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Author Topic: Viraam ek lag jaayega...!!  (Read 578 times)
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« on: June 20, 2008, 10:21:05 AM »
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !
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« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2008, 10:29:08 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj mere dil me kuch aise hi vichar hain, padh-kar laga mere dil ki baat aapke shabdon me dhal gaye hain
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mere aansoo-on ne saara chaman bhigo diya hai,
hamin se poochte hain wo ye barsaat kaisi aayi
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« Reply #2 on: June 20, 2008, 11:01:40 AM »
wah kaya baat hai.. Ajj to ek se bad kar ek shayri padne ko mil rahi hai... bahoot khoob Likha celmira!!

yah lines behad pasand aai:

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main
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« Reply #3 on: June 20, 2008, 06:10:57 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 10:21:05 AM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !


Ati sundar!! kamaal ka likha aap ne, apne khyalaat or halaat ki behtareen aqqasi ki.


Banawat ka zamana he
Wahi qissa purana he
Laga he peeth me khnjar
Nishane par diwaana he

Zamana aage chalta he
Bohot jaldi badalta he
Kisi ki aankh roti he
Kisi ka dil behlta he

Ye begano'n ki basti he
Yahan kya meri hasti he
Ye girgit rang badal te hen
Ye inki mooj-masti he

Jaha'n koi aashiyana he
Waha'n toofa'n to aana he
Magar dil ko n kar chhota
Ye do din ka fasana he

Kahan tak saath aaenge
Bure din beet jaaenge
Jo khushiya'n leke aate the
Wo din phir lot aaenge

Zara ab muskura dena
Zamane ko dikha dena
Koi jab saath he apne
To gam ka saath kya dena
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« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2008, 01:01:30 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 10:21:05 AM


Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal


aap ne bahoot aacha ahsaas likha hai
thanx to share with us



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« Reply #5 on: June 21, 2008, 01:44:05 AM »
Bahoot khoob Celmira..bahoot arse baad tumeh pada achha laga...agar sahi kahooN toh maiN khud hi kaafi arse baad baad yahaN daakhil hua hooN....bahoot hi oomda likha hai aapne....


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« Reply #6 on: June 21, 2008, 02:04:16 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2008, 10:21:05 AM
Nahin lagta hai kuch achcha
Kuch ankhon ko nahin jachta
Banawat hai maahol main
Nahin lagta hai kuch sachcha

Dilon par hain syaah baadal
Bhaari khud pe hai har pal
Toot raha hai jaane kya
Dil main hai ajab halchal

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Kho jaaungi ab main bhi
Ji liya yeh jeevan bhi
Viraam ek lag jaayega
Bhula degi phir dunya bhi !


bohut acha likha hai celmira ji and good reply sayyid ji
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hame zindgi se koi shikwa nahi,
koi gila nahi ki wo hamko mila nahi,
jeene k liye unki yaadon ka sahara bohu hai,
koi gam nahi jo wo do kadam saath chala nahi.
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« Reply #7 on: June 21, 2008, 02:13:25 AM »
Really Too good...
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Koi Badli Kabhi Is Tarah Aayegi,
Pyaas Sadiyonki Pal Mein Bujh Jayegi,
Tujhko Lauta Ke Meri Aagosh Mein,
Dekhna Wakt Ki Nabz Ruk Jayegi!!!

You Hurt A True Heart In Love As Many TiMes You Want,
It Will Never Ever Stop Loving You.
But If You Cheat A True Heart, It Wont Hurt Or Hate You,
But It Wont Dare To Love You Again!!!!!
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« Reply #8 on: June 23, 2008, 01:07:31 PM »
Dukh hai ki dard hai, -
Jo lag gaya so zarb hai, -
Aur zindagi sangharsh hai, -
Par dard hai ki garm hai, -

Ab jeena bhi dobhar hai, -
Thoda jeevan ka guzar hai, -
Aane jaane ki daggar hai, -
Dukhon men karna sabar hai. -

