woh chup raha

by nikki on July 03, 2005, 03:11:49 PM
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«Reply #45 on: July 10, 2005, 01:33:15 PM »
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wah ji buhat bdhiya likhde oo tusi sare kuch likhn di ijazat chawan ga

asi ude nal chal raye sare zindgi
au aik lafz ve na sanun bole sari zindgi
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«Reply #46 on: July 10, 2005, 04:06:16 PM »
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meharbaani ji tuhadi...................tussi v bahut vadiya likhiya.....
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«Reply #47 on: July 10, 2005, 06:39:50 PM »
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aaj uski nazron ne mujhse baat ki
magar woh chup raha

main dekhti rahi uska chehra
padhti rahi uski nazron ko
magar khud woh chup raha

maine ki usse hazaron baatein
magar woh chup raha

woh sunata raha mujhe duniya ke kisse
magar apni baat par chup raha

humne sajaye the anekon khawaab zindagi ke liye
jab un khawaabon ki tabeer poochi
to woh chup raha

uske dil ki baat sun-ne ko thi main bekraar
magar woh zalim chup raha

hum yuhi dheere-2 juda ho gaye
usne kuch bhi na kiya milne ka jattan
aur bas chup raha

aaj jab bhi aati hai mujhe uski yaad
to soch kar hairaan hoti hun
kyun woh har jagah, har baat par chup raha


such a beautiful poem nikki sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #48 on: July 10, 2005, 08:45:08 PM »
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thanx u very very much for appriciating my work Meena sis..........................
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«Reply #49 on: July 11, 2005, 04:03:16 AM »
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wah nikki ji...........bahut khoob....

Hum bhi baithe hai dil mein kai arman liye hue,
Ek din toh tumse meri mulakat bhi hogi,
Baithenge sath mein hum ek dusre ke dost,
Kcu gum o khushi batenge,kuch bat bhi hogi...



teri meri dosti ka kuch aaisa aasar ho,.....

jaha mile hum wahi khushiyo ka samander ho,.....

us samander me doob ker bhi hum shikwa na karenge,....

de de tu pyala dosti ka chahe usme zeher ho..............
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«Reply #50 on: July 11, 2005, 05:48:34 AM »
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meharbaani ji tuhadi...................tussi v bahut vadiya likhiya.....


twade werga te nahin likh skda ji main
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«Reply #51 on: July 15, 2005, 04:51:24 PM »
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Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"


Wah nikki sis....dil ki gehraaiyan mehsoos ho rahi hain ek ek lafz me and very nice Talat too,humtum and aryaan,all have written very nice Usual Smile

"Le doobti hai khamoshi hi kabhi kabhi mohabbat me,
 jabki log ise pyaar ki bhaasha bhi kehte hain,
 samajhte hain dono dil nazron ki bhasha,
 ek din zuban na kholne ka malaal karte hain,
 reh jaati hain tab bas yaadein hi yaadein,
 jazbaat thhe jinme,nam ho jaati hain wahi aankhein,
 maana khamoshi bhi dil ki zubaan hai,
 par rishte ko haqeeqat banane k liye,
 ye duniya lafzon pe hi meharbaan hai."

Shukriya Nidhi......& Bohat khoob.....


Thanx Aryaan Usual Smile ,very nice nikki sis,humtum and all.
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«Reply #52 on: July 16, 2005, 02:06:06 AM »
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jab us ko samny bulya tu woh pather hi rahi
main kehta rha aur woh chup hi rahi
kia us k dil main tha us ney na kaha
mit gya us k smany par woh chup hi rahi
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«Reply #53 on: July 16, 2005, 08:59:08 AM »
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aaj uski nazron ne mujhse baat ki
magar woh chup raha

main dekhti rahi uska chehra
padhti rahi uski nazron ko
magar khud woh chup raha

maine ki usse hazaron baatein
magar woh chup raha

woh sunata raha mujhe duniya ke kisse
magar apni baat par chup raha

humne sajaye the anekon khawaab zindagi ke liye
jab un khawaabon ki tabeer poochi
to woh chup raha

uske dil ki baat sun-ne ko thi main bekraar
magar woh zalim chup raha

hum yuhi dheere-2 juda ho gaye
usne kuch bhi na kiya milne ka jattan
aur bas chup raha

aaj jab bhi aati hai mujhe uski yaad
to soch kar hairaan hoti hun
kyun woh har jagah, har baat par chup raha


Wah nikki sis....dil ki gehraaiyan mehsoos ho rahi hain ek ek lafz me and very nice Talat too,humtum and aryaan,all have written very nice Usual Smile

