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NETRAPAL
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« on: May 12, 2008, 05:52:50 AM »

phat gaya hai dil mera kisee masoom ko dekh kar
dekh phate kapado me behosh kisee masoom ko
dahak gaya hoo mai uske bahate laoo ko dekh kar

bas me nahi hai man ansoo tak ate nahi
hogaya hoo bejan mai us balatkaar ko dekh kar

khadee bhee kee logo kee, bana ise ek kotoohal
hanste hai kai daanav us nange jism ko dekh kar

jhooka kar sar khada ek begunah baap
kaun kar gyaa us masoom se yaha maha paap
kanap gyaya ho ek maa ke vilaap ko dekh khar
phat gaya hai dil mera kisee masoom ko dekh kar

फट गया है दिल मेरा किसी मासूम को देख कर
देख फटे कपडो मे बेहोश किसी मासूम को,
दहक गया हू मैं उसके बहते लहू देख कर

बस मे नही है मन, आंसू तक आते नही
हो गया हू बेजान सा मै उस बलात्कार को देख कर

खड़ी भीड़ लोगों की, बना कर इसे एक कोतुहल
हँसते है कई दानव भी उस नंगे जिस्म को देख कर

झुका कर सिर खड़ा है एक बेगुनाह बाप
कौन कर गया उसकी मासूम से यह पाप
काँप गया हू एक माँ के विलाप को देख कर
फट गया है दिल मेरा किसी मासूम को देख कर

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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2008, 06:14:18 AM »

Netra

Shabash ! Applause

Har baar ki tarah ... burning issues par tumhara likhna mujhe bahut pasand hai !

Keep it up ! Applause
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« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2008, 06:16:53 AM »

GOOD WORK, NETRAPAL JI, Applause
NICE THINKING & TRUE FEELINGS....
REALLY IT'S TRULY NICE.... Applause
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« Reply #3 on: May 12, 2008, 09:12:52 AM »

NETRAPAL ji bohat hai umda likha hai sachai se bhara shayari
very nice.. Clapping Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2008, 09:51:41 AM »

Amazing... Applause
Nice Topic and very well expressed...
Well Done Netra..  icon_thumleft
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« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2008, 10:11:59 AM »

Superb...  Applause
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« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2008, 11:59:27 PM »

thanks rajbir jee, k. shael. mahiya ji and roja ji for giving reply

roja jee aap to khud social issues pe bahoot achaa likhtee hai aapko padh kar maine kafee kuch seekha hai. thanks again

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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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« Reply #7 on: May 13, 2008, 12:07:24 AM »

Netra ji aap bohat acha likhte hai keep going ..Usual Smile
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« Reply #8 on: May 13, 2008, 01:26:55 AM »

tha
Netra ji aap bohat acha likhte hai keep going ..Usual Smile

thanks honey jee,

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pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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« Reply #9 on: May 13, 2008, 06:03:27 PM »

wowow too good netra ji!!!
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« Reply #10 on: May 14, 2008, 12:36:42 AM »

wowow too good netra ji!!!
thanks pooja ji.....

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yaa hoo dar par tere kuch pane kee aas hai
pyaasa hoo do ghoot palde samander se tere
na rah jayega daman kahalee tera e rahnooma
kai kboobsoorat fool khile hai daman me tere.
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