Dil pukarta raha -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Celmira

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 15 days, 2 hours and 37 minutes.

Posts: 32315

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #15 on: May 27, 2008, 01:34:19 PM »

Beautiful creation Amit Applause


	Logged

thycreator

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 1 days, 15 hours and 5 minutes.

Posts: 4992

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #16 on: May 27, 2008, 01:38:35 PM »

Thanks a lot Talat ji... Usual Smile


	Logged

Life is beautiful!!!

Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.

A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

Pooja

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 31 days, 1 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 37574

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #17 on: May 27, 2008, 01:42:48 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 26, 2008, 05:58:13 PM

Meri aankhon ki tanhai ko tum pehchaan na paye,
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Hue masroof tum kuch yun gairon ki mehfil mein,
Meri hasraton ke diye tumko na lubha paye...
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Meri dil ki lagi ne haal kuch aisa mera kiya,
Sawan ke mahine mein bhi hum aansuon mein nahaye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Tumse andheri raton ka hum shikwa bhi kya kare,
Jab din ke ujalon mein tumko dhoondh na paye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Saahil pe baith tumko hanste dekha hai dil ne,
Ishq mein dubne ke wade tumne acche nibhaye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Zindagi se bhali maut mujhko lagne lagi hai,
Hans ke marenge gar jaan tere naam pe jaaye..
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Quote from: thycreator on May 27, 2008, 01:21:58 PM

Thanks a lot Pooja ji....apki kalam aaj shaant kyun hai...??

bahoot hi acha likha hai Amit!! thora sa waqat de app mujhe, kuch likhne ki koshish karugi...


	Logged

Yoindia.com Rules & Regulation | Introduce yourself to Yoindia

A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

thycreator

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 1 days, 15 hours and 5 minutes.

Posts: 4992

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #18 on: May 27, 2008, 01:45:40 PM »

Sure sure ji...take ur time..... Usual Smile


	Logged

Pooja

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 31 days, 1 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 37574

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #19 on: May 27, 2008, 06:27:28 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 26, 2008, 05:58:13 PM

Amit ji apki kavita se yah line maine apni kavita mai bhi use ki hai "Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..
" KOSHISH KI HAI KUCH LIKHNE KI... SHAYAD APKO AOR Yoindians ko pasand ayye...

Teri her ek pukar ne dil ko khoon ke ansoo rulaye
Hum khare rahe wahin, jahan kabhi tanha the chor aye
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Gairon ki mehfil mai is kadar tha tera intzaar
Shayad kabhi ek dooje ki hasrato per hum aitbaar na kar paaye
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Her ek baat per, hamesha tumhi khayalo mai meri aye
Koi bhi utha sawal jab, jawab mai intzaar ke diye he jalaye
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Her din bhi laga andheri raat sa, tanha tanha
Her raat ki bekhayali bhi tujhe he bulaaye
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye..

Zindagi hai kaya koi to mujhe yah samjhaaye
Til til kar marna hi hai zindagi, to mout ko kayun boora batlaaye
Dil pukarta raha tumhe, tum phir bhi nahi aaye….


	Logged

Yoindia.com Rules & Regulation | Introduce yourself to Yoindia

A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

syednaami

Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 23 days, 13 hours and 16 minutes.

Kuchh Na Kaho -

Posts: 4613

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #20 on: May 27, 2008, 06:57:18 PM »

Umda jawab de kar man mohit kar diya aapne, aise hi rachnaon ka aanand baant-te rahiya.... wah


	Logged

Bakhshi hain humko ishq ne woh jura'aten Majaz, -
Darte nahin siyaasat-e-ahl-e-jahaan se hum. - (Asrar-ul-Haq Majaaz)

Sonia01

Yoindian Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 7 days, 7 hours and 16 minutes.

Posts: 2116

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #21 on: May 27, 2008, 10:29:16 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 26, 2008, 11:14:09 PM

Thanks a lot Sonai Ji.........mujhe khushi hui ki apko mera likha pasand aaya.....warna jaise humara introduction hua tha...mujhe laga ki maine yahan ek aur dushman bana liya anjaane mein.... Usual Smile

Jahan tak reply karne ki bat hai......koshish karne se kya nahi hota....

Thanks a lot once again.

