Jeena bhi kya jeena NM:Shayri-E-Dard

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« on: July 04, 2009, 02:10:28 PM »

Ae zindagi, tu kahan le (aayi)
Jahaan jindagi mano kohi andheri gehrahi

Aaj mujhe mere lakshya nahein hai kohi hosh
Kulhi hai merie aankhen par dil hai behosh

Kahin mere raah mein koi ek diya to jalao
Mujhe meri zindagi ka wajood to samjhao

Pehle toota mera dil jinme sapne the hazaar
Phir tooti meri umeede, hai kaisa tha yeh pyaar

Baadi karvi thi yeh jiddagi kee suchchhai
Khud ko sambhala toh paas thi sirf meri purchhai.

Meri tanhai,mera akelapan,bas yahi hain ab mere paas
Jeevan me kuch karne ki nah hai umeed, aur nah kohi aas

Hothon pe hansi bus yoonhee rakhti hoon
Koi kya jaane kaise andar se roti hoon

Kabhi neendon mein dikh jati hai ek pyaar ka saya
Aankhen jab khooley, toh woh meri yaadon ki maaya

Kaise suljhaoon main is zindagi ki paheli
Uljhi har raah hai aur berangeen hai holi.

Jo ankhe sapne sajaya karti thi kabhi
Utsaah aur lagan hai inme,kehte the sabhi

Aaj inme ek sunaapan,veeraniyat si hai
mano bahaa kohi gammon ka leh

Kya karna aisey jindgai jee kar mujhey
jahaan har din maut ka intazaar ho

framed by Udita,drawn by Vivek


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Re: Jeena bhi kya jeena

« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 02:11:55 PM »

Nice sharing Udita...

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Re: Jeena bhi kya jeena

« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 02:20:16 PM »

Beautiful sharing Udita ji. Applause


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Re: Jeena bhi kya jeena NM

« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 02:40:51 PM »

tis poem has been put into a canvas by me but the words have been drawn n colored by Vivek


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Re: Jeena bhi kya jeena NM

« Reply #4 on: July 04, 2009, 02:42:03 PM »

Nice sharing Udita ji... Applause


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Re: Jeena bhi kya jeena NM

« Reply #5 on: July 04, 2009, 05:16:36 PM »

Nice Sharing.. Usual Smile


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Re: Jeena bhi kya jeena NM

« Reply #6 on: July 07, 2009, 03:47:45 PM »

d same poem has been edited again by Vivek:

Ae zindagi, tu kahan le (aayi)
Jahaan jindagi mano kohi andheri gehrahi

Aaj mujhe mere lakshya ka nahein hai kohi hosh
Kulhi hai merie aankhen par dil hai behosh

Kahin mere raah mein koi ek diya to jalao
Mujhe meri zindagi ka wajood to samjhao

Pehle toota mera dil jinme sapne the hazaar
Phir tooti meri umeede, hai kaisa tha yeh pyaar

Baadi karvi thi yeh jiddagi kee suchchhai
Khud ko sambhala toh paas thi sirf meri parchhai.

Meri tanhai,mera akelapan,bas yahi hain ab mere paas
Jeevan me kuch karne ki nah hai umeed, aur nah kohi aas

Hothon pe hansi bus yoonhee rakhti hoon
Koi kya jaane kaise, andar se roti hoon

Kabhi neendon mein dikh jati hai ek pyaar ka saya
Aankhen jab khooley, toh woh meri yaadon ki maaya

Kaise suljhaoon main is zindagi ki paheli
Uljhi har raah hai aur berangeen har holi.

Jo ankhe sapne sajaya karti thi kabhi
Utsaah aur josh hai inme, kehte the sabhi

Aaj inme ek sunaapan, ek veeraniyat si hai
mano beh raha ho koi, gammon ka leh

Kya karna aisey jindage jee kar roj
Jaha har waqt kartein hai hum maut ke khoj

plz do let us know how u like tis 1...


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Re: Jeena bhi kya jeena NM

« Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 02:53:06 PM »

wah!kya khoob likha hai!
mashaallah!
Vivekji khud kyu nahi is mehfil ka hissa ban jaate!unka hum teh dil se swagat karenge...

Uditaji,aapka bhi shukriya jo aap Vivekji jaise shayar ke lafzon ko duniya ke saamne le aayi!!!


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