(Syed Naami)

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Celmira,,, really intricate and superb...
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Bakhshi hain humko ishq ne woh jura'aten Majaz, -
Darte nahin  siyaasat-e-ahl-e-jahaan se hum. - (Asrar-ul-Haq Majaaz)
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« Reply #9 on: June 23, 2008, 01:20:51 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 20, 2008, 06:10:57 PM

Banawat ka zamana he
Wahi qissa purana he
Laga he peeth me khnjar
Nishane par diwaana he

Zamana aage chalta he
Bohot jaldi badalta he
Kisi ki aankh roti he
Kisi ka dil behlta he

Ye begano'n ki basti he
Yahan kya meri hasti he
Ye girgit rang badal te hen
Ye inki mooj-masti he

Jaha'n koi aashiyana he
Waha'n toofa'n to aana he
Magar dil ko n kar chhota
Ye do din ka fasana he

Kahan tak saath aaenge
Bure din beet jaaenge
Jo khushiya'n leke aate the
Wo din phir lot aaenge

Zara ab muskura dena
Zamane ko dikha dena
Koi jab saath he apne
To gam ka saath kya dena

 Applause Applause Applause  bahoot he acha likha hai apne Sayyid jee!!
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« Reply #10 on: June 23, 2008, 03:07:33 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on June 20, 2008, 10:29:08 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
aaj mere dil me kuch aise hi vichar hain, padh-kar laga mere dil ki baat aapke shabdon me dhal gaye hain

Bohot bohot shukriya Bekarar, aapne ise dil se mehsoos kiya Usual Smile
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« Reply #11 on: June 23, 2008, 03:08:28 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on June 20, 2008, 11:01:40 AM
wah kaya baat hai.. Ajj to ek se bad kar ek shayri padne ko mil rahi hai... bahoot khoob Likha celmira!!

yah lines behad pasand aai:

Khamoshi se pukaroon main
Yaadon ko sanwaroon main
Kho gaye mere apne
Chup chup si niharoon main

Thanks a lot Pooja...aapko ye kavita pasand aayi...
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« Reply #12 on: June 23, 2008, 03:09:34 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 20, 2008, 06:10:57 PM
Ati sundar!! kamaal ka likha aap ne, apne khyalaat or halaat ki behtareen aqqasi ki.


Banawat ka zamana he
Wahi qissa purana he
Laga he peeth me khnjar
Nishane par diwaana he

Zamana aage chalta he
Bohot jaldi badalta he
Kisi ki aankh roti he
Kisi ka dil behlta he

Ye begano'n ki basti he
Yahan kya meri hasti he
Ye girgit rang badal te hen
Ye inki mooj-masti he

Jaha'n koi aashiyana he
Waha'n toofa'n to aana he
Magar dil ko n kar chhota
Ye do din ka fasana he

Kahan tak saath aaenge
Bure din beet jaaenge
Jo khushiya'n leke aate the
Wo din phir lot aaenge

Zara ab muskura dena
Zamane ko dikha dena
Koi jab saath he apne
To gam ka saath kya dena

Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid....aapne bohot hi khoobsurat jawab diya hai...bohot khoob Applause
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« Reply #13 on: June 23, 2008, 03:10:10 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on June 21, 2008, 01:01:30 AM
aap ne bahoot aacha ahsaas likha hai
thanx to share with us



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Tah-e-dil se shukriya Baadal !
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« Reply #14 on: June 23, 2008, 03:11:53 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on June 21, 2008, 01:44:05 AM
Bahoot khoob Celmira..bahoot arse baad tumeh pada achha laga...agar sahi kahooN toh maiN khud hi kaafi arse baad baad yahaN daakhil hua hooN....bahoot hi oomda likha hai aapne....


Harash

Harash Ji, aaj aapko yahan dekh kar bohot hi khushi hui...shukriya...Please be regular...Ek baar laut ke aaye the itne din baad, ab dobara se kahan chale gaye hain !
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