+++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++ -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Mahiya

Khair-Khwah
Khaas Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 46 days, 19 hours and 36 minutes.

Still Busy... with my Thoughts.. ;-)

Posts: 12829

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #15 on: February 27, 2008, 08:23:48 AM »

Nice Work Punam...
and a perfect reply Khawaish...


	Logged

"Please Try To Be Original Writer Not A Copied One..."

Yoindia.com Rules & Regulation
A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

Celmira

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 20 days, 14 hours and 49 minutes.

Posts: 32866

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #16 on: February 27, 2008, 08:52:38 AM »

Quote from: punam on February 25, 2008, 11:45:31 PM

karte hain jisse pyar woh agar kehede mujhe bhul jao
phir bhi usse dil se nikal nahi sakte hain hum..

kehde koi agar woh tha bewafa..jhoota tha uska pyar
bewafa usse keh nahi sakte hain hum...

maante hain hum woh majboor hai, uske dil me bhi dard hai
sirf pana hi nahi pyar me khud ko mitana bhi jaante hain hum..

hamare aansoo kahi na banjaye uski pao ki zanjeer
dard dil me dabake uski khatir muskurane ki kasam khaaye hain hum..

uski khushi uski salamat dilse chahte hain hum
uske khilaf ek labz sun.na nahi chahte hain hum...

iss janam me na mil sake, agle janam me hume milade..
bas ab yehi dua khuda se maangte hain hum...

Bohot khoob Punam....beautiful !


	Logged

Celmira

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 20 days, 14 hours and 49 minutes.

Posts: 32866

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #17 on: February 27, 2008, 08:53:39 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 26, 2008, 11:14:06 AM

Iss zindagi mein koi kissi ko nahi bhool paata
woh baat alag hai ke,insaan waqt se bhi to nahi lad paata....

har ek ko apne dil ka dard sunane se kuch nahi haasil "punam"
sach to yeh hai ke,samajne wala hi hai yeh dard ko samaj paata....

jo kadam aap kisi ke saath chale the
usse kyon nahi yaad karte???
jo kadam saath na chal sake usse yaad kar kyon
aapka dil hai ro jaata....

kisi ki majboori ko samaj kar chup ho jaana
bhi bahut badi baat hai mohabbat mein,
par khud ko mitaakar,
koi kuch bhi haasil nahi hai kar paata....

jisse aap pyaar karte ho,usse kuch aise yaad karna
ke woh yaadein aapko khushi de sake ZINDAGI bhar
ghamo ko dil mein rakh kar do kadam bhi nahi hai
insaan chal paata....

zindagi bahut badi hai aur isse jeene ke wajeh
bhi bahut hote hai dil ke paas,
ek guzarte lamhe ke liye khud ko
insaan itni badi saza to nahi de paata...

iss zindagi mein koi kisi ko nahi bhool paata
woh baat alag hai ke, insaan waqt se bhi to nahi lad paata.....

Bohot khoob Khwaish !


	Logged

Mann

Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 5 days, 18 hours and 33 minutes.

Posts: 7736

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #18 on: February 28, 2008, 05:42:48 AM »

Bahut Khooooooob PUNAM & KHWAISH Ji..

Tanhaai Kis Ko Kahate Hain, Mujhe Pata nahi Yaaron,
Kyunki Har Waqt Unki Haseen Yaaden Saath Rahati Hain...

Kabhi Jo Gir Bhi Padhte Hain Aansoo, Unki Judaai Me,
Rokta Hoon To Yeh Kambakht Aankhen Bura Maan Leti Hain.....


	Logged

**~** Mann **~**

punam

Mashhur Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 39 days, 4 hours and 42 minutes.

Posts: 16302

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #19 on: February 28, 2008, 05:48:39 AM »

Shikha di talat di and vicky ji thanx...

vicky ji bahot acha likhe aap ne..


	Logged

punam

Mashhur Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 39 days, 4 hours and 42 minutes.

Posts: 16302

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #20 on: February 28, 2008, 05:51:08 AM »

chalo kuch likhne ki koshish main bhi karti hun....

Band aankhon me tum..khuli aankhon me tum
dil me bhi tum..
jahan dekhun tum hi tum nazar aate ho...

aankhon se dur kyun nahi jate ho
mujhe kyun itna tadpate ho...

kaise bhool paun tumhe kyun nahi batate ho..
ghav dil ko deke kahan chup jaate ho

ghav pe malham nahi lagate ho
dil ko bhi chor ke nahi jaate ho..

her jagah tum nazar aate ho
mujhe kyun itna tadpate ho...

waqt mujhpe rehem nahi khaati
maut bhi paas aane nahi deti..
dil se tumhari yaad chor nahi jaati...

her jagah tum nazar aate ho..
mujhe kyun itna tadpate ho...


	Logged

khwaish

Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 22 days, 4 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 2643

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #21 on: February 28, 2008, 12:01:39 PM »

koi chaah kar bhi kabhi
ek dusre ko nahi bhool payenge
jo pal saath bitaye the,
woh pal aankhon ke saamne aakar phir tehar jayenge....

log kal bhi chalte the, aaj bhi chalte hai,
aur aane wale kal mein bhi chalte hi reh jayenge
zindagi ke is safar mein bas..kadmo ke nishaan reh jayenge.....

par afsos waqt ke saath yeh bhi mit jaayenge..
jab tak shayad hum bhi jeena seekh jayenge.....

