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Pooja

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #15 on: January 10, 2008, 04:54:14 PM »

bahoot khoob shikha, nice majid!!


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #16 on: January 11, 2008, 04:51:08 AM »

julm karne wale hans rahe hain
hum ek muskrahat ko taras rahe hain

peekar kar bhi hum bhula na sake
gum is kadar hum par baras rahe hain

na aankho ki num kam hui
aankho se aansu is tarah baras rahe hain


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #17 on: January 12, 2008, 05:27:48 AM »

Thanks Pooja Ji...And Nice 2 You Sika Ji...


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Mere Jism Ke Zarre Zarre Main Tanhaai Uatar Gayi.
Aur Ruh Ka Kona Kona Ek Yaad Ne Mehkaaya Hai.

Mahiya

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #18 on: May 09, 2008, 10:28:08 AM »

Thanks a lot Punam, HoneyRose, Prmchawla, Mask, Pooja di and Sika..

Nice Lines Honey and Sika... Applause


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #19 on: May 09, 2008, 10:34:45 AM »

Thanks Shikha sis.. Usual Smile


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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #20 on: July 15, 2008, 06:05:29 AM »

Charon taraf khadi kashamkash ki diwaar hai,
Khushian tamaam humari, jiske uss paar hai…

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar¹ hai…

Tum aaye thhe ya, hua hai ye chalaava² saa koi,
Khidikiyon se dikhaayi deta, kaisa gubaar hai…

Suni Suni si dhun kahin, Dabi Dabi si koi aahat,
Pehchaani si awaazon ka, laga hua bazaar hai…

Har lamha doob raha hai ek khaalipan ke saath,
Yeh Kiske intezaar mein, Dil itna bekaraar hai…

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

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pahchani si aawazon ka laga hua baazar hai.........
wah ji wah.....kya kahne aapke....itni sunder rachna se door raha....khed hai mujhe.....lekin padhte padhte kitane hi rang aankhon se guzarne lage aur fir se wahi nikla..wah ...wah mahiya


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kuch logon ko bikne ko baazar nahi milte,
kuch log bikne ke liye taiyaar nahi milte
mayoos hua jab bhi gaya, bikne ko "bekarar"
zameer wale ghulaamon ko kharidaar nahi milte

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Mahiya

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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #21 on: July 19, 2008, 04:09:44 AM »

Hausla Afzaai ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev.. Usual Smile


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Re: Sharaar Hai Raakh Mein!!!

« Reply #22 on: July 20, 2008, 01:18:30 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on January 07, 2008, 05:40:57 AM

Charon taraf khadi kashamkash ki diwaar hai,
Khushian tamaam humari, jiske uss paar hai…

Teri nazar ko aaj bhi dhoondhti hai meri nazar,
Raakh ke dher mein chuppa, koi sharaar¹ hai…

Tum aaye thhe ya, hua hai ye chalaava² saa koi,
Khidkiyon se dikhaayi deta, kaisa gubaar hai…

Suni Suni si dhun kahin, Dabi Dabi si koi aahat,
Pehchaani si awaazon ka, laga hua bazaar hai…

Har lamha doob raha hai ek khaalipan ke saath,
Yeh Kiske intezaar mein, Dil itna bekaraar hai…

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

1. sharaar = chingaari (spark)
2. chalaava = nazar ka dhokha (illusion)
3. taaviil = lamba aur thakaan bhara (long and tiring)
4. fikar = pareshaani (botheration)

Just wonderful, specially these lines.

Zindagi ka safar yeh ab kitna taaviil³ ho chala,
Lafz dhundhlaane lage aur fikar⁴ ki bharmaar hai…

keep writing.


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Koi Badli Kabhi Is Tarah Aayegi,
Pyaas Sadiyonki Pal Mein Bujh Jayegi,
Tujhko Lauta Ke Meri Aagosh Mein,
Dekhna Wakt Ki Nabz Ruk Jayegi!!!

You Hurt A True Heart In Love As Many TiMes You Want,
It Will Never Ever Stop Loving You.
But If You Cheat A True Heart, It Wont Hurt Or Hate You,
But It Wont Dare To Love You Again!!!!!

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