mai mom hun

by bekarar on August 08, 2008, 02:25:57 PM
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«Reply #45 on: August 13, 2008, 10:54:21 PM »
Quote from: Kanta on August 13, 2008, 12:26:38 AM
it's okay bekarar derd mom ka ho ya wax ke jesa derd mein manushya hi to hota he.
ye rafi ne kaha tha ap kyu mere ku mar rahe han

or ye nirgun rajbir is ku to shayri ka abcd malun nahi pir kyu mera poetry pe tana karta.

ab mujhe shabbeer kumar ka gaya hua gana yaad aa gaya....
hairan hun mai aapki zulfon ko dekhkar,
inko ghata kahun to ghataon ko kya kahun

"HAIRAAN HUN MAI AAPKI AHAYRI KO DEKH KAR,
ISKO SHAYRI KHUN TO "SHAYRI" KO KYA KAHUN
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«Reply #46 on: August 13, 2008, 10:56:09 PM »
han ek baat aur..mom ko dard nahi hota kanta ji............
han dard jaroor mom jaisa hota hai
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«Reply #47 on: August 14, 2008, 02:50:25 AM »
Moum se pucho moum ke dard ka ahsaas
Pighal kar bhi ek AKS bana jaata hai
lena chahe jo bhi hatho main to toot jaata hai
Aag main jal kar he phir usse pighalna atta hai

Sabar hai insaan ka jaise Mom ki tarah
Musibato main jal kar, kuch ka kuch ban jaata hai
khamosh pathar ban jaati hai zindagi uski
socho ki agg main jal jal na jaane kaya bana jaata hai...
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«Reply #48 on: August 14, 2008, 08:20:36 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 14, 2008, 02:50:25 AM
Moum se pucho moum ke dard ka ahsaas
Pighal kar bhi ek AKS bana jaata hai
lena chahe jo bhi hatho main to toot jaata hai
Aag main jal kar he phir usse pighalna atta hai

Sabar hai insaan ka jaise Mom ki tarah
Musibato main jal kar, kuch ka kuch ban jaata hai
khamosh pathar ban jaati hai zindagi uski
socho ki agg main jal jal na jaane kaya bana jaata hai...

wah pooja ji kya  khoob andaz me pighlaya hai moum ko....bahoot achche
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #49 on: August 14, 2008, 07:50:10 PM »
Shukaria Bekarar ji!!!
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«Reply #50 on: August 16, 2008, 11:42:32 PM »
tum muje confuse karte ho bekarar, derd mom ku nahi hota ya pir wax ku?
wese muje dekh ker tumhe geet kyu yaad ate hen or woh bi purane.

good poetry pooja I'll see your other poems too
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«Reply #51 on: August 21, 2008, 08:27:55 PM »
I wonder "Why should this thread be in funny?"  Is it SO!
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«Reply #52 on: January 01, 2009, 05:00:35 AM »
Ajj yah thread ek baar phir se parra... bahoot khoob... Good work all!!
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