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Roja

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*Aaj Akhbaar Main*

« on: July 24, 2007, 01:11:05 PM »

Hai TSunami, Earthquake, Attacks, Peeda, Bebasi Agbar Main
Ab Nahi Milti Kahii Koyee Khushi Akhbaar Main..

Sochkar Yeh Baath Hii Mai Roj Padthi Hu Esse
Koyee Toh Acchi Khaber Hogi Kabhi Akhbaar Main..

Maut Ka Sailab Hai, Jab Her Tarah Aaya Hua
Log Nahak Doondthe Hai Zindagi Akhbaar Main..

Siyaahi(Ink) Kale Akhsharon Ke Beech Shayad Ek Din
Nakhsh Ubharenge Milegi Roshni Akhbaar Main..

"Khoon" Bhi Chape Gaye Hai, "Rape" Bhi Chape Gaye Hai
Ab Kahiye To Bhala Hai Kya Kami Akhbaar Main..

Arre "Roja", Surkhiyon Main Kal Bhi Log Kuch Mer Gaye
Log Kuch Mer Gaye Hai Aaj Bhi Akhbaar Main..!!
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Ricky

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« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2007, 03:39:10 PM »

Thats good, infact very good.
Just a note.. I think its call Akhbaar Usual Smile

Fits best to Tanziyah Section !

Also, if sometimes poet / poetess may talk little about their poem before or after poem it really feels interesting to interact with POET that way... something I try to do often and also saw Meena doing same in one post today.


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« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2007, 10:04:31 PM »

Quote from: "Ricky"

Thats good, infact very good.
Just a note.. I think its call Akhbaar Usual Smile

Thank you very much for your valuable comments.
Yap i read Meena's posting....and felt the way u said...


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« Reply #3 on: July 28, 2007, 12:57:41 PM »

Khoob, Bohat khoob.


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Re: *Aaj Akhbaar Main*

« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2008, 09:57:40 PM »

Khudkhushi chapthi hai dainik akhbaar main
Utra hai vampanth apni sarkar main

Desh ki garibi ka nijikaran kar denge
Keh rahe musahib sab desh ke darbaar main

Izzat se usmath tak nafrat se dehshat tak
Ab kya-kya bechoge apne bazar main

Gaovon ka vote bank mantri se pooch raha
Roti ki fasle hai kiske adhikar main?


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Re: *Aaj Akhbaar Main*

« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2008, 10:07:18 PM »

Desh hamara roti unki kaisa gadbadgotala hai?
Andhiyare ke kale van mein bolo kahan ujala hai?

Bhook aadmi ke sang aksar bhikti hai bazaron main
Akhbaaron mein ishtihaar kyu ab tak nahi nikala hai?

Gavon ki tehzeeb hamari berbadhi per roti hai
Desi logtantr ki mandi main videshi tala hai

Dehshat jeete lamhon ki tanhayi mein kyu cheek uti
Aayi hai apna gaov chod kerke jumman ki khala hai

Bacchon ke chehron per ek udasi aise chayi hai
Jaise hari fasal ke upper pada gajab ka pala hai

Bhook, garibi, maut, khushkushi, sab chape hai akhbaar main
Jahan hamara dard chapa ho, aisa kaun risala hai?


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Re: *Aaj Akhbaar Main*

« Reply #6 on: May 06, 2008, 02:03:24 AM »

Bohat hi umda likha hai dear Roja sach pe aaj kal
akhbaar dekh the hai dil rota hai kabhi kabhi..
bohat hi ehsaas hai iss shayari pe..
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Zindagi thi ajeeb sab ke sab ek khwaab they
jo khushi nahi mili uske gam behisaabthey..
tha samander apna firbhikyu pyase they
hum ek hi baat main chupe kayi hijaab they

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Re: *Aaj Akhbaar Main*

« Reply #7 on: May 06, 2008, 03:16:09 AM »

Roja ma'am
Excellent, unbelievably amazing, your poetic instincts are great, you can write on any topic and subject without any hesitation.
Marvelous submission. Bravo!!


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Re: *Aaj Akhbaar Main*

« Reply #8 on: May 06, 2008, 09:42:19 AM »

wow too good Roja!!! Hamesha ki tarah bahoot hi acha likha hai!!! Good creations!!!


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Re: *Aaj Akhbaar Main*

« Reply #9 on: May 11, 2008, 12:01:12 AM »

Bahut bahut shukhriya Honey dear, Syed ji, Pooja di


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