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Mahiya

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Kathputliyaan...

« on: October 10, 2007, 03:25:08 AM »

Kisne di hai aur kisko mili muhabbat,
Khabar nahin humko in sab baaton ki…

Lapet liya utha kar pattjhar ka mausam,
Jab koi aas na rah gayi barsaaton ki..

Seham jaate hai phoolon ki khushbu se,
Aaisi aadat ho gayi humein kaaton ki…

Kya gum, kya khushi, aur kya ye zindagi,
Sab ke sab Kathputliyaan zazbaaton ki…

Bebas si nighaaon ke beech sehme sehme,
Hansne lagi hum pe lakeerein haathon ki…[/b]


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« Reply #1 on: October 10, 2007, 03:40:13 AM »

Shikha

As always very beautiful thoughts and feelings !

Jab bhi likhti ho kamaal ka likhti ho =D>

Keep going :arrow:


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Kathputliyaan...

« Reply #2 on: October 10, 2007, 08:22:44 AM »

Bahut hi acha likha hai shikha.....too good.


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« Reply #3 on: October 10, 2007, 09:32:13 AM »

Bahut Khoob Shikha ji nicest one as always


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« Reply #4 on: October 10, 2007, 12:05:12 PM »

wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob shikha... jaise ki veer ji ne kaha, jab bhi likhati ho KAMAL ka likhati hu!!!!

Toota hua dil kyun dil torr jaata hai
Bhawano main kaya kaya ho jaata hai

Bebas sa insaan sochta hi rahta hai
Na jaane kab waqat nikal jaata hai

Khushi badal jaati hai gum main
Gumo main koi muskaan le atta hai

Kabhi dhoop, kabhi chaw jeevan ki
Issi kheil main zindagi ka ant ho jaata hai’


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« Reply #5 on: October 10, 2007, 03:08:22 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB SHIKHA...BAHUT KHOOBSURATI SE LIKHA HAI..POOJA AAP NE ACHA LIKHA HAI

KAHANI BANKE JIYE HUM TO IS ZAMANE MEIN
LAGENGE UNHE SADIYA,HUMEIN BHOOLANE MEIN

MILE HAI ZAKHM KUCH IS TARAH UNKI MOHABBAT MEIN,
AB TO DAR SA LAGTA HAI MUSKURANE MEIN

NAA AAG FENKO YUH,MOHABBAT MEIN
KHILE PHOOLON PAR
MILEGI AISI NA KHUSBOO KISI KHAZANE MEIN


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« Reply #6 on: October 10, 2007, 06:03:37 PM »

Pooja, Khwaish

Bahut achcha aap dono ne bhi likha hai !

You both write very realistic emotions ! =D>

Pooja's style of writing i understand very well,
as i have come to know her personally over the time.


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« Reply #7 on: October 11, 2007, 03:03:11 PM »

Shikha, as always, beautiful creation, which really makes you think...and wonder ! =D>

Good ones Pooja and Khwaish


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« Reply #8 on: October 17, 2007, 01:48:20 AM »

Thanks a lot Rajbir Ji, Sapnaa, Rajrishi, Pooja di, Khwaish and Talat... Usual Smile


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« Reply #9 on: October 17, 2007, 02:06:27 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Bahut khoob...
Bilcul sach kaha Pooja di, Waqt par kab kiska bas chala hai...

Yeh waqt hi to hum sab ko khel khilaata hai,
Har ek shai par yeh apni chaal chal jaata hai...

Rishte-naaton, zimeddariyo ki dor se uljha kar,
Bebas Insaan ko ek Kathputli sa nachaata hai...

Gum miley jab kabhi, Yeh waqt theharta sa lage,
Aur Khushion mein aksar sarpat doud lagaata hai... Usual Smile


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« Reply #10 on: October 17, 2007, 02:21:00 AM »

Quote from: "khwaish"

Waah... Bahut Khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish... =D>

Ek alag nazariya, kuch is tarah :

Ek Kahaani se bann gaye hum zamaane mein,
Waqt guzarta hai unka ab jisey bhulaane mein...

Unhi ke har zakhm par hum dawa karte rahe,
Sukoon milta hai jinko bus dil dukhaane mein...

Apna Gum baantne jo ghar se nikle to paaya,
Har ek shaksh ro raha tha us maikhaane mein...

Sooni si mehfil ko sajaane ki khwaaish mein,
Dard suna baithe hum gazal gungunaane mein...


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« Reply #11 on: October 17, 2007, 05:06:18 AM »

aah di really nice ... !! sad5


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« Reply #12 on: October 17, 2007, 04:45:19 PM »

Bahoot khoob khwaish ji… Shikha kaya likhu… superbbbb bahoot hi acha likha hai… 2nd pehra .. jaise mere dil ki baat likhi ho… bahoot khoob!!!

Ek koshish meri taraf se bhi….

Her bar kahi kahani khud ki phir bhi adhuri hi rahi
Waqat gujrata gaya aor zindagi adhuri hi rahi

Kabhi zakhan unke, kabhi khud ke khud ko diye
Zakhmo ki barsat hum per hoti hi rahi

Aoro ka dard suna to ro diye hum bhi sath sath
Issi tarah se dil behlane ki koshish hoti hi rahi

Na koi mehfil, na hi koi khwaish dil main
Phir bhi unke sudher jaane ki umeend hoti hi rahi…


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« Reply #13 on: October 19, 2007, 02:58:00 AM »

beautiful Shika.. so nice


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Re: Kathputliyaan...

« Reply #14 on: December 05, 2007, 02:19:00 AM »

Thanks a lot Tosha, Pooja di and Paani.. Usual Smile

Very Very nice reply Pooja di... Its very sentimental..


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