"Le doobti hai khamoshi hi kabhi kabhi mohabbat me,
 jabki log ise pyaar ki bhaasha bhi kehte hain,
 samajhte hain dono dil nazron ki bhasha,
 ek din zuban na kholne ka malaal karte hain,
 reh jaati hain tab bas yaadein hi yaadein,
 jazbaat thhe jinme,nam ho jaati hain wahi aankhein,
 maana khamoshi bhi dil ki zubaan hai,
 par rishte ko haqeeqat banane k liye,
 ye duniya lafzon pe hi meharbaan hai."


excellent Nidhi sis n very well said, sach kaha hai tumne........thanx a lot for appriciating my work... :hug:
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«Reply #54 on: July 16, 2005, 09:48:26 AM »
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Well said all..

Great and Good going on here..

Who Chup Raha, Aur usnay mojsay Khoch Kaha Nahee,
May Jannat tha, kay, kay kahay jawo, Par.. Manya Bhee Khoch Kaha Nahee..

Ques...
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«Reply #55 on: July 16, 2005, 05:04:32 PM »
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aaj uski nazron ne mujhse baat ki
magar woh chup raha

main dekhti rahi uska chehra
padhti rahi uski nazron ko
magar khud woh chup raha

maine ki usse hazaron baatein
magar woh chup raha

woh sunata raha mujhe duniya ke kisse
magar apni baat par chup raha

humne sajaye the anekon khawaab zindagi ke liye
jab un khawaabon ki tabeer poochi
to woh chup raha

uske dil ki baat sun-ne ko thi main bekraar
magar woh zalim chup raha

hum yuhi dheere-2 juda ho gaye
usne kuch bhi na kiya milne ka jattan
aur bas chup raha

aaj jab bhi aati hai mujhe uski yaad
to soch kar hairaan hoti hun
kyun woh har jagah, har baat par chup raha


Wah nikki sis....dil ki gehraaiyan mehsoos ho rahi hain ek ek lafz me and very nice Talat too,humtum and aryaan,all have written very nice Usual Smile

"Le doobti hai khamoshi hi kabhi kabhi mohabbat me,
 jabki log ise pyaar ki bhaasha bhi kehte hain,
 samajhte hain dono dil nazron ki bhasha,
 ek din zuban na kholne ka malaal karte hain,
 reh jaati hain tab bas yaadein hi yaadein,
 jazbaat thhe jinme,nam ho jaati hain wahi aankhein,
 maana khamoshi bhi dil ki zubaan hai,
 par rishte ko haqeeqat banane k liye,
 ye duniya lafzon pe hi meharbaan hai."


excellent Nidhi sis n very well said, sach kaha hai tumne........thanx a lot for appriciating my work... :hug:


thanx sis :hug:.

"Aati hai mujhe un khamosh nigaahon ki yaad,
      meri nigaahein maangti raheen jiske liye fariyaad,
      ankho me lehraate hain wo pyaar bhare pal,
      kya pata thha,ye nigahein hongi hi nahi kal,
      jo choota hamse un nigaahon ka saath,
      patthar ban gayi meri bhi nigaahein aaj,
      ye raftaar bhari duniya thham si gayi hai,
      bhoolna chaha par teri yaad hamesha aati rahi hai."
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«Reply #56 on: July 16, 2005, 05:05:01 PM »
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thanx qutub ji.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #57 on: July 16, 2005, 06:12:48 PM »
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Wah!! Bohat khoob Nidhi.........................
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«Reply #58 on: July 17, 2005, 09:31:17 AM »
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Wah!! Bohat khoob Nidhi.........................
Shukriya Aryaan Usual Smile
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«Reply #59 on: July 19, 2005, 05:41:28 PM »
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aaj uski nazron ne mujhse baat ki
magar woh chup raha

main dekhti rahi uska chehra
padhti rahi uski nazron ko
magar khud woh chup raha

maine ki usse hazaron baatein
magar woh chup raha

woh sunata raha mujhe duniya ke kisse
magar apni baat par chup raha

humne sajaye the anekon khawaab zindagi ke liye
jab un khawaabon ki tabeer poochi
to woh chup raha

uske dil ki baat sun-ne ko thi main bekraar
magar woh zalim chup raha

hum yuhi dheere-2 juda ho gaye
usne kuch bhi na kiya milne ka jattan
aur bas chup raha

aaj jab bhi aati hai mujhe uski yaad
to soch kar hairaan hoti hun
kyun woh har jagah, har baat par chup raha


wow  wow    Nikki...................very  nice..................bahot  khoob........
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