मौत

by sapana on May 06, 2009, 06:57:44 PM
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मौत
सब रिश्ते ख़तम करके गई,
मौत आई सबसे जुदा करके गई,
पता था अकेले ही जाना है हमें ,
फ़िर भी जाने क्यों तनहा करके गई।
सपना
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sapana
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 07:01:41 PM »
Maut

sab rishte khatam karke gai,
maut aai sabse juda karke gai,
pata tha akele hi jana hai hamein.
fir bhi jane kyon tanha karke gai.

Sapana
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 07:05:43 PM »
Keep writing...
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sapana
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2009, 07:08:13 PM »
Thanks!Dead heart.
itana bhi dead nahi. Usual Smile
Sapana
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sapana
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2009, 07:37:27 PM »
Thanks Khasji,
aapki baat bilkul sahi hai.aap meri mere dost jarur padhe,aapke baareme kuch likhneki gustakhi ki hai.
Sapana Usual Smile
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pankshivam
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2009, 07:39:03 PM »
Very Nice Sapna ji
 Applause Applause Applause
Keep Writing  Thumbs UP
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sapana
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2009, 07:51:32 PM »
thanks Pankji
sukriya
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2009, 09:09:12 PM »
Bohot Khoob Sapana Ji.... Kaash Ji

Maut Se Badh Kar Haqeeqat Nahin
Rokne Waali Isko Koi Daulat Nahin
Reh Jaayenge Sab Fasaane Yahin
Maut Barhaq Hai, Degi Mohlat Nahin !!
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2009, 09:17:14 PM »
Good one Sapana Ji
N also nice response Celmira Ji
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sapana
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2009, 10:43:03 PM »
Wah..wah Talat!!
degi mohlat nahin!! wah kyan kehne!!
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