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«Reply #15 on: May 04, 2008, 03:20:11 PM »
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Wonderful reply Shihaab baba.
Amazing response Puna saahiba.
You both doing a hit parade.
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«Reply #16 on: May 08, 2008, 01:18:48 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob,.
Ek Ek Kalam bhi Kabeel-e-Tareef Hai,.
Yunhi Likhte rahiye,. Applause
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«Reply #17 on: May 10, 2008, 01:12:16 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 25, 2008, 06:54:57 PM
Rukh Ab Hawaaon Ka Badalne Laga Hai.
Ye Mausam Bhi Rangeen Sa Lagne Laga Hai.

Fizao Main Bhi Ajib Si Khusboo Aati Hai
Haan Teri Yaadon Ka Kafila Mehkane Laga Hai

Jab Se Likha Hai Tere Naam Ko. Kya Kahe
Ye Pagal Dil Aur Bhi Dhadakne Laga Hai.

Kab Tak Bhala Chhup Paati Ye Mohabbat Meri
Is Kadar Aankhon Main Tu Samane Laga Hai.

Tim Timate Sitaro Ko Ab Chhupna Hi Hoga.
Nayi Umeedein Lekar Ik Shamsh Aane Laga Ha.

Bahut Khoob likha hai Shihab... Applause
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«Reply #18 on: May 10, 2008, 01:32:40 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 25, 2008, 06:54:57 PM
Rukh Ab Hawaaon Ka Badalne Laga Hai.
Ye Mausam Bhi Rangeen Sa Lagne Laga Hai.
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Tim Timate Sitaro Ko Ab Chhupna Hi Hoga.
Nayi Umeedein Lekar Ik Shamsh Aane Laga Ha.

Baldte hain rukh havaon ke jab, -
Rootht jaate hai panchi kai tab, -

Mahekte hain phool khizaan men bhi, -
Par un guloon se khushboo nahin aati, -

Naam likh kar rait par gum ho kyun, -
Ek lahar aayegi aur mitadegi yun, -

Chhupana baat gar teri taqdeer men hai, -
Tadbeer to tere hi loh-o-qalam se hai, -

Suraj bhi hai ik sitara yahan, -
Kahkashaan hai to umeeden hain jawaan. -


(Syed Naami)

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        Shihab baba,
        Jaisa samjh men aya ek tik likh paya, aapse kon bhala jeete.
        Shukriya.
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«Reply #19 on: May 10, 2008, 07:10:13 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 10, 2008, 01:32:40 PM
Baldte hain rukh havaon ke jab, -
Rootht jaate hai panchi kai tab, -

Mahekte hain phool khizaan men bhi, -
Par un guloon se khushboo nahin aati, -

Naam likh kar rait par gum ho kyun, -
Ek lahar aayegi aur mitadegi yun, -

Chhupana baat gar teri taqdeer men hai, -
Tadbeer to tere hi loh-o-qalam se hai, -

Suraj bhi hai ik sitara yahan, -
Kahkashaan hai to umeeden hain jawaan. -


(Syed Naami)

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        Shihab baba,
        Jaisa samjh men aya ek tik likh paya, aapse kon bhala jeete.
        Shukriya.

Very Very Nice... Applause
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«Reply #20 on: May 11, 2008, 04:35:50 PM »
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Nice of you Mahiya jee. Thanks

Quote from: Shihab on May 10, 2008, 07:07:22 PM
Kya Bhai Jaan Muj Garib Ka Kyun Mazak Uda Rahe Hai Aap?
Jahan Tak Likhne Ki Baat Hai To Usme Hum Zarre Barbar Bhi Nahi Aapke Saamne.
Aur Haan Bohat Bohat Shukariya Humari Baat
Par Roshni Daalne Ke Liye...Khush Rahe..Majid

Shihab baba, Aisa kyun aisa sochte ho, sach ko sach nahin to kya jhoot likhun haan? Buhat hi deeda dilli dikha rahe ho hum par kya baat hai bhaya. Kuchh to hai!!  Is it SO!

Thank you so much baba
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«Reply #21 on: May 14, 2008, 06:55:28 PM »
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Waah Bhai,./
Waah,.
Kya Mehfil Sajaai Hai aap Sabne,.
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«Reply #22 on: May 14, 2008, 06:56:59 PM »
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Chup Nahi Sakti Kabhi Mohabbat Kisi Ki Nazar Se,.
Har Ek Aadmi Is Jahaan Mein Mohabbat Me Dooba Hua Hai,.

_______________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #23 on: May 14, 2008, 07:01:02 PM »
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Sab dostho ney acha likha hai ... Applause
Nice lines Azeem bro..Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: May 14, 2008, 07:07:09 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 10, 2008, 01:32:40 PM
Baldte hain rukh havaon ke jab, -
Rootht jaate hai panchi kai tab, -

Mahekte hain phool khizaan men bhi, -
Par un guloon se khushboo nahin aati, -

Naam likh kar rait par gum ho kyun, -
Ek lahar aayegi aur mitadegi yun, -

Chhupana baat gar teri taqdeer men hai, -
Tadbeer to tere hi loh-o-qalam se hai, -

Suraj bhi hai ik sitara yahan, -
Kahkashaan hai to umeeden hain jawaan. -


(Syed Naami)

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        Shihab baba,
        Jaisa samjh men aya ek tik likh paya, aapse kon bhala jeete.
        Shukriya.

Bahut umda likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #25 on: May 14, 2008, 08:47:20 PM »
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Bohot khoob Shihab, Punam, Azeem and S. Naami...bohot achcha likha hai aap sab ne...
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«Reply #26 on: May 15, 2008, 03:20:09 AM »
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Thanks Azeem bhaya, Celmira Jee, Roja ma'am, aap sab logon ne hosla badhaya hamara, tah-e-dil se mashkoor hun.
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«Reply #27 on: May 15, 2008, 03:24:35 AM »
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wowow ek se bard kar ek... goodjob by all~!!
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«Reply #28 on: May 25, 2008, 04:17:34 PM »
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Shukriya,.
And U Are Welcome Syed naami,.
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«Reply #29 on: May 26, 2008, 12:44:31 AM »
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Thanks a lot dear Jaanasheen, Aur sab doston ka mashkoor hun...
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