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« on: May 12, 2008, 06:47:41 AM »

Aankhon me aansoo hai dil me jalan
yeh dard kaisa hai chanchal kyun hai mann
tanhai bhi hai dil kuch beqarar bhi
yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann...

soona soona lage kyun yeh saara jahan
bas kisi ko jaise talashti hai yeh nigah
dard bhi hai par ehsaas hai meetha
yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann...

Dil aaj chahta hai kya.. kya hai yeh jalan
khoya hai kya jise paane ko vyakul hai mann
yeh kaisi tadap hai mann kahi na lage
yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann....
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« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2008, 07:03:36 AM »

he he he !

Bahut khoob Punam !

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« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2008, 08:07:56 AM »

Bohot achcha likha hai Punam
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« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2008, 08:13:23 AM »

Aankhon me aansoo hai dil me jalan
yeh dard kaisa hai chanchal kyun hai mann
tanhai bhi hai dil kuch beqarar bhi
yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann...
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Aankhen ho ashkbaar agar, -
Dard ho dil men bar bar sanam, -
Beqarari ka ahsaas na ho khatam, -
Samjho dil men bas gaya koi sajan. -


Soonapan har ek kshan, -
Talash men priya ke magan, -
Dard men mile meethhapan, -
Samjho dil men bas gaya koi sajan. -


Chaahat men kahe prem bhajan, -
Khoj rahi usko preet ke chaman, -
Tadapta hai tera dil aur badan, -
Samjho dil men bas gaya koi sajan. -



(Syed Naami)

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Wah wah.... Punam jee, excellent, Iss jalan ka Dhuwan bhi dikh raha hai, aap ki shayri men, kamaal likha hai, bravo!!

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he he he !
Bahut khoob Punam !
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Chacha jee, fire brigade bhi jal jayegi. Paani se nahin bujhti... hehehe
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« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2008, 08:23:11 AM »

Oye hoye Syed bhai

kya baat hai !

Tusi wi chaa gaye Winking
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« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2008, 08:53:49 AM »

Bohat hi acha likha hai Punam ..Usual Smile

Syed ji bohat acha likha hai aapne ..Usual Smile
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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2008, 08:58:47 AM »

Thanks so much chacha jee, so nice of you

Thanks Honeyrose, you are great person.
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« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2008, 09:04:56 AM »

he he he !

Bahut khoob Punam !

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Bhaiya aap ho na..darr kis baat ki ...jaroorat padne pe bulana...Thanx
Thanx Talat di...
Thanx Honey di...
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« Reply #8 on: May 12, 2008, 10:35:14 AM »

Thanx syed ji...
samjho dil me bas gaya sajan...hmmmmm...aisa kya..? bahot khoob kaha...bahot hi acha reply.
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« Reply #9 on: May 12, 2008, 10:56:07 AM »

wah punam ji, bahot hi khoob,
Aankhon me aansoo hai dil me jalan
yeh dard kaisa hai chanchal kyun hai mann
tanhai bhi hai dil kuch beqarar bhi
yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann...

soona soona lage kyun yeh saara jahan
bas kisi ko jaise talashti hai yeh nigah
dard bhi hai par ehsaas hai meetha
yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann...

Dil aaj chahta hai kya.. kya hai yeh jalan
khoya hai kya jise paane ko vyakul hai mann
yeh kaisi tadap hai mann kahi na lage
yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann....
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wah wah punam ji,



kisne lagayi hai yeh aag, aur talash bhi usi aag lagane wale ki, bahot khooob, koshish karunga use dhundker lane ki hehehe
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« Reply #10 on: May 12, 2008, 12:16:53 PM »

Punam ji N naami ji aap jitna aacha to mai kabhi nahi likh sakta lakin ek koshish ki hai aap ki lines ke saath judne ki,plz galti ho jai to maaf karna.


Tadap mann ki tujhe bataue kaise,
Jalan dil ki tujhe dikhue kaise,

Kya hua hai mujhe ye samjhaue kaise,
Chubhan sine ki batlaue kaise,
Chamkti rangat hai sirf tare liye,
Iss rangat ka rang tujhe dikhue kaise,

Khila khila hai saara jahaan,
ISS jahaan ko apne nazar se tujhe deekhue kaise,
Intzaar kitna hai tera mari aankho mai,
Iss baichani ko tujhe batlaue kaise,

Meetha ahsaas hai jo dard ka sine mai,
Us ahsaas se tera parichay karaue kaise,
Tan-mann mai lagi hai jo aag tare naam ki,
Us aag ke liye sital jal laaue kaise,

Tadap man ki tujhe bataue kaise,
Jalan dil ki tujhe dikhue kaise..............




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« Reply #11 on: May 12, 2008, 12:31:24 PM »

Super Baadal Saahib, aap ne bhi kuchh kam nahin likha, yun samjhe ek aur badhiya rachna padh kar sukoon mila ho.
Excellent work, Bravo!!

Thanx syed ji...
samjho dil me bas gaya sajan...hmmmmm...aisa kya..? bahot khoob kaha...bahot hi acha reply.
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Yeh to ab jo padhe so samjhe, har admi apni nazar se har kavita ko parakhta hai.
Aap ko pasand aaya hamara nazm iss ke liye tah-e-dil se mashkoor hun.
So nice of you, Thanks
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« Reply #12 on: May 12, 2008, 12:41:32 PM »

Super Baadal Saahib, aap ne bhi kuchh kam nahin likha, yun samjhe ek aur badhiya rachna padh kar sukoon mila ho.
Excellent work, Bravo!!



aap ko mere rachna pasand aaye mare liye yahi kaafi hai naami ji
thanx a lot jo aap ne mujhe iss kaabil samjha icon_salut




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« Reply #13 on: May 13, 2008, 01:14:08 AM »

Thanx samir ji...aap toh bin baadal baras ke chale jate ho...
haan jaroor dhundna..

Baadal ji Thanx...hume sharminda mat kijiye..aap logon se hi toh hum kuch sikh rahe hai...
Bahot hi acha likha aap ne...

Thanx syed ji...aap ne sahi kaha....jab hum kuch likhte hain uss waqt ki mood pe depend karta hai..
ya kisi post k reply k heesab se ...aur parakhne wale apni nazar se parakhte hain..
ho sakta hai hum jo likhte hain kisi ko pasand na bhi aaye....
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« Reply #14 on: May 13, 2008, 01:31:39 AM »

Bohat khoob dostho ..Really wonderful.. Applause


Yeh Kaise Aag Hai Jo Jala Rahi Hai Tan Mann Main
Yeh Kaise Ek Agan Hai Jo Pigala Deti Hai Tan Mann Main
Chura Liya Hai Daman Aapna Kyun Nahi Deti Ho Vachan Aapna
Kar Deti Hai Iss Dil Ko Ronak Joh Hote Ho Tum Tan Mann Main
Yeh Kaise Aag Hai Jo Jala Rahi Hai Tan Mann Main
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tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they...
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