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aapkipalak

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pyaar ki daastaan

« on: May 16, 2008, 05:14:30 AM »

hum unse pyaar krte hain kya ye kaafi nahi hai
kyun puchhte log wjeh
jahan dekhte hain hum,bus dikhta wahi hai
kyun na du use sheh...
raat bhar uska khyaal jata nahi
palak hi jhapak jaye, wo manjar kbhi aata nahi
kyun na mar mitu uspe
ye jindagi mit jaye chahe
ya chhin jaein sb rishte
ek aur prem kahani ab adhuri na rahegi
ek aur jodi judai ka gum na sahegi
e-doston ye hai mere pyaar ki daastaan
paa lungi main usko
dekhega hindustaan
dekhega ye jahaan


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Rajbir

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Re: pyaar ki daastaan

« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2008, 05:17:15 AM »

Palak,

Bahut khoob ! Applause

Kitna aatamvishwas jhalakta hai aap ki shayari mein !

Bravo ! That shows the +ve spirit in you !

Keep going !


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Re: pyaar ki daastaan

« Reply #2 on: May 16, 2008, 06:55:26 AM »

Undisputed masterpiece work by you.
I like the way you show the courage and desire. Keep the spirit up.
Bravo!!


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Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men zubaan main ne.
(Faiz Ahmed Faiz)

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Re: pyaar ki daastaan

« Reply #3 on: May 16, 2008, 07:03:17 AM »

Quote from: aapkipalak on May 16, 2008, 05:14:30 AM

Nice one..Keep it up !


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Re: pyaar ki daastaan

« Reply #4 on: May 17, 2008, 07:24:06 AM »

aap log to boht encourage krte hain!
you inspire ppl to write from the bottom of the heart.


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Re: pyaar ki daastaan

« Reply #5 on: May 17, 2008, 07:33:48 AM »

Palak

You can write from the middle or top of the heart also...he he he (jk)

Keep going !


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Re: pyaar ki daastaan

« Reply #6 on: May 17, 2008, 09:13:40 AM »

palak bohat acha likha hai aapne .. icon_flower


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