Kaise Main So Jaau -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #15 on: February 22, 2008, 02:30:04 PM »

Thanks Talat!!!


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #16 on: February 22, 2008, 06:37:57 PM »

KISI KI SAADGI SE MERI KISMAT BHI
NAYE RANG PAA GAYI
SIRF UNKE BAAT KARNE SE
"KHWAISH" KI ZINDAGI MEIN BAHAAR AA GAYI

AB WOH YEH NA SOCHE KE UNKE HISAAB SE KUCH BAAT BANI
SHAYAD PHIR JAL NA JAAYE WOH CHIRAAG JO WOH ABHI BHUJA GAYI

TASVEER DEKHNE SE YAHA KIS KA DIL BHARTA HAI
NA UTAR SAKEGI WOH QAYAMAT TAK
JO NASHA APNE BAATON SE
WOH PILA GAYI...

HAR BAAT KI WAJEH DHOONDTE REHTE HAI WOH
BINA KOI WAJEH KE PYAAR BHI HOTA HAI
YEH BAATE SHAYAD UNHE BHI KUCH SEEKHLA GAYI...

AAJ APNE RAAHO PAR PHIR NAZAR DAALO
KISI NE YEH BAAT BHI KUCH AISE DHANG SE KAHI
KE WOH BAAT AB DIL-O-JAAN PE CHA GAYI...

MAIN NAHI JAANTA KE AB AGLA KADAM KYA HOGA MERA
BAS...LIKH RAHA HOON JO KUCH BHI
YUH SAMAJLO KI KALAM MUJHSE LIKHWA GAYI....


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Hum Door Se Pehchchaan Lete Hai....

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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #17 on: February 22, 2008, 06:56:27 PM »

Bahoot hi payara likha hai khwaish ji!!

Bahar tere ane se yaha gulsita khil gaya
Naseeb wala hai wo, jise tu mil gaya

Sochna hai kay abaat bani ya nahi
Tere muskurane se gul ek naya khil gaya

Aai thi nind bahoot yatan se na jaane kis tarah
Jhonka yah teri baato ka phir nind le gaya

Bin wajah ke pyar ki ab wajah kaya kahe
Dil le gaya jo wo chain bhi le gaya

Likhte raho jo bhi kalam kahti rahe tumhe
Apne aise shabdo se koi jaadu hai kar gaya


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #18 on: February 22, 2008, 09:50:26 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 15, 2008, 04:11:47 PM

Meri sochon mai ho tum ayye, kaise mai so jaau
Agan lagi jo tere khayal se, kaise mai so jaau

Dhadkane bulane lagi tujhe, kaise mai so jaau
Khayalo ne li agrdai , kaise mai so jaau

Ankhon mai teri surat muskaai, kaise mai so jaau
Chanda ne chandini failai, kaise mai so jaau

Beheke yah tan-man, kaise mai so jaau
Kareeb bahoot kareeb tu lage, kaise mai so jaau

Meri sochon mai ho tum ayye, kaise mai so jaau
Agan lagi jo tere khayal se, kaise mai so jaau

superb...and romantic creation.... wah


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #19 on: February 22, 2008, 10:01:03 PM »

shukaria dear!!!


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #20 on: February 23, 2008, 03:43:49 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 21, 2008, 12:24:59 PM

kaya baat hai.. romance se judai aor phir sula diya!!! aise laga jaise narrow hills per driving kar rahi hu... magar padte hi jo p[ahle words kaghe wo hai SO SWEET!! Bahoot achi lagi apki yah kavita!!!

Liya tera naam, dil be-imaan ho gaya
Chand-taro ko dekha, bas ek tera naam ho gaya

Subah ki kise fikar, jugnuo se pyar ho gaya
Her dua main managa tujhe, lo ikraar ho gaya

Roshini hai ab hai tumse, tumse hi zindagi
Is jameen per tu ab mera chand ho gaya

Kahne ko uthi thi nigah khuda hafiz
Magar kaya kare
Milte hi najar, dil beimaan ho gaya

Ho Sorry Ji Humari Wajah Se
Aapko Aisi Jagah driving Karni Padi....

