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« on: July 28, 2007, 12:35:00 PM »

Mujhko natni pehnaye sajaye bazaron main
Meri keemat lagane ko bitaya hazaron main..
Mai karu to kya karu?... Mai hu Bebas .. Lachar Ek Gareeb Larki

Darta hai jee meri dekho akhiyon main hai paani
Lutne ko majboor bani sajkar meri jawani
Mardon ki sharafat ne mujhko di hai ek nishani
Mujhko dulhan banake mera naam rakha hai "Raat Ki Rani"
Sitam tane ko mujhpe rakha hai diwaron main
Meri keemat lagane ko bitaya hazaron main..
Mai karu toh kya karu?... Mai hu Bebas.. Lachar Ek Gareeb Larki

Gunghat mera utayenge mujhe ghod main bitayenge
Phir bahon main litayenge sari raat takayenge
Mere armanon ko todenge, meri kalayee marodenge
Muskura na sakhungi mai ujadkar baharon main
Meri keemat lagane ko bitaya hazaron main
Mai karu toh kya karu?... Mai hu Bebas.. Lachar Ek Gareeb Larki

Mardon ki hawas bujhane ko yahan raat rangilil hoti hai
Yahan jashn khushi ka hota hai .. aahon main jawani roti hai
Yahan koyee kisii ka Maa nahi na koyee kisii ka Beti hai
Yahan paisa kamane ko aurat sajkar sej pe leti hai.

"Roja" zindagi hai bebas mardon ke saharon main
Meri keemat lagane ko bitaya hazaron main..
Mai karu toh kya karu?... Mai hu Bebas.. Lachar Ek Gareeb Larki

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« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2007, 12:51:29 PM »

Well, It'll be a bad Impact if i repeat the words of my last post; but now i am much more stunned of your writing.

So very deep thinking with much more diplomacy in every stanza, Main kis tarah tareef karun aur roza, ye mere bass ki baat nahi.


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« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2007, 04:44:53 PM »

Bohot hi acchcha likha hai ROja =D>


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« Reply #3 on: August 31, 2007, 11:05:26 AM »

Thank you Neer for your valuable comments... and lovely praising...

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« Reply #4 on: August 31, 2007, 12:07:13 PM »

Wow!!

Too good, Too Bold, Beyond excellence..

A very Creative work, Deep Thoughts, Full of Emotions, Full of Pain!!!!

Simple but deep words, very thoughtful!!!


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« Reply #5 on: September 18, 2007, 12:59:27 PM »

Roja... I must say here... Only few people have guts to write so boldly. And you indeed, have done your job very very well...

This work have some very bold thoughts and Very nicely being combined with feelings of pain, which are as nicely written, as a top-most poet could write them.

I am really stunned, Really out of words to praise you enough. You are just Amazing Writer... Usual Smile


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« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2007, 07:44:26 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Wow!!

Too good, Too Bold, Beyond excellence..

A very Creative work, Deep Thoughts, Full of Emotions, Full of Pain!!!!

Simple but deep words, very thoughtful!!!

Thanks Pooja di....Kuch in aankhon ne dekha hai ..
kuch logo ko in bazaron se baher nikala bi hai.. inke
dard ko feel ki hai maine... so...soch sochkar likha. ..
Thank you once again for your valuable comments.


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« Reply #7 on: October 09, 2007, 07:47:02 PM »

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Larkiyon k zindagi ka kala panna samne rakhne ki koshish thi Shikha ji.
I am not that good writer dear... just i am learning to write... Usual Smile

Thanks thank you very much for reading and praising.. :D


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« Reply #8 on: December 24, 2007, 07:17:01 PM »

Roja

Kitna achcha likha hai...shabd nahi hain mere paas kehne ko !

Roshu ne aaj is thread ka zikr kiya to pata chala !

Thanks Roshu and thanks to you Roja for writing so boldly !

Shabash !


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« Reply #9 on: December 26, 2007, 07:34:40 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on December 24, 2007, 07:17:01 PM

Roja

Kitna achcha likha hai...shabd nahi hain mere paas kehne ko !

Roshu ne aaj is thread ka zikr kiya to pata chala !

Thanks Roshu and thanks to you Roja for writing so boldly !

Shabash !

Thank you very much for your valuable comments Raj ji.
Kuch kehne ki koshish ki thi. Aapko pasand aaya hai.
Thank you once again.


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« Reply #10 on: December 26, 2007, 10:38:33 PM »

single word for this poem is "mindblowing"

Roja keep it up & keep writing


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« Reply #11 on: December 27, 2007, 12:21:29 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB...KOI POST AISE HOTE HAI,CHAAHE KITNI BHI TAREEF KI JAAYE,KAM PAD JAATI HAI..BAHUT HI KHOOB....


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« Reply #12 on: February 24, 2008, 08:10:07 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on December 27, 2007, 12:21:29 PM

BAHUT KHOOB...KOI POST AISE HOTE HAI,CHAAHE KITNI BHI TAREEF KI JAAYE,KAM PAD JAATI HAI..BAHUT HI KHOOB....

Thank you Khwaish ji.. Aate rehna.


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