mein
sabka dil rakhna hai har parwaah zaroori hai

unko junoon hai faqat kursi ka dosto
kuchh raam zaroori hai kuchh allah zaroori hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2008, 03:10:29 AM »
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Very nice again, Deetri !! Keep writing !
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2008, 01:23:51 AM »
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[quote author=deetri1 link=topic=28448.msg7

jalte hue bhi hai kitni bujhi hui shama
ki roshni ke liye patangon ki aah zaroori hai

dunia maar rahi hai aur mar raha hoon mein
sabka dil rakhna hai har parwaah zaroori hai

unko junoon hai faqat kursi ka dosto
kuchh raam zaroori hai kuchh allah zaroori hai
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kamaal he janaab aapki rachnao mein kamaal he-kaash aapka ansh aa jaye garib ko!
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2008, 01:34:52 AM »
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unko junoon hai faqat kursi ka dosto
kuchh raam zaroori hai kuchh allah zaroori hai

zaroori to kuch bhee nahi
sub nasihat ki baaten hai
hum khud jis pe na chal sake
doosron ko diye jaate hai
fark bas itna hai
unme,tujhme aur mujhme
woh raaja,aap baaghi
aur hum piyade hai!

Prateek
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2008, 01:36:05 AM »
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good one deetri and Prateek ji!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2008, 02:47:47 AM »
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thanx prateek bhai
tareef ke liye shukriya
piyaade ka istemaal kya khoob kiya hai aapne..its very true aisi jung me hum log bas piyade hi ban kar rah jate hein...good one...
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2008, 01:35:14 PM »
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tera gham zaroori hai, teri chaah zaroori hai
charagh koi bar sare-raah zaroori hai

na waqt ka asar hai kuchh na mausamo ka
hame badalne ke liye wo nigah zaroori hai

har ghar me ho dhoop har ghar me ho hawa
har baam pe saba o meher o maah zaroori hai

jalte hue bhi hai kitni bujhi hui shama
ki roshni ke liye patangon ki aah zaroori hai

dunia maar rahi hai aur mar raha hoon mein
sabka dil rakhna hai har parwaah zaroori hai

unko junoon hai faqat kursi ka dosto
kuchh raam zaroori hai kuchh allah zaroori hai


very very nice.....
kya ye aapne likha hai??
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2008, 02:22:23 AM »
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bekarar saheb

aapka comment padha aur me bhi bekaraar ho gaya.
aapka tareef karne ka andaaz(agar tareef hai to)mujhe behad pasand aaya...mujhe aitraaf karne me katai jhijhak nahi(balki khushi hai)ki ye a ghazal mujh nacheez ne hi likhi hai.
ab aapka jawab pakar hi karaar aayega.
thanks
yours
deepak tripathi
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2008, 07:30:09 AM »
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dunia maar rahi hai aur mar raha hoon mein
sabka dil rakhna hai har parwaah zaroori hai

unko junoon hai faqat kursi ka dosto
kuchh raam zaroori hai kuchh allah zaroori hai

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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2008, 10:24:04 AM »
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bekarar saheb

aapka comment padha aur me bhi bekaraar ho gaya.
aapka tareef karne ka andaaz(agar tareef hai to)mujhe behad pasand aaya...mujhe aitraaf karne me katai jhijhak nahi(balki khushi hai)ki ye a ghazal mujh nacheez ne hi likhi hai.
ab aapka jawab pakar hi karaar aayega.
thanks
yours
deepak tripathi
shukr hai aapne mere comment ko positive liya..
deepak ji aapne bahoot achcha likha hai. aapke agle kalam ka hame intzaar rhega..
ishwar se yahi prarthna hai ke aap achcha likhte rahen..
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