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baadal102
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« on: May 09, 2008, 12:10:45 PM »

Har saksh ke saamne wo hume ruswa karte rahe,
Lab khamosh to har dard hum sine mai seh.te rahe,

Har nafrat seh ker bhi hum un.he pyar karte rahe,
Dil na dukhayenge kasme wo hume dete rahe,

Har kasm ko wo sare.aam jhootlate rahe,
Apne issi fitrat se wo humme rulate rahe,

Har baar hum un ke surat se dhoka khate rahe,
Apne us rakeeb se BAADAL fir bhi dil lagate rahe,

Apne us rakeeb se BAADAL fir bhi dil lagate rahe...........






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« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2008, 12:43:11 PM »

wah wah wah!!! kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Baadal ji!!! din per din apki kavitaye gehari hoti ja rahi hai.. Good Job!!!
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« Reply #2 on: May 09, 2008, 03:14:58 PM »

bahut khoob baadalji..bahut simple words mein gehri baat likhi hai.. Applause
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« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2008, 02:09:03 AM »

HI,BADAL JI....
NICE WORDING, LAGTA HAI ISS BAAR BAHUT CHAA GAYE AAP
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL

RUSWA KARKE HAME WO GAIROON KE PASS JA BAITHE,
HAM THE ISS INTZAAR MEIN WO HAME MANANE AAYENGE....
PAR YE SARD HAWA PAIGAM YE LAYI HAI,
BHOOL JA-E-DOST AAB NA WO PURANE JAMANE AAYENGE....
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« Reply #4 on: May 10, 2008, 05:51:37 AM »

gud creation badal ji and nice lines k.shael ji


hai intzaar abhi b tera chahe dil dukhane k liye aa
dard de cahe hamei ya fir chod jaane k liye aa
abi aur b imtahaan hai baaki shayad "bhawna" k
tu ek baar to aa bhale mujhe mitane k liye aa
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« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2008, 11:05:12 AM »

bahut khoob baadal ji
accha likha hai aapne
ek ek line dil ke kareeb lagi

humne to tumhe chaha tha dil ki gahraiyon se
par dil mera toot gaya aap ki ruswaiyon se
khuda tumhe door hi rakhe pyar ki bewafaiyon se   
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« Reply #6 on: May 10, 2008, 11:14:20 AM »

Baadal ji bahot hi acha likhe aap ne...
shael ji  and  kaushikbhawna j aap bhi ...
yun likhte rahiye...
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« Reply #7 on: May 10, 2008, 01:22:26 PM »

Wah wah baadal ji, jaisa pooja di ne kaha aaj kal ek se badkar
ek aapka likha padne ko mil rahi hai. very good creation  Applause
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« Reply #8 on: May 11, 2008, 01:30:02 AM »

aap sabhi ka mai tahe dil se aadar karta hu
ki aap ne apna time nikal ke mere lines ko
padha or fir saraha bhi,aisa kuch nahi hai ki
mere lines bahut aache hai lakin ye sab aap ka
pyar hai jo mujhe mil raha hai,umeed hai mai
aap sabhi ki umeedo ko hamesha poora karta rahunga.

thanx a lot aap sabhi ke liye,aaj pahle baar maine spl. kisi ka
name mention nahi kiya hai coz. mere liye aap sabhi ka pyar barabar hai agar bhoole se mujh se koi galti ho gaye ho to plz maaf ker dena.



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« Reply #9 on: May 11, 2008, 01:38:39 AM »

aap sabhi ka mai tahe dil se aadar karta hu
ki aap ne apna time nikal ke mere lines ko
padha or fir saraha bhi,aisa kuch nahi hai ki
mere lines bahut aache hai lakin ye sab aap ka
pyar hai jo mujhe mil raha hai,umeed hai mai
aap sabhi ki umeedo ko hamesha poora karta rahunga.

thanx a lot aap sabhi ke liye,aaj pahle baar maine spl. kisi ka
name mention nahi kiya hai coz. mere liye aap sabhi ka pyar barabar hai agar bhoole se mujh se koi galti ho gaye ho to plz maaf ker dena.

Baadal

welcome ... accha likhte ho ji aap
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