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« on: May 08, 2008, 06:14:32 PM »
               GHAZAL STYLE









Ab subah ka nahin intzaar mujhe, -
Manzil khadi hai saamne mere, -
Dhoondhta hun phir bhi ajnabi raaste, -
Jo khule huey hain darvaaze unke man ke, -
Phansaata hun khud ko kyun band galiyon men, -
Jisse samjha nahin aaj tak maine, -
Uske dil men hain raaz lakhon chhupe, -

Kehne ko betaab bhi hai par na kahe, -
Aisi de qurbaani ki khud hi jale, -
Hans ke chhupaaye saare gile shikve, -
Kisiko apne gham ka ahsaas tak na hone de, -

Poochhe agar koi to baat ko golmol kare, -
Chhupa kar apni aankhon ko aansun poncche, -
Baat hai jo man men dabi kaise bole, -
Uski aah men asar hai itna ki pathar pighle, -
Khaamosh nigaahon se sada pyar ki de, -
Phir kyun rahe chup ab to kuchh bole. -
Phir kyun rahe chup ab to kuchh bole. -


(Syed Naami)

                       
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« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2008, 09:58:45 PM »
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Ab subah ka nahin intzaar mujhe, -
Manzil khadi hai saamne mere, -
Dhoondhta hun phir bhi ajnabi raaste, -
Jo khule huey hain darvaaze unke man ke, -
Phansaata hun khud ko kyun band galiyon men, -
Jisse samjha nahin aaj tak maine, -
Uske dil men hain raaz lakhon chhupe, -

Syed ji this is really very good gazal  Applause The above line
really i liked it very much. Keep up.
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« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2008, 10:36:11 PM »
Aap ka saath raha to inshaAllah aur bhi achha likhne ki justaju par gaamzan rahenge. Hosla afzai ka tah-e-dil se mashkoor hun.
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« Reply #3 on: May 09, 2008, 12:26:10 AM »
sayed saheb bahoot acha likhaapne


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« Reply #4 on: May 09, 2008, 12:36:48 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on May 08, 2008, 06:14:32 PM
               GHAZAL STYLE









Ab subah ka nahin intzaar mujhe, -
Manzil khadi hai saamne mere, -
Dhoondhta hun phir bhi ajnabi raaste, -
Jo khule huey hain darvaaze unke man ke, -
Phansaata hun khud ko kyun band galiyon men, -
Jisse samjha nahin aaj tak maine, -
Uske dil men hain raaz lakhon chhupe, -

Kehne ko betaab bhi hai par na kahe, -
Aisi de qurbaani ki khud hi jale, -
Hans ke chhupaaye saare gile shikve, -
Kisiko apne gham ka ahsaas tak na hone de, -

Poochhe agar koi to baat ko golmol kare, -
Chhupa kar apni aankhon ko aansun poncche, -
Baat hai jo man men dabi kaise bole, -
Uski aah men asar hai itna ki pathar pighle, -
Khaamosh nigaahon se sada pyar ki de, -
Phir kyun rahe chup ab to kuchh bole. -
Phir kyun rahe chup ab to kuchh bole. -


(Syed Naami)

                       

Simple, Meaningful and very very Beautiful... Applause
The best thing I like about this is that, it is very different from my recent reads...

This is beyond any rating... icon_smile Marvellous work Syed ji..
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« Reply #5 on: May 09, 2008, 04:19:59 AM »
sayed ji bohut hi simple words choose kiye hai lekin gajal mei aapne bakhoobi se piroya hai aapne shabdo ko
really its a simple gazal but lovely toooooo
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koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.
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« Reply #6 on: May 09, 2008, 09:08:27 AM »
Quote from: syednaami on May 08, 2008, 06:14:32 PM
               GHAZAL STYLE


Kehne ko betaab bhi hai par na kahe, -
Aisi de qurbaani ki khud hi jale, -
Hans ke chhupaaye saare gile shikve, -
Kisiko apne gham ka ahsaas tak na hone de, -



(Syed Naami)
                       

syed ji wah kya likhe aap ne ...sach bahot hi acha likhe....
aap k yeh rachna padh ke mann me jo aaya likh rahi...
plz galti ho to maaf karna...

raat ka andhera hi subha ki roshni mein payi
raha se anjan nahi hoon.manjil bhi saamne thi
dil kehta hai badhao kadam ruk kyun gayi
khud ko samjhane lagi wahan tujhe jana nahi...

khud ko rokne ki kosish mein har baar haari
saamne pake unhe aanshoo rok na payi
muskan ki aad mein aanshoo chhupa na chahi
khud ko samjhane lagi wahan tera basera nahi...

jab bhi kuch kehena chaha kisi ka khayal aaya
chup rehna hai mujhe kuch nahi kehena
uss raste se mukarna hai pathar rakh ke dil pe
khud ko samjha rahi wahan tera koi kaam nahi...
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« Reply #7 on: May 09, 2008, 09:17:41 AM »
Wah Kya Khoob Mehfil Sazi Hai
Bohat Khoob Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Sayid Bhai


Aur Punam Ji Aapne Bhi Bohat Achha Rep Kiya Hai
Lagey Raho....
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Puchha Jab Apne Dil Se To Mujhse Bura Mila Na Koi..
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Koi Baat To Ho Jo Aadmi Ko Bezuban Karde
Jaruri To Nahi Har Baat Pe Yun Daad Ka Hona.
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« Reply #8 on: May 10, 2008, 01:36:05 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 09, 2008, 09:17:41 AM
Wah Kya Khoob Mehfil Sazi Hai
Bohat Khoob Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Sayid Bhai
Aur Punam Ji Aapne Bhi Bohat Achha Rep Kiya Hai
Lagey Raho....
Shihab bhaya, aap ne iss ghazal ko dil se saraha hai, buhat shukriya.

Quote from: punam on May 09, 2008, 09:08:27 AM
syed ji wah kya likhe aap ne ...sach bahot hi acha likhe....
aap k yeh rachna padh ke mann me jo aaya likh rahi...
plz galti ho to maaf karna...

raat ka andhera hi subha ki roshni mein payi
raha se anjan nahi hoon.manjil bhi saamne thi
dil kehta hai badhao kadam ruk kyun gayi
khud ko samjhane lagi wahan tujhe jana nahi...


   Punam jee aap ne mujhe laajawaab kar diya hai, ab kahan se itna achha jawaab
   de paunga. Mera saath dene ka tah-e-dil se mamnoon hun.

Quote from: Mahiya on May 09, 2008, 12:36:48 AM
Simple, Meaningful and very very Beautiful... Applause
The best thing I like about this is that, it is very different from my recent reads...

This is beyond any rating... icon_smile Marvellous work Syed ji..
   Mahiya jee,
   Aap ka itna umda andaaz-e-taareef hai ki aap ka shukriya main kaise ada
   karun, your words are beyond praise. Thanks so much.
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 09, 2008, 04:19:59 AM
sayed ji bohut hi simple words choose kiye hai lekin gajal mei aapne bakhoobi se piroya hai aapne shabdo ko
really its a simple gazal but lovely toooooo
          Kaushik saahib,
           Aap ne itne behtreen andaz men meri poetry ka rang bayaan kya ki dil
           khush hogaya, Aap ki aamad par iss mehfil ko khiraaj mila. Buhat badi
           Maherbaani.
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on May 09, 2008, 12:26:10 AM
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« Reply #9 on: May 13, 2008, 06:27:57 PM »
Good job Sami Ji and Punam!!
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« Reply #10 on: May 13, 2008, 10:52:19 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja jee, aap ne hosla phirse waapas diya humen. Shukriya
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