Umeed ki dor ko hamesha thaam kar rakhna "punam"
jo gir jaate hai phool shaak se,
woh phir kabhi na khil payenge...

Ab inn aansuo ko naa behne do is tarah,
yeh aansu teri majbooriyon ko dekh kar
aur bhi tujhe rulayenge...

Jab jaante ho aap ke woh bewafa nahi tha,
par woh wafa bhi to na kar saka,
Jaane kya NAAM phir yeh Duniya wale
usse deh jayenge...

'KHWAISH" KI YEH GUZARISH HAI AAPSE,
AAP BAS RAAHON PAR APNE CHAL KAR TO DEKHO
MANZIL KHUD HUMSAFAR BANKAR TERI
HAR RAAH PAR SAATH NIBHAYENGE....

KYA HUA JO WOH SHAKS TERE SAATH NA DE SAKA
USKI YAADON KE MELE MEIN
AAP APNA MAN BEH LAYENGE....

KOI CHAAH KAR BHI KABHI
EK DUSRE KO NAHI BHOOL PAYENGE....


	Logged

Bahut Pehle Se Unn Kadmon
Ki Aahat Jaan Lete Hai..

Tujhe Eh Zindagi,
Hum Door Se Pehchchaan Lete Hai....

punam

Mashhur Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 39 days, 4 hours and 42 minutes.

Posts: 16302

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #22 on: February 28, 2008, 12:05:34 PM »

Bahot acha likha aap ne kitu ji..

log kal bhi chalte the, aaj bhi chalte hai,
aur aane wale kal mein bhi chalte hi reh jayenge
zindagi ke is safar mein bas..kadmo ke nishaan reh jayenge.....

zindagi ki sachayi yehan nazar aa rahi hai...
nice one..


	Logged

Pooja

Khair-Khwah
Ustaad ae Shayari

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 32 days, 2 hours and 14 minutes.

Posts: 37699

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #23 on: February 28, 2008, 12:07:45 PM »

wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob kitu.. yah lines bahoot hi sahi kahi hai apne

Ab inn aansuo ko naa behne do is tarah,
yeh aansu teri majbooriyon ko dekh kar
aur bhi tujhe rulayenge...


	Logged

Yoindia.com Rules & Regulation | Introduce yourself to Yoindia

A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

punam

Mashhur Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 39 days, 4 hours and 42 minutes.

Posts: 16302

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #24 on: February 29, 2008, 10:32:39 AM »

Tut ke bikhar gaya woh mehel jiska
buniyad sheeshe se banaye the tum...
tumhare mehel ka har sheesha
jab pata tumhe mera puchega
dil hi dil me mujhe yaad karoge tum...

chandni raaton me tumhe
shola banke chandni dehkayegi
her ek saans me mujhe yaad karoge tum..
bhul jane ki her ek kosish se
mujhe aur jyada yaad karoge tum...

jab bhooli bisri yaadon me
mujhe dekho ge tum...
rub se tumhare salamati ka,
dua karte huye paoge tum..


	Logged

Roja

Khaas Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 19 days, 10 hours and 25 minutes.

Posts: 9624

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #25 on: February 29, 2008, 10:45:53 AM »

Quote from: punam on February 28, 2008, 05:51:08 AM

Wah wah punam...


	Logged

Know Me Know Love
No Me No Love

Roja

Khaas Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 19 days, 10 hours and 25 minutes.

Posts: 9624

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #26 on: February 29, 2008, 10:48:14 AM »

Quote from: punam on February 29, 2008, 10:32:39 AM

Every emotional lines punam. Very good.


	Logged

Know Me Know Love
No Me No Love

honeyrose

Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 27 days, 17 hours and 18 minutes.

Posts: 5996

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #27 on: February 29, 2008, 10:49:08 AM »

Nice punam dear.. Usual Smile


	Logged

Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they

punam

Mashhur Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 39 days, 4 hours and 42 minutes.

Posts: 16302

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #28 on: February 29, 2008, 11:15:26 AM »

thanx roja di and Honey di....


	Logged

syednaami

Umda Shayar

Offline

Waqt Yoindia ko Diya: 25 days, 8 hours and 54 minutes.

Kuchh Na Kaho -

Posts: 4922

Re: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

« Reply #29 on: May 10, 2008, 05:16:54 AM »

Superb, very thoughtful and comes directly from the heart, imaginative creation. Bravo!! Applause


	Logged

Mataa'e loh-o-qalam chhin gayi to kya gham hai,
Ki khoon-e-dil men duboli hain ungliyan mainne,
Zubaan pe muhr lagi hai to kya, ki rakh di hai,
Har ek Halqaa-e-zanjeer men zubaan main ne.
(Faiz Ahmed Faiz)

Yoindia.com : Shero Shayari in Urdu Hindi & Various other Languages: Forums


	Logged

Pages: 1 [2] 3 4

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: +++++Mujhe Bhul Jao+++++

Mention NM