mai mom hun -Panna 3:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #30 on: August 10, 2008, 06:17:49 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on August 10, 2008, 06:07:20 PM

roja,

chalo dil tak to pahunche saali sahiba ke Winking

bahoot bahoot shukriya honey ji

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Mere taraf se kuch koshish karti hun jiju..

Mein maom hun agar pighala sakoge kahena
Mujhe aapni bahon se na juda karna

Kabhi maom bhi pighal jaate hai aapke samne
Kabhi meri nazaron se dekho ye roshini humare

Labon tak aate aate lafz rukh jaate hain aapke samne
Mere pyar ki geherai ko pehchan sake toh aapna lo aapke samne


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #31 on: August 11, 2008, 01:38:39 AM »

tum ku kyu samjh nahi aya bekakar khud hi to mom likha tha or mom ku wax kesa bolne ka.

ye syednami ku thanks bolugi toda detail diya or mere ku samjh aya.


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #32 on: August 11, 2008, 07:46:59 AM »

Quote from: Kanta on August 11, 2008, 01:38:39 AM

tum ku kyu samjh nahi aya bekakar khud hi to mom likha tha or mom ku wax kesa bolne ka.

ye syednami ku thanks bolugi toda detail diya or mere ku samjh aya.

shukriya kanta ji, galati batane ka,
ab aage se likhte waqt poora khayal rakhunga


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #33 on: August 12, 2008, 01:10:32 AM »

wo to thik he per mein to mother mein likhi hu? abi next wax per likhugi bekarar


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #34 on: August 12, 2008, 01:18:49 AM »

der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye tongue3

Jaldi likho kahin moum ki jagah dad par na likh do Laughing hard


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«Reply #35 on: August 12, 2008, 01:27:51 AM »

tere per likhu kiya. jab kuch banega likh dalugi
wo to bekarar ne mom likha to mera kiya mistake


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #36 on: August 12, 2008, 03:12:38 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on August 08, 2008, 02:25:57 PM

mujhe nahi pata ki ye ghazal shayri-e-dard me aati hai ya nahi..lekin mujhe laga aur mai yahan post kar raha hun.....fir bhi agar ye jagah thik na lage to "we care" wale ise sahi jagah panhuch den...yun bhi shayad ye is forum me meri pahli hi post hai

mai mom hun, pighalna fitrat hai meri,
magar wo tapish to lao, jo pighala sake mujhko

mai parwana bhi to hun, jo khud hi mita de khud ko
magar wo shama to lao, jo bahon me le sake mujhko,

meri keemat se ab bhi kam hai, ye doulaten tumhari,
wo pyar bhi to lao, jo kharid sake mujhko

mujhe chand kah do tum, par rukhsati se pahle,
us suraj ko bulao, jo dubo sake mujhko,

mujhe marne se pahle, us shakhs ko bulao,
gunahgaar kah ke jo bula sake mujhko,

Quote from: bekarar on August 08, 2008, 06:17:07 PM

yo india par bahoot arsa pahle post ki hui meri ek kavita fir se is thread me daal raha hun..shayad aapne na padhi ho....
in dono kaitaon ka kuch sambandh bhi hai...jo mai janta hun...isliye man hua aapki nazar

tumhe gulon ki aadat hai, mai gamokhwar me khush hun,
tumhe "haqikat" me jeena hai, mai tassvur-e-sansar me khush hun,
tumhare aur mere khayalon me, sirf farq hai itana,
ke tum jeet ke khush ho, aur mai haar ke khush hun,

tumse kuch paane ki ummeed nahi karata,
mai to tumhe kuch dene ke, ehsas me khush hun,
badlega mera pyar tumhara bhi nazariya,
jhoothi hi sahi lekin, mai is aas me khush hun,

tagaful tera mere iradon ko, majboot banata hai,
tumhe ekrar nahi dil ka aur mai inkaar me khush hun
tumhe mujhse hai matlab kya, mujhe tumse nahi shikwa
tum apane haal me khush ho, mai apane haal me khush hun

tujhe bhulane se nahi fursat, mai teri yaad me khush hun,
tujhe dil-e-aabad se nafarat hai, mai dile barbaad me khush hun,
bujhane na dunga kasam hai khuda ki,
sulag raha hun subah sham, mai us aag me khush hun,

Sanjeev Bhai...Fir Der Se aaya hun. kya kahoge Janaab ??
Bas aise hi hota hai yaar reply dene me Hammesha let hota hun.bahot log khafaa hote hai mujse isi Kaaran.
Beshak bahot hi badhiya kalaam Likhaa Hai aapne..
ik ik Alfaaz Bade Hi Tarike se Tarteeb diya Hai aapne pahele awwal line Fir Doyam Line usi sher ki,,andaaz-e-Bayaa'n kuch juda hi hai.
aur Dusri Post bhi badhiya hai..kya hi khoob alfaz hai Usme.kaafi dard bhi Mehsoos Hota Hai Padhne lago Tab.aur Taweel-Ba-Tarteeb Badhiya sher hai sub k sub..bahot hi pasand aaya Khusi hue Kalaam padh k muje..
Ye Reply No 36. Kya Naseeb Hai mere Yaar Figure bhi Mila To Aisa !!!


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #37 on: August 12, 2008, 06:56:47 PM »

Quote from: honeyrose on August 10, 2008, 06:17:49 PM

bahoot khoob likha hai..honey ji...achchi koshish hai badhai


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #38 on: August 12, 2008, 07:00:08 PM »

Quote from: Kanta on August 12, 2008, 01:10:32 AM

wo to thik he per mein to mother mein likhi hu? abi next wax per likhugi bekarar

aapki badi mehrbaani jo aap is thread pe aayin aur shayri-e-dard ko sach me dard banaya...kanta ji


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #39 on: August 12, 2008, 07:03:54 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on August 12, 2008, 01:18:49 AM

der na ho jaye kahin der na ho jaye tongue3

Jaldi likho kahin moum ki jagah dad par na likh do Laughing hard

kya se kya ho gaya is thread me,
chaha kya kya mila, is thread me
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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #40 on: August 12, 2008, 07:10:41 PM »

ye kay chal raha hai yahan :O


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #41 on: August 12, 2008, 07:11:42 PM »

Quote from: Kanta on August 12, 2008, 01:27:51 AM

tere per likhu kiya. jab kuch banega likh dalugi
wo to bekarar ne mom likha to mera kiya mistake

ek gaana yaad aa gaya rafi sahab ka.....
magar rote rote hansi aa gai thi,
khayalon me aake, wo jab muskraye
mai ise yun kahunga

magar rote rote hansi aa gai thi,
is thread me aa ke jo gul tumne khilaye


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #42 on: August 12, 2008, 07:13:51 PM »

Quote from: angel4u on August 12, 2008, 07:10:41 PM

ye kay chal raha hai yahan :O

pura thread padho samajh aa jayega....


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #43 on: August 12, 2008, 07:22:54 PM »

Quote from: Muhammed on August 12, 2008, 03:12:38 PM

bhai raza
zahe nasib...aap tashreef to laye is mahfil me... bahoot khushi hui aapke comments padhkar ....
...rahi baat 36 ki to....mujhe lagta hai ab is kahawat ke mayne badalne ka waqt aa gaya hai Usual Smile


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Re: mai mom hun

«Reply #44 on: August 13, 2008, 12:26:38 AM »

it's okay bekarar derd mom ka ho ya wax ke jesa derd mein manushya hi to hota he.
ye rafi ne kaha tha ap kyu mere ku mar rahe han

or ye nirgun rajbir is ku to shayri ka abcd malun nahi pir kyu mera poetry pe tana karta.


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