Well Humne Aapki Likhwat Main
Dard Ishq Aur Judaai Mehsoos Ki
So Hume Bhi Laga Ki Hum Bhi Dard Ishq Aur Judaai
Ke Saath Hi Likhe......
Waise Kuch Khata Ho To Maafi.
Abhi To Hum Sikh Rahe Hain Ji...
Aur Bohat Bohat Shukariya Ji
Humari Bakwaas Ko Kavita Ka Naam Dene Ke Liye...hmhm

Aur Aapne Bhi Bohat Achha Likha Hai Lage Raho...


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Aur Ruh Ka Kona Kona Ek Yaad Ne Mehkaaya Hai.

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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #21 on: February 25, 2008, 05:00:33 PM »

shabdo ke sath sath lines se bhi cheating karne lage.. mujhko laga ki app likh kar gaye hai kavita.. parda to msg mila!!! Koi baat nahi jab man ho app akar likh jaaye... kuch likha ho to agge likhne ko sahara mil jaata hai!!


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #22 on: February 26, 2008, 06:30:20 AM »

Hume Laga Kahi Fir Aap Narrow Hills Pe Nikal Gaye To
Bus Isi Darse Nahi Likha..hmhmh

Kher Main Baad Main Jarur Likh Dunga Ji


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #23 on: February 26, 2008, 01:50:40 PM »

yaani hum apni sahi feelings apki kavita ke baare na likha kare.. app shabdo ka kheil na kheile .. waiting for your reply with poetry!!


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #24 on: February 26, 2008, 07:38:20 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 22, 2008, 06:37:57 PM

Bahut khoob khwaish ji...


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #25 on: February 27, 2008, 07:32:36 AM »

Nahi Ji Aap Likh Sakte Hain
Hum To Yunhi Keh Rahe The
Pooja Ji Hum Koi Shayar Nahi Hai
Bus Kuch Banta Hai To Likh Dete Hai
Par Harbaar Nahi Banta Hai Ji
Aur Waise Bhi Abhi To Sikh Rahe Hai
Kher Ab Aapki Baat Bhi To Nahi Taal Sakte
Chalo Kosis Karte Hain Ji....

Aaj Dil Ke Saare Ehsaason Ko Jaga Do.
Is Kadar Shabnami Honto Se Mera Naam Lo.

Ho Jaaye Chand Bhi Mehroon Apni Roshni Se
Zara Sa Rukh.e.Rosahn Ka Use Deeaar Do.

Tum Raho Saamne Mere Main Tumhe Dekhta rahun..
Tere Sang Guzar Jaaye Ye Zindagi Aise Lamhaat Do

Humne To Likh Di Hai Apne Aanshuon Se Ye Gazal
Ab Tum Bhi Hume Mohabbat Main Aisa Koi Paigaam Do.

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Dedo Mujhe Apne Dil Ka Saara Dard Aur Aankhon Ki Nami.
Aey HumDum Mere Kandhe Pe Sar Rakh Kar Khud Ko Sula Do


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Mere Jism Ke Zarre Zarre Main Tanhaai Uatar Gayi.
Aur Ruh Ka Kona Kona Ek Yaad Ne Mehkaaya Hai.

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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #26 on: February 27, 2008, 05:24:33 PM »

wah kaya baat hai Majid ji!!! bahoot khoob...

Mil jaaye tera kandha phir kaya chahiye
In gesuo ko teri unglio ka sprash chahiye

Dhadkane bula rahi hai tera naam
dhadkano ko tera hi sath chahiye

Aise na dekhon mujhe ki kuch kah hi na sake
Band ankhon mai bhi tera hi deedar chahiye

Nind ko Kaise ajj mai ane du in ankhon mai
Roop tere ki ajj inko barsaat chahiye

Chand se kah do chupa le ajj chandni apni
Hume apne sajan ke lubo se singaar chahiye

Her sukh her dukh tujh sung hi banta hai
Umarbhar ke liye bas tera ek sath chahiye!!


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #27 on: February 27, 2008, 09:23:01 PM »

Quote from: majid on February 27, 2008, 07:32:36 AM

wah kya baat hai... bahut khoob Majid ji..


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #28 on: February 27, 2008, 09:24:12 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 27, 2008, 05:24:33 PM

sab ka mast jugalbandi bani huyi hai. bahut khoob likha
aapne b pooja di... maza aa raha hai reply counter reply....
keep up.


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Re: Kaise Main So Jaau

« Reply #29 on: February 28, 2008, 10:55:06 AM »

Roja dear sath milna chahiye.. reply to hum dete hi rahte hai Usual Smile

Bahoot bahoot shukaria apko likha hua pasand ayya!!!


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