KOHRA

by srikant on November 05, 2006, 04:45:31 PM
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Aaj waadee main khoob koharaa hai ,
Dil akelaa hai dard doharaa hai.
Tere kaano.n ko hi nahin pahunchi,
Baat jiskaa ki yoon dhindoraa hai.
Aasmaanon se khelataa hai woh,
Aadmi kya hai ek mohara hai .

Dher sara nahin hai to naa sahi ,
Yeh to kah do ki pyaar thodaa hai.
Yaad aati ho is Qadr se tum
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2007, 07:07:21 PM »
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achi likhi hai per puri kyu nahi ki ?
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2007, 04:38:51 AM »
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Quote from: "srikant"
Aaj waadee main khoob koharaa hai ,
Dil akelaa hai dard doharaa hai.
Tere kaano.n ko hi nahin pahunchi,
Baat jiskaa ki yoon dhindoraa hai.
Aasmaanon se khelataa hai woh,
Aadmi kya hai ek mohara hai .

Dher sara nahin hai to naa sahi ,
Yeh to kah do ki pyaar thodaa hai.
Yaad aati ho is Qadr se tum


Well .. like Sahiba said..., incomplete sa lag raha hai.
try to complete it....

Shall I try?


Yaad aati ho is Qadr se tum
K dil mera kahi lagta nahi
Jee to raha hu..tere bigair, magar
Yeh jeena bi koyee jeena hai  !!
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rahat_yogi
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2007, 09:21:18 AM »
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Srikant
      Awesome writings with flow of thoughts

Keep writing
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2007, 09:14:44 PM »
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roja G maaf kariyega lekin apki akhiri line match nahi hui
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«Reply #5 on: September 21, 2007, 11:30:23 AM »
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Aaj waadee main khoob koharaa hai ,
Dil akelaa hai dard doharaa hai.
Tere kaano.n ko hi nahin pahunchi,
Baat jiskaa ki yoon dhindoraa hai.
Aasmaanon se khelataa hai woh,
Aadmi kya hai ek mohara hai .

Dher sara nahin hai to naa sahi ,
Yeh to kah do ki pyaar thodaa hai.
Yaad aati ho is Qadr se tum


Bahut hi khoob... =D>
Bahut achha laga padh kar...
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