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« on: July 21, 2008, 10:56:18 AM »
Punhach gaye itni dur ki waapas aa na sake
chaahte the aisa ho naa par kuch kar na sake...

zindagi ke is khel men hum ek kathhputli bane
khincha jis tarah qismat ne bas hum chalte bane...

kisi se bhi dil khol ke kuch kah na sake
dil hi dil me jalte rahe dard dikha na sake...

socha tha jo woh unhen manzoor na tha
Ho gayi bhool badi par maafi maang na sake...

hum gham chhupaane ki koshish men khamosh rahe
unki nazar men hum wafa ka aanchal na aodh sake...
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« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2008, 11:19:46 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM JI.
I LIKED THE THIS LINE VERY MUCH

DIL HI DIL MEIN JALTE RAHE DARD DIKHA NA SAKE.
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« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2008, 11:22:58 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 21, 2008, 10:56:18 AM


zindagi ke is khel men hum ek kathhputli bane
khincha jis tarah qismat ne bas hum chalte bane...

kisi se bhi dil khol ke kuch kah na sake
dil hi dil me jalte rahe dard dikha na sake...

hum gham chhupaane ki koshish men khamosh rahe
unki nazar men hum wafa ka aanchal na aodh sake...

good one
1st line ke liye agar muje
aap ko point dene hote toh
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gr8 keep it up  Applause
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gir gir kar sambhalna hi zindgi hai
yaadon se hi dil ko behlaate rehna zindgi hai
sach hi hai beete pal kabhi laut kar nahi aate
par unhi palon mei jeete jaana zindgi hai
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« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2008, 12:07:24 PM »
bhoot aacha likha hai punam
thanx



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« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2008, 12:32:26 PM »
Quote from: ANKIT RAO on July 21, 2008, 11:19:46 AM
BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM JI.
I LIKED THE THIS LINE VERY MUCH

DIL HI DIL MEIN JALTE RAHE DARD DIKHA NA SAKE.


Thanx Ankit ji...
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« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2008, 12:34:52 PM »
Quote from: kiiller_1 on July 21, 2008, 11:22:58 AM
good one
1st line ke liye agar muje
aap ko point dene hote toh
10 meise 10 deta   Clapping Smiley
gr8 keep it up  Applause

sukriya Kiiller ji... aap yehan aaye padhe aap ko acha laga yeh hi bahut hai..
thanx once again...
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« Reply #6 on: July 21, 2008, 12:36:43 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on July 21, 2008, 12:07:24 PM
bhoot aacha likha hai punam
thanx
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Thanx Baadal ji..bahut dino k baad aap nazar aaye...aaj kal dikhte hi nahi..?
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« Reply #7 on: July 21, 2008, 02:07:35 PM »
Quote from: punam on July 21, 2008, 10:56:18 AM
zindagi ke is khel men hum ek kathhputli bane
khincha jis tarah qismat ne bas hum chalte bane...

kisi se bhi dil khol ke kuch kah na sake
dil hi dil me jalte rahe dard dikha na sake...



Bohot umda baat kahi punam ji khas kar ye do sher bohot pasand aaye, kuchh arz karne ki jur'at karta hun shayad kisi qaabil ho?.

Har khushi ne ham ko jab thukraa diya
Gham ne kitne pyaar se apnaa liya
Maut ki khaamushiyaaN chaai rahi
Zindagi kaa dil magar dhadkaa kiya
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« Reply #8 on: July 21, 2008, 09:07:13 PM »
Bohat khoob Punam...
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« Reply #9 on: July 21, 2008, 11:41:15 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 21, 2008, 02:07:35 PM
Bohot umda baat kahi punam ji khas kar ye do sher bohot pasand aaye, kuchh arz karne ki jur'at karta hun shayad kisi qaabil ho?.

Har khushi ne ham ko jab thukraa diya
Gham ne kitne pyaar se apnaa liya
Maut ki khaamushiyaaN chaai rahi
Zindagi kaa dil magar dhadkaa kiya

Sukriya Atiq Bhaiya...bahut khoob likha aap ne...bahut acha laga..

Quote from: Aryaan on July 21, 2008, 09:07:13 PM
Bohat khoob Punam...

Thanx Aryaan ji....
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« Reply #10 on: July 22, 2008, 12:06:50 AM »
Quote from: punam on July 21, 2008, 10:56:18 AM
Punhach gaye itni dur ki waapas aa na sake
chaahte the aisa ho naa par kuch kar na sake...

zindagi ke is khel men hum ek kathhputli bane
khincha jis tarah qismat ne bas hum chalte bane...

kisi se bhi dil khol ke kuch kah na sake
dil hi dil me jalte rahe dard dikha na sake...

socha tha jo woh unhen manzoor na tha
Ho gayi bhool badi par maafi maang na sake...

hum gham chhupaane ki koshish men khamosh rahe
unki nazar men hum wafa ka aanchal na aodh sake...

bahoot acha likha hai poonam ji likhte rahiye aise hee

netra....
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pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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« Reply #11 on: July 22, 2008, 12:18:58 AM »
itani udaasi?...........
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mere aansoo-on ne saara chaman bhigo diya hai,
hamin se poochte hain wo ye barsaat kaisi aayi
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« Reply #12 on: July 22, 2008, 01:09:10 AM »
nice creation punam ji
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hame zindgi se koi shikwa nahi,
koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.
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« Reply #13 on: July 22, 2008, 01:45:00 AM »
WOW PUNAM JI BOHAT KHOOB JI....
ZINDAGI KI HAQIQAT KO SHABDO MAIN
DHALNA KOI AAPSE SIKHE JI BOHAT KHOOB...Keep It Up
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« Reply #14 on: July 22, 2008, 02:45:28 AM »
Quote from: NETRAPAL on July 22, 2008, 12:06:50 AM
bahoot acha likha hai poonam ji likhte rahiye aise hee

netra....

sukriya Netra ji....

Quote from: bekarar on July 22, 2008, 12:18:58 AM
itani udaasi?...........

Thanx bhaiya hmmm kabhi kabhi insaan udaas bhi ho jata hai na...

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 22, 2008, 01:09:10 AM
nice creation punam ji

thanx kaushikbhawna ji....

Quote from: Shihab on July 22, 2008, 01:45:00 AM
WOW PUNAM JI BOHAT KHOOB JI....
ZINDAGI KI HAQIQAT KO SHABDO MAIN
DHALNA KOI AAPSE SIKHE JI BOHAT KHOOB...Keep It Up

hmm sujkriya shihab ji...aap jaise dost sath jab hote hain tab gham kis baat ki...
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