vo din

by tarav on December 31, 2004, 01:05:50 PM

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tarav

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vo din bhi kya ajeeb the jab hum unke itne kareeb the
ik najar ko taraste hain ab, tab parchhaiyon ke rakeeb the.

very nice tarav.......... aap aise hi likha karen..... har line alag alag rahe ...nahin padhne mein dikkat hoti hai.....


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Meena

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vo din

«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2005, 01:49:58 AM »

nice one!

:D


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tarav

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vo din

«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2005, 10:52:45 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

nice one!

:D

very good one !! maf karna ye kya ho gaya khud likha tha khuda ho gaya jane wale to milte rahe milne wala juda ho gaya


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Re: vo din

«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2005, 11:39:12 AM »

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vo din bhi kya ajeeb the jab hum unke itne kareeb the
ik najar ko taraste hain ab, tab parchhaiyon ke rakeeb the.

very nice tarav.......... aap aise hi likha karen..... har line alag alag rahe ...nahin padhne mein dikkat hoti hai.


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tarav

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Re: vo din

«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2005, 12:44:05 PM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

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vo din bhi kya ajeeb the jab hum unke itne kareeb the
ik najar ko taraste hain ab, tab parchhaiyon ke rakeeb the.

very nice tarav.......... aap aise hi likha karen..... har line alag alag rahe ...nahin padhne mein dikkat hoti hai.

abhi net savvy nahi hoo na isliye thodi prob thi...now its ok. arj hai - ab to toot jane ka man hota hai,roothi jindagi se rooth jane ka man hota hai....bahut rah chuka mai apne aas paas,ab khud se door jane ka man hota hai