Welcome jee.... Jo waha hua wo hum aapko apna samajkar kaha tha.
Ok koshish karti hu Galati maff karna

Dilne hazar bar tumhe pukarta raha
Bhula hua naam tera yaad aata raha

Bhul gaya tha yeh dil jo nagma ye wafa ka
Ussi saaj pe aaj dil gungunane laga

Hey bewafa, humne tumhe pyar kiya hai
Magar, tum hazaron ke mehfil ka taara bana

Ab na rahi zarurat tumhe meri pyar ki
Hum toh khush hai teri bewafai pe


	Logged

Har Dil Main Arman Hotey to hain
Bus koi Samjhe Zara...

syednaami

Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 23 days, 13 hours and 16 minutes.

Kuchh Na Kaho -

Posts: 4613

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #22 on: May 28, 2008, 02:46:21 AM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 27, 2008, 10:29:16 PM

Welcome jee.... Jo waha hua wo hum aapko apna samajkar kaha tha.
Ok koshish karti hu Galati maff karna

Ab na rahi zarurat tumhe meri pyar ki
Hum toh khush hai teri bewafai pe

tongue3

[/b][/color]

Wah, superb, buhat hi umda koshish, aise hi aur bhi kalaam paish karen....


	Logged

Bakhshi hain humko ishq ne woh jura'aten Majaz, -
Darte nahin siyaasat-e-ahl-e-jahaan se hum. - (Asrar-ul-Haq Majaaz)

Pooja

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 31 days, 1 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 37574

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #23 on: May 28, 2008, 10:47:17 AM »

Tahe dil se shukaria Sami ji!!

Nice lines Sonia!!


	Logged

Yoindia.com Rules & Regulation | Introduce yourself to Yoindia

A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

Sonia01

Yoindian Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 7 days, 7 hours and 16 minutes.

Posts: 2116

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #24 on: May 28, 2008, 10:59:52 AM »

Thanks Syed jee and Pooja didi


	Logged

Har Dil Main Arman Hotey to hain
Bus koi Samjhe Zara...

thycreator

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 1 days, 15 hours and 5 minutes.

Posts: 4992

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #25 on: May 28, 2008, 05:51:10 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 27, 2008, 06:27:28 PM

Good one Pooja ji....apne meri kavita se line lekar usko naye mayane de diye....bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Kuch pal ko chal padte hai hum, tham jaate hain,
Yaad aate hai beete pal, pair ye jam jaate hain,
Kahin phir se na ho kissa wahi bewafai ka,
Sochte bhi hai gar ye bat, sehem jaate hain...


	Logged

Pooja

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 31 days, 1 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 37574

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #26 on: May 28, 2008, 05:52:22 PM »

Shukaria Amiit ji!! bahoot hi achi lines likhi hai apne...


	Logged

Yoindia.com Rules & Regulation | Introduce yourself to Yoindia

A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

thycreator

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 1 days, 15 hours and 5 minutes.

Posts: 4992

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #27 on: May 28, 2008, 06:00:01 PM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 27, 2008, 10:29:16 PM

Kya bat hai........sahi ja rahi ho.... Winking

Na kissi ki muhabbat ne, na judaai ne,
Na mara hai humko kissi ki bewafai ne,
Khud ke hathon hi hum lute gaye yahan,
Kyu laga baithe hum ye dil aashnai mein... sad5


	Logged

thycreator

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 1 days, 15 hours and 5 minutes.

Posts: 4992

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #28 on: May 28, 2008, 06:03:06 PM »

Thanks a lot Pooja ji....maine thoda galat likh diya tha jawab mein....abhi change kar diya.... Usual Smile


	Logged

Roja

Khaas Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 17 days, 15 hours and 46 minutes.

Posts: 9320

Re: Dil pukarta raha

« Reply #29 on: May 28, 2008, 10:09:04 PM »

Quote from: thycreator on May 28, 2008, 06:00:01 PM

Kya bat hai........sahi ja rahi ho.... Winking

Na kissi ki muhabbat ne, na judaai ne,
Na mara hai humko kissi ki bewafai ne,
Khud ke hathon hi hum lute gaye yahan,
Kyu laga baithe hum ye dil aashnai mein... sad5

Quote from: Sonia01 on May 27, 2008, 10:29:16 PM

Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai sonia.... Bahut hi accha likhne lagi ho.
Arre dear kahan chupa rakhi thi yeh khoobiyan.... bahut khoob
God Bless


	Logged

Know Me Know Love
No Me No Love

Yoindia.com : Shero Shayari in Urdu Hindi & Various other Languages: Forums


	Logged

Pages: 1 [2] 3 4 5

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: Dil pukarta raha

Welcome to New Yoindia.com